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I think it'd be better if I just shut my mouth, cuz I hate how I look, how I sound.

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Maud Pie is a much more organized and scientific thinker than her exuberant sister. But like her sister Pinkie Pie, she also has a sixth sense that can warn her of danger and occasionally predict and warn of future events.

It is, as one might expect from the professional scientist and Rocktorate holder, a much more rigid and categorized phenomenon. At least to Maud herself. And her stalliionfriend, Mudbriar, is doing his very best to understand.

Written for the Thousand Words 2024 contest, under the Comedy category.

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Comments ( 7 )

According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a rubber band should make Pinkie able to fly. Pinkie, of course, flies anyway, because Pinkies don't care what physics thinks is impossible.

I finished pulling my dress on in time to see Mudbriar already filling two bowls; one with twig treats (magically coalesced sunlight and water, in hard candy form) and rock treats (cheese crackers).

My favorite part about this isn't the contrast, it's the canonicity.

Brilliant presentation of a unique perspective. Thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.

This was brilliant πŸ˜‚

A bit more math-heavy than I normally see for Maud, but it works.

β€œI remember Delta two,” he said. β€œDon’t tell me the other; I shall deduce the meaning through scientific observation.”

I loved it when Mudbriar flirted with me.

That was the first joke in this brilliant little fic and it already lifted my spirits. :rainbowlaugh:
Loved this one. Maud's narration feels so unique. Best of luck in the contest!

What I love most about this fict is just an older sister looking out for a younger sister.

Humor is great too though.

Her love for Mudbriar is so cute!

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