This story is a sequel to The Magic In Us
Additional Character Tags: Cadence, Thunder Flap, Original Character, Opaline Arcana, Luster Dawn
Eight months after the whole changeling nightmare with Queen Vespula, Pipp and Hitch believe they can finally live their normal day-to-day life in peace, only to receive a mysterious letter from the Queen of a long-forgotten kingdom that makes them wonder if they're really their own ponies, or a reflection of the past.
Flurryheart finally starts to accept what happened in her past, but when two royal ponies show up that remind her all too much of it, she wonders if she really has moved on, or if she simply buried it for all these years.
Wanna see how it all began? The link to the first two stories are below ⬇
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/557751/a-perfect-pitch
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/559958/royalty-before-family
I'm glad I could help
Nice!
Interesante comienzo, es bastante intrigante
Oh my goodness, it's princess flurry heart! I can't believe that she survived for all these moons and I can't believe that the g5 characters found one of the lost legends of the old Equestria
well that cant end well
Niños, no acepten dulces de desconocidos, o en este caso cutie marks
Como que la historia esta en pausa?🥺
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I write as inspiration comes, and at the moment, it coming from two different places. I'm sure it won't be for too long…I'm just at a road block for the next chapter. I'd rather wait until I have something good, then fore it. But, once I get past this chapter, it'll go more smoothly.
Great chapter. I think you did it amazing. An amazing job by taking the small information you had, and turn it into an actual story that is belivable. Well done.
You have created a captavating and amazing story. Hope inspiration will come to you.
Thank you for cotinuing the story. The chapter is amazing. I am glad you found a way to fight of your blockywocky.
IncreĂble, que gran alegrĂa volver a esta historia 🤩
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Uh... What exactly did you do?
Is the story set during or after G5
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During. Any TYT episode after July 18 hasnt happened in this universe
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The shout out is in the first chapter. It says what he did. If you're still wondering, what he said to give me the idea will be in the comment section in my story The Magic In Us. I'm pretty sure you'll be able to find it.
I just realized that there's been four stories but there still hasn't been an appearance from Comet.
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Well, you know, they've been traveling outside Equestria for half of them and Comet's busy exploring the inside of Equestria. Thought I'd just leave him to it.
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Wait, so Comet doesn't know about the whole Pipp getting taken by changelings fiasco? And he didn't even come to Pipp and Hitch's wedding?!
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Well, he came to the wedding and…
Okay, you know what, there were enough characters to keep track of in these stories and I didn't want to add anymore and he slipped my mind. And, honestly, I don't exactly count him as one of the Mane Six (I say Mane Six because Misty is already part of the group in that way, in my opinion) and adding Zoom and Thunder was pushing it with the amount of characters to keep track of. That's the only reason I put Thunder to sleep. To have less characters to keep track of. I only added the guards because after Pipp was captured it'd seem so unlike Queen Haven to send her daughters to who knows where to face who knows what with who knows who without some kind of protection. So yeah.
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Well, that makes sense, seven characters (Flurry Heart, not Zoom) is hard enough.
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Yeah, that's not even including the characters in the flashbacks
Thank you for the chapter. I think you did a great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.
This chapter was amazing!
This was worth the wait, in my opinion! This pink unicorn is most obviously Luster Dawn, I mean, it has to be her! The description fits! So, I'm guessing Flurry'll tell the Mane Six about how she gave Opaline the power to disharmonize Equestria next chapter. And that Thunder is basically one of those "Shadow Walker" things now? I'm not really sure. but Thunder is dying, for sure.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Does anyone ever wonder why the Crystal Ponies are asleep? I mean, they've been sleeping for like, a long time! I'm starting to think that they're, y'know, dead.
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I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is gonna get real psychological. I'll give you a hint. The mind be a powerful thing…I hope you enjoy it once it's done!
And Ponyfanatic, don't worry. Thy question in black shall be answered. Though, I'm not sure if it will be this next chapter or the chapter after that. It'll depend on how long this next chapter is and if it'll fit in this one.
