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Bad Dragon


I write so that one day I may finally stop writing and be free, but these damn new ideas keep finding ways into my brain. I need to write more to vent them out!

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Kirin’s village is aflame, again. Ever since the silence was broken, Kirins turning into their Nirik form keep burning down defensless wooden buildings.

Since Autumn Blaze failed in her pursuit of a better future, Kirin’s leader Rain Shine takes matters into her own hooves. The shipment of fire-resistant furtight bodysuits she ordered has just arrived. All that’s left to do is to convince Autumn Blaze to put one on.


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Rain Shine levitated a gag, strapped in Autumn Blaze’s muzzle and snapped the lock behind her head.

Well, that escalated quickly.

I went in to see the requirements for the contest, and I'm ending up going to write a sequel to your story.

11958789 I'm glad to hear it. You honor me.

Yo'know, I start to believe that you have a thing for furtight bodysuits. In reality, these suits would work in winter, but in summer, the wearer could die from hyperthermia, dehydration, and electrolyte-imbalance —— ¡BRAWNDO: THE THIRST MUTILATOR: it's got what plants crave!:

I like the Interrobang you use.

11960519 We are the majority.
https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/2HP355F
61% of people say that skintight clothes are a fetish they have.

What really dehydrates you is bursting into flames. Furtight clothes were a lesser evil, though Autumn Blaze would note agree.

The interrobang was a tribute to you and your cause.

I guess I’ll just have to make it permanent.

Any chances for an epilogue ? I cant get enough of bondage/latex stories, specially when they go in this direction.

11961560 There is a sequel to this story: Incendiary ignorance

Turns out that the bodysuits are, indeed, permanent.

As for what happened to Autumn Blaze, I guess you'll have to use your imagination. Or you can write your own epilogue.

Why was the leader the last into the suit?
and why didn't she send the measurements with these suits?

12041263 The leader first takes care of her people, before she takes care of herself.

As for the measurements, the technology of clothes was beyond them. Only the one called Rarity has mastered it. And besides, everykirin could just choose their size from the pile. Except for the last one who couldn't choose anything but the one that was left.

12041685
Why does it feel as if; "Take care of" has a very different meaning here?
This should be compaired with how the Captain of the ship is the last to leave, but she has to know what she is subjecting the others to? (which in this case, she doesn't even care)

She could not have asked, and Rarity refused to explain`?

Sorry, but it just feels as if she had been singled out in this case.. (kind of vindictive, if you ask?)
She could have been sent to the Dragons? (just curious..)

12041996 She did the same thing in canon. She sacrificed the voices of all her people. And when one went against the grain, she banished her.

That's just who she is. She's not a great person, but some Kirins are just like that. It can't be helped.

Just like in canon, she'll get her way again.

12042024
Yes, I guess she was ..

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