At first glance, the mongoose is a rather unassuming little creature, but looks can be deceiving. When Octavia Melody rescues one from a raging river on a wet and stormy afternoon, she soon finds herself with a small furry companion that follows her wherever she goes. The grey mare isn't entirely sure what to think of her new little friend, but she soon learns that there's a lot more to a mongoose than just a cute face.
As someone who grew up listening to Rikki Tikki Tavi on a cassette tape, this was an absolute joy to read!
Jolly good little story, have a like! 😁👍
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Thank you! I remember reading the original story many years ago and enjoying it. I'm glad you enjoyed this one too!
Loved this story a lot, I remember watching the cartoon of Rikki Tikki Tavi back in middle school or maybe it was high school for English class, anyways this was an awesome read!
Great job!!
rikki tikki tavi man that beings back memories. if you move I strike if you do not move I strike
Echoing the others - boy does this bring back childhood memories.
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Thanks, I'm glad you all like the story!
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You're very welcome!
This is certainly a cute little story. The premise is creative, and while the plot is a bit predictable, it is perfectly fine for a short slice-of-life like this. I can't say this story is particularly outstanding, but it's solid, and I enjoyed reading it. Well done!
P.S. It doesn't bother me, but you should probably tag this story appropriately, given the animal violence it depicts, in case some stickler gets on your case about it.
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Thank you! This was just a cute slice-of-life story inspired by a random pun I thought of one day.
Good point actually, I'll add that tag.