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The Force


Lets vibe together

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Comment posted by AvoidingFever17 deleted January 10th
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Comment posted by The Force deleted January 10th
Comment posted by Flora Blossom deleted January 10th

there were no errors in chapter 1... I say they did good.

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Man you have Got a GOOD EYE!
but honestly? I really am not one to pick at grammar or errors
I just talk about the biggest ones
Most of the others will be Either ignored or fixed

Comment posted by Resu deleted January 9th

Nice work!
I hope blue can figure out the S.A.T.S. spell soon
They might need it!

Okay, now I am caught up. Where do we go from here? :rainbowhuh:

I like this story. I don't think it's bad. I'm looking forward to the new chapter. Please continue writing.:twilightsmile:😍

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