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Ok I’m intrigued to where this goes.

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Should I add the Rainbooms and Dazzlings in the harem?

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Ok, btw like the cover, I was kinda inspired by your Dragon Knight story for it

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Ps RIP Brandon Lee since that's his version of the Crow for the picture

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Think we will see Smolder, Ocellus and Ember in the harem as well?

I would at least hope that there would be some very BAD Karma against Twilight, the other Rainbooms, and the rest of the students/teachers/citizens for being horrible jerks for poor Spike for little to no reason.

Seriously, what is with these jerks for boarding the "Bullying Spike" train, he hasn't done anything bad to y'all jerks!?

It's no wonder WHY they would all probably and eventually go to Hell, even the Rainbooms too because of how strict Heaven is in this verse.


And would it be very ironic that the characters from Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel that despite being from Hell, or wouldn't hesitate to kill, do other crimes, or curse a lot, etc...

They have at least would treated Spike a whole lot better than even the Rainbooms, students/teachers, and the other bad citizens.


That will give a massive moral blow to them all, by finally realizing that even some particular Demons/Sinners from Hell are morally better than them concerning about Spike.


I hope this will make them feel like terrible examples for human beings by showing that even some Demons/Sinners are morally better than them concerning about Spike's situation. :pinkiecrazy:

Do you like this hypothetical scenario I put in?


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Not unless they finally pay for their previous actions against Spike, and at least TRY to earn forgiveness for a long while, instead of saying "I'm sorry" without working for it.

Actions speak louder than words after all.

And I highly doubt that Spike will easily forgive them or even downright "love" them back because of what happened to him, UNLESS they really, REALLY EARN IT!!!

You get what I'm saying?

Oh dear, Spike's been drugged and offered up in a satanic ritual. He just can't catch a break.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

sweet chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Think we will see some shenanigans from Helluva Boss characters too?

Why are you making this story a harem?

Quite cool that Spike met I.M.P. now.

Kind of wonder how Ember and Smolder look in this AU too?

"But the thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies"=Lawkeeper Equity mlp ace attorney EOJ

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Apparently, wildcard25 had been blocked by you as he was enjoying your story The Dragon Sinner he didn't say anything bad in his comments, now suddenly he can't leave a comment or anything for your story

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

The Imps are on the case

Spike definitely partied hard in hell

Spike's now a celebrity in hell, though not with the kind of publicity he wanted. And the Imps now see who were responsible for his death and will see who else was behind it.

The two male imps looked and quickly hid inside of a bush and saw Flash Sentry and Cheese Sandwich conversing and silently pursued....

The two boys meanwhile spoke to each other and made sure to keep it quiet.

"You think anybody will know?" Cheese Sandwich asked

"Don't worry, nobody will mourn the little runt. Pretty sure Spook's parents or Twi didn't even cared when they showed up for his funeral the other day." Flash said condescendingly.

"Flash, that's cold." Cheese said in shock.

"Hey, you were in on it dumbass, and as far as I know, nobody cares. Come on, let's go see our girls." Flash said with indifference.

The imps hearing this conversation were left in shock and disgust. Even Blitzo was appalled upon hearing Flash's disregard for his acts toward Spike.

"Spook? Runt? That blue haired limp dick is no doubt in on this." Blitzo concluded

"I agree, let's follow those varmints and SKIN EM!" Millie said with a sadistic toothy frown as her eyes flared red with rage.

'Now honey, let's see what else we find, from what that bastard said, there might more then just him involved." Moxxie interjected

Blitzo added "Exactly, let's keep following, and make sure to not be seen."

The imps silently made their way to the school and continued their school.

"Just as long as her, her friends and anybody else don't suspect us, Flash, Gilda, Lightning Dust, Snips and Snails, it'll all be worth it. Come on, the others are waiting and we gotta get planning on what to do for the Fall Formal." Soarin said.

The imps overheard and saw the two boys leave the meanwhile made sure to not be seen. They slowly moved up the vents to further investigate.

