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there were no errors in chapter 1... I say they did good.
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Man you have Got a GOOD EYE!
but honestly? I really am not one to pick at grammar or errors
I just talk about the biggest ones
Most of the others will be Either ignored or fixed
Nice work!
I hope blue can figure out the S.A.T.S. spell soon
They might need it!
Okay, now I am caught up. Where do we go from here?
I like this story. I don't think it's bad. I'm looking forward to the new chapter. Please continue writing.
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