Her breath came in jagged bursts, her heart constricting in her chest, yanking her from slumber in the dead of night. This was all too familiar.
The nightmare, relentless and haunting, pounded at her mind with an ordeal she desperately wished to forget.
A monster that clung to her tenaciously, refusing to fade away. It wasn’t the first time, and regrettably, it wouldn’t be the last.
Really?
Can't Luna enter dreams and stop nightmare's?
How is that even possible? It's a dream, is Twilight's dreams taking place in a different dimension or something?
Didn't Twilight do most of the work saving the Crystal Empire? And Spike gets all the credit while Twilight gets nightmares?
Isn't the name "Owlicious"?
Could be possible.
"leave Twilight's home" makes more sense then "leave the Twilight's home".
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Sure! Thanks, I hadn't noticed. I think autocorrect messed up the sentence!
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Thank you for always helping me with corrections! I really appreciate it.
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No problem.
This story suddenly just reminded me of "beauty and the beast".
I'm now so confused.
... Hold on, Twilight should be a Unicorn, did Twilight ascend?
A dream in a dream... That shouldn't even be possible. Can Luna enter dreams within dreams?
Nothing is making sense right now. I originally thought it was the thing we kept seeing that was Sombra.
Maybe speak to Celestia and Luna. Have a little tea time.
I still recommend speaking with both Princesses.
*Sombra
Now I have even more questions, but I'm hoping they'll be answered without me asking a single one.
Finally, about time.
Twilight could also mentioned the beast, and that she saw Sombra? Multiple times?
... Dang it Zecora.
Hooves.
His foreleg.
Well that's cruel.
Ah, that explains the personalities.
Well, besides the creature, though that could simply be because he simply didn't want to talk.
Oh, a prequel. That's new.
Huh... Interesting. Quastion, how many Sombra's are talking to each other? I believe it's 4? Plus the 5th one who hasn't talked.
... Wait, are you telling me that Twilight went through worse before she started remembering the dreams and nightmares? Wow, that's messed up.
But it's probably not even half as bad as what I seen happen to Twilight on this site, but then again... I guess it depends what Twilight went through, on the plus side she doesn't remember any of it but wouldn't it have given her PTSD without her knowing why?
Well atleast questions are finally being answered.
Well that's not nice.
So that explains why she was so tired in that once chapter despite getting 11 hours of sleep.
*His
Wait but wasn't there more dialogue here? Sombra tried to get closer but Twilight says "I said stay away" or something.
This explains a lot.
I'm excited to read more.
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Thanks for correcting me! 😊
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Oh, right! She isn't a princess here, My mistakes! I'll correct them, thanks!
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Hi, yes!. :) There were more dialogues, but since it's only a chapter explaining his point of view of the situation, I wanted to shorten it a bit :))). Glad you liked the chapter!
Hmm, first two fics, featuring the same ship. Something tells me you have a preferred ship
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You caught me! I’m definitely a fan of this ship
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Not my favorite ship or even my favorite with Sombra, but I like it better than the other main six with him, never care much for Fluttershy X Sombra or Sombra X Rarity at all. The other ones just made no damn sense.
I've been wondering how they could enter dreams.
I don't think they have a choice. But I would like an apology for putting Twilight through hell.
Pretty sure that has been established the second Twilight turned back for Sombra, which was like 5 chapters ago or something?
Really?
There we go.
Does the fragment have to be alive? I suggest trying to kill the fragment and then just force it to merge with the other Sombra. Sombra should have a body again AND he won't be some evil Tyrant anymore.
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Fragment fight! Best frag wins control of the united whole!
Well this is depressing.
Yes but I'm also curious about the 4th wall break.
.... Are you fricking kidding me right now.
What?
I enjoyed the story, would have loved to see Twilight's friends reactions though.
Huge fan of the story! It's a nice ending with a hopeful tone - would love to see it continued a bit but it's fine enough that a sequel ain't fully necessary if ya don't want it
Keep up the good work!
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Yup, but this made me snort and chased away the depressing vibes.
please make a part 2 i have to know what happenss next and how eveyone reacts to this shipping
that was such a cute story! I enjoyed every chapter of it!