"Well, that settles it, we better keep seeing what those two shitstains are up to." Blitzo said

"And who else is part of Spike's death." Moxxie added.

The imps followed and continued crawling in the vents, trying to make sure they would not be noticed.....

I KNEW that the guys ( Aka the "Boyfriends" ) are somewhat fishy from last chapter, to downright being SUS concerning with Spike's unusual death as a random sacrifice.

But, I would NEVER thought that they would also be Satan Cultists!!!!!?????

I wonder how the "Superhero" Team ( Aka The Girls and "Girlfriends". ) feel about all of that!?

I hope that they'll be disgusted with themselves, and learn a dark lesson on you really don't know your "boyfriends" and other students very well.


P.S. And I find it ironic that Spike FINALLY has some recognition or fans, but it's from the Sinners, Succubi, Hellhounds, and Imps from Hell of all things.

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"But the thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies"-Lawkeper Equity Mlp Ace Attorney EOJ

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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I sadly never watch this MLP/Ace Attorney crossover series. And while I do understand the quote and the meaning behind it.

Can you explicitly tell me why are those 2 videos important, while putting the spoiler tag on it?

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the first video there's truth to her words sweetie belle had information that could help scooterloo but she chose to stay quiet that's betrayal and cowardice in the face of the enemy if i had information that could save someone i would come forward not stay quiet
the second video my grandpa said "when the bullets start flying that's when you know who your real friends are" turning page reminds me of myself i stand by my friends to the very end a true friend stand with you not throw you to the wolves

Please Give an end to the ultimate enemy saga It's one of my favourite. I just want to find out What
Will happen

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Thanks for the information, and you make good advice on who's your real friends are in the middle of a battlefield, fight, or life and death situations.

Happy Halloween, and Spike dodged a bullet with that reporter wanting to interview him.

Why did you just... Stop responding to comments on this story?

LOVE this story, am so looking forward to Spike getting some well deserved justice in the form of revenge...

Vaggie only gave a look of sympathy to Spike, especially after he told her the neglect he went through. As Spike only looked on the ground in grief, he felt something hold him.....it was Vaggie......the moth demon was hugging him.

"Moth Demon"? We do realize that she is or WAS once a Exorcist.

'And the way we tricked those superhero girlfriends of you two, Flash, Trenderhoof, Caramel, Sandalwood and Timber Spruce into ignoring him with that fake text was a genius idea." Gilda added

I just hope there's some Bad Karma for tricking and pissing off super-powered people that can really end you all quite easily.

That the Rainbooms also gets a turn beating them down too. Like Powerpuff Girl's beatdown style. :pinkiecrazy:

She even showed the video of Spike partying, with views surprisingly increasing and more likes and comments coming in the comment section.

I'm still a bit surprised that Spike is becoming popular ( In Hell of all places. ) for once, just because of him being drunk?

But, other than that. I ain't complaining for the results because Spike needs it.

"Did your flat ass even prove if redemption is even possible bitch?" Katie Killjoy said in mockery.

Just wait until Sir Pentious as a Redeemed finally shows up with Emily one day, and you will eat your own words.

The moment Spike said the b-word to her, this angered the news demon and she attacked Spike, who tried to dodge and block but she strangled him and was about to break his body more until Vaggie used her spear to knock her back and Charlie had furiously whacked her in the face with a golden pitchfork and her demon form had shown fully.

I was also hoping that once Spike finally becomes the fighting badass that he is later on, that he would get some little revenge at Katie for almost attacking him earlier.

Grabbing Katie by her shirt, Charlie made her look in her eyes and said in a demonic tone of her voice.

"Take your annoying, lying, hypocritical ass out of my hotel AND GET OUT!"

I like that Charlie has a backbone after Season 1. Good progress.

She then threw Katie out a window and after she did so, she returned to normal. Spike was left shocked as Charlie and Vaggie went over to him. Spike had a few bruises and a cut lip but was ok for the most part.

Spike will remember this kindness and generosity.

