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LostgirLark


“It was one of Lark's gifts and curses. She saw the story in everything.” ― Anne Ursu, The Lost Girl

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The perfect first kiss—does it take (blech) endless thinking and planning? Or does it just happen?


For the Thousand Words Contest III in the Slice Of Life category. Check out the competition here!
Also submitted into the Rainbow Rocks Anniversary EqG Shipping Contest, in which it won TCC56's judge prize! Other entries here!

Huge thanks to starcoder for the art!

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Comments ( 8 )

Woah, I haven't thought that that story will be so cute. Now I am really happy that I have readed that-turned out my mood is insainly high from now.

Thank you for this piece of happines.

Or maybe I'm totally wrong.

shes totally wrong ajs love is everything to her

thanks for making having me do your art again

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And I WILL force you again next year.

Hello there! Since I'm not sure you're aware, it looks like your story is eligible to enter in the Rainbow Rocks Anniversary EqG Shipping Contest. If you're interested, you can submit here.

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Thanks so much for letting me know!

Trust me—I'm not an egghead or anything of the sort, but as soon as I got my first kiss, I just knew.

hehe, classic Rainbow Dash saying egghead

We started with a race. Normal people don't do this, but you have to understand that she and I are competitive and athletic. And not normal.

so true

We'd both agreed to get popsicles, but keep in mind you shouldn't agree to or force the other to pay. You should settle it with a game (preferably rock, paper, scissors) so that 1) your friend doesn't get suspicious, and 2) you have half a chance of not spending your money.

extremely AppleDash

Oh, and do not try to kiss while you're walking. It's an unspoken rule, but some people out there just don't know how weird that would be.

that is true, that is an advanced manoeuvre

Romantically, not creepily. Obviously.

i would simply be romantic instead of creepy

Oh, and bonus points to you if you kiss in front of something beautiful like a sunset, or just somewhere with meaning, like your date's apple orchard. Or both.

dang that is bonus points! well done RD

Maybe all you need for the perfect first kiss is love.

aww also so true! very adorable stuff, thank you for writing!

That was really cute. And insanely well written for your first work on the site.

Oh, and congrats on your Judge's Prize in the EqG RR Shipping contest!

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