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Keep in mind that more characters will be intrinsic to the story itself, it's just that I had a limit and I didn't know which I would put in currently except Discord.

Good start a few speling error here and there but intersting story I enjoyed it

Not bad for a first chapter I guess we'll see where this goes

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Thank you for taking a look at my first chapter. I hope you enjoy what it will become and the story I'll tell.

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