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Okay! This was a good chapter. Fear plays a part in every Element, but Misty's, just goes to show how important Misty is. And I don't know how I understood all of that fear stuff.
I mean, defeat by stoning is a good thing! You'll still be able to hear your surroundings, never itch that one itch, slowly go crazy!
Yeah, no. I'm sorry, Twilight, but why did you pick the Frozen North? There's literally a Frozen South on the other side of the world! I'm pretty sure that's like, deserted.
Flurry Heart, you didn't keep her safe, did you.
Flurry, I'm really sorry, but you just had to go to her dream in bed every night! You could've had that Sugarcube Corner Date there! So unless something happened, it pretty much is Flurry Heart's fault. But you're still a good character!
Anyway, I can't wait for more! The final battle must be coming up soon, and I completely forgot who the villain was!
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I'd hate to disappoint, but Misty's Element requires her to face the most fear…in order to connect with another's emotions, she has to face her own, and believe me…facing your own emotions can be the scariest thing to do because, no matter what you tell yourself…your emotions never lie. And facing the truth? That's just as hard.
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Yeah, you're right.
Okay, okay, this was amazing! So, this is basically a Gen 5 version of "What Lies Beneath" and it was amazing! It always was my favorite episode in season eight that wasn't a season finale! So, Sunny's fear is failing everypony, Hitch's fear is losing Pipp, Pipp's fear is being invisible, Izzy's fear is being hated, Misty's fear is Opaline, and Zipp's fear is not being there for Zephyr Heights! Well, that all sounds reasonable and not out of character, kudos! So, they're going back to the Crystal Empire, and that pink unicorn MIGHT come back and be the big bad? Or, that's for the next story, which I'm excited for! Also, I think we saw a young Luna and Celestia, I mean, white alicorn with light pink hair? That's Celestia! And the crying night child is obviously Luna.
I'm REALLY excited for more, can't wait!
This is going in a really, really good direction.
Que buen final momentáneo, estas historias son cannon en mi corazón 💖💖💖
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Gracias. Eso significa mucho para mĂ. Realmente disfrutĂ© escribiĂ©ndolo y me alegra que hayas disfrutado leyĂ©ndolo.
The fact they also sung the song from Gen 4 at the end of season 4 so cool I loved the whole chapter
Sighs your just like rarity inside and out
Loyalty? Either you meant Rainbow Dash, which I doubt, you meant the Element of Magic.
Well, this is not how I expected it to go! And it's amazing! Pipp might be a mother! And Hitch might be a dad? Will Sparky become this maybe-foal-or-fille's brother?
Well, this was a nice chapter! Pipp and Hitch made love, Thunder was dead, Flurry had a mental breakdown... this was a good chapter! So, Flurry was able to help the Mane Six shoot a magic rainbow laser into the Crystal Heart, and Luster Dawn's back! If they don't get together next chapter, I don't know what I'll do.
It's time to read the next one!
Okay, best ending ever! Well, the best ending in this series! If I remembered correctly from last chapter, Flurry said Misty needed three alicorns to vouch for her. I can see Sunny and Flurry, but who's the other one? It's not Opaline, it's not Twilight... well, Misty might be screwed! The Skyronian Guards are at Maretime Bay, Zephyr Heights, and Bridlewood, so, yeah, Misty is really screwed.
Kinda sad that Flurry and Luster weren't together-together, but I mean, Hitch and Pipp might be parents, so that's cool! The "Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep" reference was nice, I just realized, Flurry's like Luna, in a way. They had fear speeches and they were shooting rainbow lasers! Well, Luna shot rainbow lasers at some point in time.
Can't wait for the next story! If it's not the whole Skyros Fiasco, I don't know how long I can wait.
See you next time, hopefully!
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I did mean Rainbow Dash. If you'll remember in the last chapter, during Zipp's test, I mentioned a sky blue mare with a rainbow mane. When Pipp, Sunny, and Zipp needed it, they received help from a past bearer of their Element.
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Oh! That makes sense.
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And yes…Flurry and Luster did get together-together. Flurry did call Luster her marefriend. It'll be more evident in the next story during Flurry's small scenes
Really great story. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to read your next story.