- Member Since 7th Jun, 2017
- offline last seen 1 hour ago
Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
Joined 7th Jun, 2017 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 7.2k words · 4.7k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 4.4k words · 2.3k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 1.5k words · 1.6k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 2.5k words · 2.3k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 10k words · 384 views
- The Elusive Badgerpony · 4.4k words · 83 26 · 4.3k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 6.5k words · 1.3k views
- Lighttone GryphonStar · 2.6k words · 59 10 · 1.3k views
Featured In1
Stats
Page generated in 0.118 seconds
Total duration
884 users online
835,379 hits today, 1,330,972 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
So like DC Comic's Warworld or Kang the Conquer's Chronopolis?
Really like this story, though now I kind of want an "in between" story that bridges Cornelius and Panna being split up to Panna and Chezka becoming friends and of the Amazonian tribe.
Also the Amazonian Tribe desperately needs males lol. They could become more powerful if they had Amazonian males with them, allowing them to pass down their genes and make the next generation strong and bigger (in all the right places
)
Cleaned? What?
Good story otherwise. Enjoyable.
No men, you are doom since no offspring
11959036
Good call! Can't remember what inspired the idea for me. (Possibly the Doctor Who story The War Games?)
11959062
Lol, true, although the queen probably thinks she's enough for the entire tribe, lol. Not sure I'll cover that section since some of that stuff is intended to be covered in Prisoners of War whenever it resumes.
11959095
Meant clenched, darn it, some things spellcheck doesn't catch, lol.
11959205
True, tough to constantly recruit new members!
11959220
Or maybe there isn't really any suitable male to actually be in charge of reproduction, after all of these warriors are very strong so they would need someone as strong as them.
Which I guess doesn't exist yet as otherwise some earth pony males could've been useful. While yes the Queen does think she's enough for the tribe, wink wink, maybe if the Hyper Stallion legend is more of a universal thing, she's also just waiting for a Hyper Stallion to appear lol.
Though again given the fact that it's an all female club, probably hope also that it's someone like her, wink wink.
11959376
Mostly the queen probably doesn't want to change the dynamic with males around.
11959383
Lol.
Well, considering what would happen to Amazonia in the backstory to PoW, maybe she would wish that Amazonia had some males so that they could've become stronger each generation.
Midnight: .-. ._.
11959390
Midnight would certainly be useful to pump up their numbers!
11959420
Indeed!
Sate Sate Sate.....
Very well, I am not such a fan of bestiality, but omitting that, I admit that the story is good and goes straight to the point of what it is and is set in a striking perspective and a world where Amazonians exist, it is interesting, although I think that There should have been more.... How to say it, more information about how Amazonian society works and showing through narration what the society is like and what its culture is (It is worth mentioning that it is your version so I am not picky, I understand There is something that you are going to like and that is what I would have liked to know, what was your version of how the Amazonians work)
That said, the story is great, (ignoring the fact that I don't like bestiality) it's quite entertaining.
I really appreciate you using Zafire and I really enjoyed your interpretation of my character. I really appreciate it.
I would have liked to know a little more about Panna or Chezka, I think you could have achieved it if you mentioned a little about his past in narration. or that between dialogues you would give us more of a look at what their personality is like, especially when they are extremely short stories, the author is required to use either the narration or the dialogue of characters to give them personality and tell the story of the characters.
But like I said, it's a great story. and I would have liked to know more about both characters.
That said, excellent work.
11960328
Glad I did Zafire okay.
This is technically a follow up to a pair of stories (Runner of the Plains for Chezka and Keepers of the Forest for Panna), so they're explored more there. Plus, more is explained and explored about them in Prisoners of War, where I eventually plan to have Zafire appear, so some things I've chosen to intentionally keep as a mystery, partially as not to contradict any future plans. Particularly since Prisoners of War is cowritten with NotaPonyPerson, and things are open to change whenever I send any chapter Zafire appears and he edits/expands it before I finalize the chapter.
So does Chezka and Panna unlock their potentials eventually considering they're the last of the Amazonians left by the time PoW arrives?
Will we see another sequel? This was hot! We need more Zafire / Chezka and Panna / Amazonian stories!
makes me a bit sad how Fiery makes their lives miserable, especially when he becomes more unstable
11960359
That will depend on whether Nota likes my pitch when that chapter comes, but the set up is foreshadowed!
A sequel isn't impossible, but of course I want to explore some other underused OCs too, and sadly there's not a huge amount of room to develop Panna and Chezka in meaningful ways between here and PoW. The main change is Panna's more somber in PoW and Chezka burning with a barely restrained temper at times in PoW, due to their current situation.
Indeed, everything that's gone wrong in PoW has led to a bad chain reaction for nearly everyone, even many of the villains!
11960365
Yeah, I hope that next story would be about how Ashen got the ship, probably through a lewd bet XD
But yeah, everyone's lives got upended by PoW, and most likely none of them will survive as they're consumed by oblivion
Can't wait for the next story so that I can read it!!!!!!
11960368
Thanks! The Ashen Dunes story I realize will be much harder to write, especially if I try and portray a poker game (I know the basic rules but suck at it), which will be difficult for me to sell. Yeah, Ashen's personality is pretty different from mine, as he's intended to be smooth and charming, haha. I'm closer to a cross between characters like Danse Macabre/Shadow Scythe/Bellatrix Primadonna, but hopefully I can show his silver tongue and seductive, sly side!
11960374
You will do great. I know nothing about poker either XD