This story is a sequel to This Is Not How I Expected My Week To Go
In Luna's absence, Equestria has advanced significantly, enough to leave Luna unsure of where she stands now as co ruler of Equestria. Don't even get her started on there being a third alicorn in the form of Princess Cadence. Celestia attempts to get her sister settled after being Nightmare Moon while Twilight, Sunset and the rest of the elements work to keep up with each other.
Cover art is done by my friend on discord.
Chapters (13)
Thanks for getting the first chapter to the second story up and running. Definitely liked the work going into the dialogue, characterization and future chapter set-up. Really liked the chat between Celestia and Luna given the latter's difficulty in adjusting to modern Equestria before the talk with Twinkleshine before shifting back to Twilight and the others back at Amethyst. The file on Twinkleshine toward the end was pretty good too.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
This story deserves more comments. And more upvotes. It's not perfect but it's entertaining.
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I'm glad you like it
Definitely did a wonderful job on the dialogues between Sunset and Silver and then Sunset and Wallflower.
On to the next chapter.
Again, you did a really good job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. The chat between Luna and Twinkleshine concerning their lives and some of the things that have changed over 1000 years makes a lot of sense, and then that discussion by Hard Hat. Forest Comet and Bricks concerning a plan by their client to get the Elements under her control and THEN shifting back to Luna and Twinkleshine playing "Super Mareio Brothers" were all great.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Again, I liked the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked Luna and Twinkleshine's discussion after they wrapped up their game and had an encounter and further talk with Celestia and Lemon Hearts. Also enjoyed Twilight and High Winds seeing Sunset turning down that bribe. The file on Lemon Hearts at the end was another great touch.
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
Bravery is not the lack of fear, it is doing something that is needed, despite the fear, I can imagine Spitfire saying that
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Well that's an interesting bit of world building to be dropping in here.
I was not prepared to encounter this.
Another well done chapter. Definitely appreciate the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely got some chuckles out of Spitfire's chat with Fleetfoot in the first half of the chapter as well as Spitfire's dialogue with the other Element Bearers in the second half before going into Fleetfoot's file at the very end.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Aww... Poor Silver Spoon
Another really well-done job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked Wallflower and Spitfire's interactions with Surprise as well as Sunset and Silverspeed's chat with each other and Silver Spoon. Also liked Surprise's file at the very end.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
There's a mobile game I didn't know about?
I have a feeling SLiver Spoon may get some respect for Sunset soon... call it gut instinct
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Definitely liked the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up in here. Definitely liked the chat at the beginning, especially Spike's point about ponies being afraid of him just because of his race. And then the gang breaking up that fight and then the chat between Silver and Diamond at the end.
On to the next chapter.
Another great job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up in here. REALLY appreciated the reactions to the fight Sunset had as well as Twilight's efforts to calm Sunset down when she was literally fighting mad (even if Twilight got socked for it, Sunset still showed enough appreciation to leave some aspirin. And then, of course, Silverspeed getting that information from one of the creeps that messed with Spoon before the aforementioned creep got arrested.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Two updates in one day? You're gonna spoil us.
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About to be three within the hour
Again, you did a good job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the exchanges at different points of the chapter - not just with Silver Zoom and Rapidfire, but also with Twilight and Watermelody, Sunset and Wallflower AND between Sunset, Spoon and the kidnappers. The file on Silver Zoom was also pretty good stuff.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Later, as Hard Hat and his fellow criminals are brought before Celestia...
Celestia: The lot of you shall simply be banished from Equestria if you tell me who put you up to this. If you do not, Luna shall handle giving you your punishment.
*Luna pulls an axe from the shadows*
Luna: Oh, do please stay silent. It has been ever so long since We could make TRAITORS like you pay for their crime.
I KNEW IT!
U called it
Another well done chapter with good dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked Sunset tearing into Spoon's remaining kidnappers as well as the dialogue between Soarin' and Surprise before Wallflower and Spoon talked to them. And then that talk at the end between Sunset, Silverspeed and Spoon.
On to the next chapter.
Yet another really well-done chapter with good dialogue, characterizations and general situation wrap-up. Appreciate the chat started by High Winds concerning most of the involved parties as well as Silverspeed reassuring Sunset toward the end.
REALLY good job on the epilogue of this story. Definitely liked the dialogues as the prisoners were being taken in and well as Twinkleshine pulling that "You're both equally fun" bit to end the argument. Also liked the discussion between Sunny Flare, Minuette, Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts before we got to Minuette's file at the end.
Hmmm. Another really good job on the dialogue here in the teaser for the next story in this series.
Luna: Guard, please take this *gives the guard a large axe*, and sharpen it in a place where the ponies in the jail will see it.
Guard: I shall have a nurse ready as well.
Luna: Whatever for?
Guard: This might cause some of the prisoners to faint from fright.
Luna: Good, you understand my plan perfectly.
Sunset, Twilight and High Winds should all be very suspicious of Hard Hat after the offer of 100 thousand bits.
Also Lemon's file makes no sense. If she knows so little magic how did she get into the School for Gifted Unicorns?
Sunset clearly has anger issues. She didn't have to be so aggressive to the waiter and she certainly should not have punched Twilight.
Should be Silver Spoon.