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Let's see where it goes
Ok I’m intrigued to where this goes.
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Should I add the Rainbooms and Dazzlings in the harem?
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That is all up to you
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Ok, btw like the cover, I was kinda inspired by your Dragon Knight story for it
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I could tell
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Ps RIP Brandon Lee since that's his version of the Crow for the picture
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Think we will see Smolder, Ocellus and Ember in the harem as well?
I would at least hope that there would be some very BAD Karma against Twilight, the other Rainbooms, and the rest of the students/teachers/citizens for being horrible jerks for poor Spike for little to no reason.
Seriously, what is with these jerks for boarding the "Bullying Spike" train, he hasn't done anything bad to y'all jerks!?
It's no wonder WHY they would all probably and eventually go to Hell, even the Rainbooms too because of how strict Heaven is in this verse.
And would it be very ironic that the characters from Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel that despite being from Hell, or wouldn't hesitate to kill, do other crimes, or curse a lot, etc...
They have at least would treated Spike a whole lot better than even the Rainbooms, students/teachers, and the other bad citizens.
That will give a massive moral blow to them all, by finally realizing that even some particular Demons/Sinners from Hell are morally better than them concerning about Spike.
I hope this will make them feel like terrible examples for human beings by showing that even some Demons/Sinners are morally better than them concerning about Spike's situation.
Do you like this hypothetical scenario I put in?
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Not unless they finally pay for their previous actions against Spike, and at least TRY to earn forgiveness for a long while, instead of saying "I'm sorry" without working for it.
Actions speak louder than words after all.
And I highly doubt that Spike will easily forgive them or even downright "love" them back because of what happened to him, UNLESS they really, REALLY EARN IT!!!
You get what I'm saying?
Oh dear, Spike's been drugged and offered up in a satanic ritual. He just can't catch a break.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

sweet chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Think we will see some shenanigans from Helluva Boss characters too?
Why are you making this story a harem?
Quite cool that Spike met I.M.P. now.
Kind of wonder how Ember and Smolder look in this AU too?
"But the thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies"=Lawkeeper Equity mlp ace attorney EOJ
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Apparently, wildcard25 had been blocked by you as he was enjoying your story The Dragon Sinner he didn't say anything bad in his comments, now suddenly he can't leave a comment or anything for your story
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter

The Imps are on the case
Spike definitely partied hard in hell
Spike's now a celebrity in hell, though not with the kind of publicity he wanted. And the Imps now see who were responsible for his death and will see who else was behind it.
I KNEW that the guys ( Aka the "Boyfriends" ) are somewhat fishy from last chapter, to downright being SUS concerning with Spike's unusual death as a random sacrifice.
But, I would NEVER thought that they would also be Satan Cultists!!!!!?????
I wonder how the "Superhero" Team ( Aka The Girls and "Girlfriends". ) feel about all of that!?
I hope that they'll be disgusted with themselves, and learn a dark lesson on you really don't know your "boyfriends" and other students very well.
P.S. And I find it ironic that Spike FINALLY has some recognition or fans, but it's from the Sinners, Succubi, Hellhounds, and Imps from Hell of all things.
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"But the thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies"-Lawkeper Equity Mlp Ace Attorney EOJ
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

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I sadly never watch this MLP/Ace Attorney crossover series. And while I do understand the quote and the meaning behind it.
Can you explicitly tell me why are those 2 videos important, while putting the spoiler tag on it?
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the first video there's truth to her words sweetie belle had information that could help scooterloo but she chose to stay quiet that's betrayal and cowardice in the face of the enemy if i had information that could save someone i would come forward not stay quiet
the second video my grandpa said "when the bullets start flying that's when you know who your real friends are" turning page reminds me of myself i stand by my friends to the very end a true friend stand with you not throw you to the wolves
Please Give an end to the ultimate enemy saga It's one of my favourite. I just want to find out What
Will happen
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Thanks for the information, and you make good advice on who's your real friends are in the middle of a battlefield, fight, or life and death situations.
Happy Halloween, and Spike dodged a bullet with that reporter wanting to interview him.
Why did you just... Stop responding to comments on this story?
LOVE this story, am so looking forward to Spike getting some well deserved justice in the form of revenge...
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What do you mean?
"Moth Demon"? We do realize that she is or WAS once a Exorcist.
I just hope there's some Bad Karma for tricking and pissing off super-powered people that can really end you all quite easily.
That the Rainbooms also gets a turn beating them down too. Like Powerpuff Girl's beatdown style.
I'm still a bit surprised that Spike is becoming popular ( In Hell of all places. ) for once, just because of him being drunk?
But, other than that. I ain't complaining for the results because Spike needs it.
Just wait until Sir Pentious as a Redeemed finally shows up with Emily one day, and you will eat your own words.
I was also hoping that once Spike finally becomes the fighting badass that he is later on, that he would get some little revenge at Katie for almost attacking him earlier.
I like that Charlie has a backbone after Season 1. Good progress.
Spike will remember this kindness and generosity.
Unlike certain "Superheroes".
I just hope that Spike remembers that once they're brutally dead, they would eventually go to Hell and Spike and the others has to take care of them once again.
I would like to know if there's actually any angelic torture devices?
Like CBT ( COCK-and-BALLS Torture. ) onto the eventual EX-boyfriends, just so they will NEVER use their tools ever again.
You know what I'm talking about, LoganRyder?
Anyways, Happy Halloween!!!!!!!! 👻 🎃
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