Unlike certain "Superheroes". :ajbemused:

Happy Halloween! Expect the bloody Halloween revenge chapter soon!

I just hope that Spike remembers that once they're brutally dead, they would eventually go to Hell and Spike and the others has to take care of them once again.

I would like to know if there's actually any angelic torture devices? :pinkiecrazy:

Like CBT ( COCK-and-BALLS Torture. ) onto the eventual EX-boyfriends, just so they will NEVER use their tools ever again. :pinkiecrazy:


You know what I'm talking about, LoganRyder?

Anyways, Happy Halloween!!!!!!!! 👻 🎃

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Spike and Charlie looked at each other and blushed and shook of their respective embarrassments and Vaggie said

I think there's a hint of sympathy here between Spike and Charlie, I really like that! I love this series because it is not afraid to show violence, but at the same time it has its limits and I really hope that you continue in the same spirit and it will not be a clopfic, which I absolutely hate. I'm interested to know what Alastor has in store for him and that it won't interfere with Charlie's plans to redeem the demons. I really, really want to see the final season battle, how you show Spike there and how I hope he can travel to the living world unhindered. I would like to see not only revenge on those scumbags, but also on others who deserve punishment.

Curious on how Smolder and Ocellus might look in this AU if Spike meets them.
Same with Ember too?

Spike knows he's a hybrid now, But now he knows who killed him and he is not happy. And the girls also are aware of their boyfriends suspicions

"Trust is a very fragile thing it takes years to seconds to break an eternity to repair that betrayal can last a lifetime"-Lawkeeper Equity Mlp Ace Attorney EOJ

great chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Heads..... are about to fucking ROLL

also, l utterly LOVE how you are portraying the Hellzbin character, have really captured the kindness of Charlie, the playfulness of Angel, and the wholesomeness that is Moxxie and Millie... heck even Blitzo seems more mature.... love your story, you have a very bright future ahead of you as writer.

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Thanks, I'm a BIG fan of Vivziepop and her work and I'm willing to take writing commissions.

"I don't know AJ, Me and Cheese were together and we didn't see anything sus or creepy." Pinkie Pie refuted in defense.

Sorry Pinkie, but he's in on it too. You just didn't notice until it's too late.

As they searched, Sunset noticed something dripping from the wall. She used her powers to create some light and saw it was a bloody pentagram, which dripped blood on the ground.

"Whoa! What the heck?" Sunset said upon seeing the symbol.

"A pentagram?" Twilight said.

"Those symbols that are associated with demon rituals?" Applejack asked

"Yeah, but why would it be here?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Hey! Look at this." Pinkie pointed.

They looked and saw it was a phone. Twilight looked and gave a look of recognition.

"Wait, a phone?" Twilight said observing the bag.

"Why would somebody leave their phone here?" Fluttershy asked.

The looked at the phone and it showed a text message to an unknown number saying:

WE DID IT.

DO THEY KNOW????

NO. WE GOT HIM.

The girls were left surprised and shocked at the messages and looked at one another.

"Who could've sent this?" Rarity asked.

"I dunno, but if there's one thing I know now, this is evidence." Sunset concluded.

The girls then headed out the building....

I know that the girls will rightfully be totally disgusted with their boyfriends for being "murderers", but also being associated with that kind of cult. :twilightangry2: :pinkiesick:

Entry 12:
Spike Sparkle: The worthless green haired rat that had been adopted by my girlfriend Twilight Sparkle's family, I couldn't let that little brat be near her or her friends, especially given how they were the most popular students in Canterlot High. We made a pact....a BLOOD pact that not only would we be with each other and get closer to them, but we would also rid ourselves of anything that got in our way, especially that inferior little boy. Now that he is dead with the use of a dagger Flash took from some pawn shop, we will succeed......

Flash Sentry, Timber Spruce, Gilda, Lightning Dust, Trenderhoof, Sandalwood and Soarin.

Then what about Cheese Sandwich, Caramel, and Snip/Snails?

