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MarblePie


Hi! I'll maybe publish some stories here once in a while, who knows. Thanks for visiting~

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After meeting Maud Pie while fooling around in the snow, you were invited to join her family's Hearth's Warming.

Having only been in Equestria for 3 months, the concept of an Equestrian holiday is still quite foreign to you. How will your experience fair, and what shall come from it?

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Pretty cute story. I like how you characterized Maud, and the little details with her body language were gold.
The only real criticism I have to offer is that the romance seemed to dial up pretty quickly with the confession out of nowhere from Anon.

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Definitely, I’ll have to brainstorm ideas to make it more natural with my next stories :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the feedback!

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