I think there's a hint of sympathy here between Spike and Charlie, I really like that! I love this series because it is not afraid to show violence, but at the same time it has its limits and I really hope that you continue in the same spirit and it will not be a clopfic, which I absolutely hate. I'm interested to know what Alastor has in store for him and that it won't interfere with Charlie's plans to redeem the demons. I really, really want to see the final season battle, how you show Spike there and how I hope he can travel to the living world unhindered. I would like to see not only revenge on those scumbags, but also on others who deserve punishment.
Curious on how Smolder and Ocellus might look in this AU if Spike meets them.
Same with Ember too?
Spike knows he's a hybrid now, But now he knows who killed him and he is not happy. And the girls also are aware of their boyfriends suspicions
"Trust is a very fragile thing it takes years to seconds to break an eternity to repair that betrayal can last a lifetime"-Lawkeeper Equity Mlp Ace Attorney EOJ
great chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter

Heads..... are about to fucking ROLL
also, l utterly LOVE how you are portraying the Hellzbin character, have really captured the kindness of Charlie, the playfulness of Angel, and the wholesomeness that is Moxxie and Millie... heck even Blitzo seems more mature.... love your story, you have a very bright future ahead of you as writer.
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Thanks, I'm a BIG fan of Vivziepop and her work and I'm willing to take writing commissions.
Sorry Pinkie, but he's in on it too. You just didn't notice until it's too late.
I know that the girls will rightfully be totally disgusted with their boyfriends for being "murderers", but also being associated with that kind of cult.

Then what about Cheese Sandwich, Caramel, and Snip/Snails?
You said that there also in on this, but not part of the nasty demonic cult?
It's nice to know that this is set after the recent episodes and shorts that come up a while ago, and probably including the "Halloween" Special Episode with the haunted hotel.
At least that's a nice bonus for freely visiting/traveling the other Rings, instead of staying in Pride like the rest of the Sinners.
I also hope that you remember what I said, suggesting of having Spike eventually get Heavenly Weapons and possible Torture Devices of his own, once he finally takes care of them all, and they all get sent to Hell eventually.
Possibly finding some badass Heavenly-Metal Twin Pistols like Red Hood/Arkham Knight, Dante ( DMC ) or Alucard.
Any kinds of Shotguns/Saw-Off Shotgun, Plasma-Type Gun/Rifle, and/or the BFG-type of Weapon like with the Doom Slayer/Doom Guy.
Sniper Rifle's like from Sniper Elite/Zombie Army and Sniper: Ghost Warrior Series'.
And a Cutting-edge Sword/Katana/The Crucible like with Dante/Virgil ( DMC ), Doom Slayer/Doom Guy, Ghostrunner 1-2 Games , and Raiden/Jack the Ripper and Jetstream Sam from Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance.
Spike's really lost it and is ready to go on a warpath with IMP backing him up. And it's nice hells girls are starting to fall him him, even Vaggie willing to share Charlie with him. I can't wait to see the chaos they bring to the dance
This is gonna be a helluva part for sure.
Awesome that (Goetia) Octavia and Loona are falling for Spike
great chapter mate spike going to bring fire and brimstone to those who wrong him cant wait for the next chapter

vaggie is caretaker and soldier through and through she reminds me of my sweetheart
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yeah his vengeance is going to be like olga of kiev you ever heard of olga of keiv and her vengeance for her husband
And the slaughter has begun with at least Snips, Snails, Lightning Dust, and Gilda dead. Now they're going after the boyfriends