Every story has their beginnings, each hero, villian and survivor has an origin story.
This story is about Rachel Lockhart.
Unable to withstand the torments of her abusive father, fifteen year old Rachel embarks a journey to escape her old life when news of a Portal to an alternate universe suddenly opens. Rather than allowing her father having the pleasure to hurt her, she runs away, hopefully for the final time.
How would this new, alien like world full of anthromorphic ponies, Dragons, races she never fathom about take when a human teenager walks among them?
This story details her process through the Two Hundred Application Trials and finding her new family.
Chapters (12)
I'm already hating her father's guts and badly wanna see him reap what he's done to Rachel, no TRUE father would ever treat their daughter like this.
Fantastic start by the way, keep the good work.
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She shoves his body in lava in https://www.fimfiction.net/story/514630/the-queen-of-the-dragonlord
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A very fitting punishment for all the years of pain, misery and suffering he caused Rachel to endure.
god, the guy's a monster
I guess an execution is in order or crucifixion. Stray to hell he goes.
Fucking finally, the bastard got his dews. Mmmh is it just me or is Brimestone and Lillysky suppose be the inverted scenario of Rachel and Damian (Yes my mind is making connections again. There is sometimes method to my madness.). Anyway good chapter. And for the Author note, cold war era (50's, 60's, 70's, 80's, early 90's) music best music. https://media.tenor.com/Q823-830Ri0AAAAM/christian-bale-american-psycho.gif
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nothing wrong with your method
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Brimstone is Rachel's real dad. Since the author mentioned he's remarried and Rachel's mom knew of Equestria made me think she's from there and Damian was her second husband.
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No her mother isn't from Equestria. Damian is her birth father but Brimstone is her real dad.
Mom had visions of Equestria, she ain't from it.
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ok
OK I kinda want to know how long will this be considering that is just the period before she ends up in equestria and meets spike
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Well it's the first seven years, I'm not sure just going with the flow
Ooo damnit, now I have to wait again. Aww 😞, great chapter though but there is something I must bring up. Why didn't Rachel get alcoholic to treat the wound. Yes, I know she's under a age but still she could have stolen some. Last thing shouldn't it be liable for in stead of reliable (I couldn't select the paragraph because it selects Warning instead). But all in all as I said great chapter. Can't wait for what comes next.
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It's complicated, less those see her bruised face , at least in her mind
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Oh ok
wow, nice first interaction there
Yeee very good, I wonder what will happen next. Hope she doesn't fuck it up. 🤞 'Ery nice
Hopefully they'll understand now why she tried to get into Equestria.
Jesus, that last part....
Multiversal counterparts.
Surprising how many times that's come up in the past two weeks
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Oh?
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Yup, lot of stories that use that trope lately
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Hmm guess I fell in it lmao
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Trust me you're fine, DATONETWIxDASHFAN tough... It's safe to say that 99% of those stories are theirs
whelp... please don't kill Brimstone, but please, also, do put the idiot father in a cast at least.
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Oh Brimstone is very much gonna be alive
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My going theory in "another pink Eldritch horror" is that Diane is the multiversal counterpart of Pinkie Pie from her universe just like it seems that Rachel and Lily are multiversal counterparts (think Twilight and Sci-Twi or the equestrian ponies in any of their human counterparts for a example) there are a few other stories where this could be somewhat relevant plot point but I can't think of any that I've recently read
wohoo Luna to the rescue
Spike's counterpart is protecting her cute knowing where it ends up
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No his counter part is a doggy lol but nice little foreshadowing for other story lol
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maybe his dad then (as in his dragon dad)
I believe you meant to say Cranky not Hanky when they were inside Pinkie Pie's dream, anyways great chapter!
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It was Cranky lmao I couldn't remember, thanks
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You're very welcome, no biggie even I couldn't remember and had to do a YouTube search for the episode he was in did I remembered his name. LOL
So is that brief description of the dragon what she would look like as a real dragon? (real vs. the pony/dragon hybrid she is in the main story)
Or maybe her mother's avatar?
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That's Runá well, a part of her soul in Rachel
Dragon dream Rachel: "This is my private domicile and I will be harassed, Bitch!"
Sorry had to do it.
Anyway I'm up to date with this story I stop reading it for a bit while wait for a new chapter. So great chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
yeah, she's getting in
a REAL father looks after his daughter and Brimstone is doing just that
Don't wanna be a "um actually" but the its not worser is more worse. Apart from that, happy to see Rachel is finally going to a better place what of her dad (the bastard) I wonder what he'll do or happen to him.
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You'll see