You said that there also in on this, but not part of the nasty demonic cult?

"Maybe we should take everything and show it to Stolas." Millie suggested.

"Are you sure? We....aren't together anymore. And i'm pretty sure he doesn't want anything to do with ME anyway." Blitzo struggled to say.

"It's better then nothing sir." Moxxie retorted.

Blitzo, despite his feelings, nodded and took the objects in the room as Millie and Moxxie took photos as further evidence before Blitzo used the Asmodean Crystal to head back to Hell.

It's nice to know that this is set after the recent episodes and shorts that come up a while ago, and probably including the "Halloween" Special Episode with the haunted hotel.

"Hello young one, I am Stolas, Prince of the Ars Goetia and father of Octavia. Blitz had shown me the dagger that had killed you and safe to say from this dagger......your not full demon, only half." Stolas said

"What?" Spike asked confused

"The dagger that pierced your body, from what Blitzo told me, is the Dagger of Malebolgia, a ruler of Hell who had centuries ago died from one of the people who took his deal. The photos I was shown by these other two imps show that the ritual that led to your death made you not a sinner, but a hybrid. In fact the pentagram that your were tied on may have glowed red, but your soul is still in you due to your pure and selfless deeds. If I remember correctly this means you have all the strengths of a demon but none of their weaknesses except for possible heavenly weapons." Stolas explained.

"So....I'm half human, half demon?" Spike asked in disbelief.

Stolas nodded and continued.

"Correct, since you are an innocent soul, not a sinner. Plus the pentagram on your chest not only links you to Hell indefinitely, but also allows you to travel across each of the rings."

At least that's a nice bonus for freely visiting/traveling the other Rings, instead of staying in Pride like the rest of the Sinners.

Spike absorbed this information and asked the very question that lingered in his mind.

"Ok, but who did this to me though?" Spike asked

Moxxie and Millie gave looks of reluctance but showed the book to Spike, he read it and upon seeing his name on the bottom, he gave a wide eyed look and only fell on his knees, dropping the book on the ground. This left the others surprised as Spike breathed heavily.

"Spike, you ok honey?" Millie asked.

The others looked in concern until Spike only continued to remember all the times he had been bullied, neglected, abused, left behind or worse. Now reaching his breaking point, Spike got up and left the hotel.

'Spike?! Where are you going?!" Charlie said to the leaving teen.

Spike however didn't listen and said nothing, only exiting the hotel in a huff......

I also hope that you remember what I said, suggesting of having Spike eventually get Heavenly Weapons and possible Torture Devices of his own, once he finally takes care of them all, and they all get sent to Hell eventually.

Possibly finding some badass Heavenly-Metal Twin Pistols like Red Hood/Arkham Knight, Dante ( DMC ) or Alucard.

Any kinds of Shotguns/Saw-Off Shotgun, Plasma-Type Gun/Rifle, and/or the BFG-type of Weapon like with the Doom Slayer/Doom Guy.

Sniper Rifle's like from Sniper Elite/Zombie Army and Sniper: Ghost Warrior Series'.

And a Cutting-edge Sword/Katana/The Crucible like with Dante/Virgil ( DMC ), Doom Slayer/Doom Guy, Ghostrunner 1-2 Games , and Raiden/Jack the Ripper and Jetstream Sam from Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance.

Spike's really lost it and is ready to go on a warpath with IMP backing him up. And it's nice hells girls are starting to fall him him, even Vaggie willing to share Charlie with him. I can't wait to see the chaos they bring to the dance

This is gonna be a helluva part for sure.

Awesome that (Goetia) Octavia and Loona are falling for Spike

great chapter mate spike going to bring fire and brimstone to those who wrong him cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

vaggie is caretaker and soldier through and through she reminds me of my sweetheart

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yeah his vengeance is going to be like olga of kiev you ever heard of olga of keiv and her vengeance for her husband

And the slaughter has begun with at least Snips, Snails, Lightning Dust, and Gilda dead. Now they're going after the boyfriends

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