• Member Since 23rd Sep, 2012
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Slingshot619


Age:14 Favorite pony: Rainbow Dash That's all you need to know.

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When Engineer opens a portal and the robots cross over, It's up to Scout and the team to defend Ponyville. This is the sequel to my fan fic Blur. If you haven't read it yet, I suggest you do.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 69 )

Pony vs Machine?

Fail name.

Mare VS Machine.

OH YEAH! YOU ROCK! woo whoo:ajsmug::pinkiehappy:

I have the suggestions for chapters!

The First wave (only use when the first big wave of robots pour throught the gates)
First War of Equestria (is when Equestria officially goes to war with machines, only use when Equestrian Soldiers came to help)
The Fat Machines (The first few Giant ones came through)
Mann and Ponies vs. machines (mane 6 and Blu battle the machines side by side)
The Final wave of the first beginning (The last wave... that was just begginning)

MAYBE: Visiting Mann co. (Is when the Mane 6 and BLUs are pushing back the robots through he gate and back into their metal factory, basically meeting the human world)

Wait....Medic works at a hospital?

I thought he lost his medical license....oh well.

Nice work with this. Pacing is a little quick, but I'm accustomed to it now.

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Well, Medigun in a new world where he can heal any injury except death, pretty sure they won't care too much:moustache:

two words: GIANT INCOMIIIING!

*looks at number of notifications* Well, that escalated quickly

I can all ready tell that this is gonna be a good story.

Robot heavy, OR Sentrybuster? Can't wait.

Sentry Buster!

More bots!

Robo-Heavy!

Giant Heavy!

Giant Soldier!

Anything!

THE SPIES ARE HERE!

(voice command): I think not.

*sap and stab*

YOU'VE KILLED ALL THE SPIES!

(voice command): YES.

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'Engineers, watch out for that Sentry Buster!'
'Another Sentry Buster has entered the arena!'

There's a GIANT SOLDIER on the FIRST WAVE !!!
this is gonna be awesome :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Everyone have your fanfic tour of duty tickets ready!

what happend to the soldier?

Respawn?... i think he respawned back in his base

as they say, many will come and go.

Maybe scout finnaly had awoken but buried alive lol...

K, this does not look good here, um...

:pinkiecrazy: Respawn or GTFO! :pinkiehappy:

:moustache: Keep up the good work my good sir.

I think that their is more to this then we think. i don't think scout is coming back BUT i do think a certin mare will have an insersting 9-10 months.

thats just my oppion.

Dear readers,
BLU Scout is dead. He won't be in the next chapter.:fluttercry::ajsleepy:

Back at 2fort...
Scout respawns and lies on a chair crying.:raritycry:

Hate to be the critic here, but you need to stop using him and she and so and so as your sentence starters. It kinda gets annoying after a while. :ajbemused:

should had a defribillator

of course he respawned...its not like anyone saw that coming

And I thought 20 second respawns were hell.

I hope red scout doesnt come and steal the BLU scout's rainbow dash

l;aunching dude fix it

1452082 For some reason i can actually see that happening :twilightoops:

Didn't you say the same thing on "Blur"....then started to write it again....

1460410 This is real. I am giving the story away.

You do realize no author on this site has the potential of writing this type of story better than you have.

I agree with Bookmaster, this will only work with your writing style

1460654 I concur, this story will be stuck in development hell if you stop now. The show must go on, no matter what you believe.

I agree with everybody here.Please continue the story.

Please continue the story...

Continue the story. we don't care if you don't post everday. just continue

Look ya gotta finish it. If yer need ideas ask yer readers.

As for me..... Continue on with the story! make people die and new others arive! theres no such thing as original member of the group!

so CONTINUE!

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