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Some Random Fella


Just some random fella who's got a couple of ideas. (I have no idea what I'm doing)

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A particularly unbearable summer afternoon in Phoenix Arizona.

An idiot who thinks he looks cool wearing sweaters in summer.

In an ironic twist of fate, after passing away due to a heat stroke, our boy Micheal wakes up in a strange land as what he assumes to be a horse of his opposite gender.

Not only that, he has wings, and a horn?

Stuff only gets more confusing for the poor bastard as his days in a new body go on.


Partially inspired by a twilights twinlight.

If your wondering, I don't know who made the cover art, and the badly drawn over white rectangle just covers up a color key.

Might add romance later on in the story idk though.

Another goofy ahh idea to come out of my noggin. Hopefully you enjoy.

:Edit, I've seen other people do this, so...

:Featured on July 21, 2024 for like a couple minutes:

.Featured again on 8/28/2024

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 123 )

Not a bad start, I read Twilights Twinlight and I loved that story so I'll be following this story as well :3 also as someone who likes to wear jackets and sweaters in hot weather I feel called out xD maybe if I had actually passed out the times I was close to getting a heat stroke back in highschool I might've been isekaied? XD (anyone wondering why someone wears jackets or sweaters during summer, personally its because I like wearing them backwards and using the hoodie as a holder of sorts to place my phone and other things)

Me gusto la historia :p

oh my onh no no no

Interesting start but so short . :raritydespair:

Who is the pony in the picture? She almost looks like Princess Celestia, but the colors are all wrong.

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Likely a Celestia redesign, or maybe even a young Celestia design made by someone

Gotta love it when you get whacky and goofy human-pony-clones instead of angsty ones!
:)

Well it has potential. Lets see what you do with it.

Liking this, pretty funny

This kinda sucks don't it? Lol 💀

Nah listen, this premise is hilarious. Him asking if Alicorn was a slur sent me. If this were a serious story meant to be taken seriously and not a comedy I'd complain about the main character being a bit too snarky and chill with this incredibly weird situation. But this is a comedy/random/slice of life story. We don't need HIE angst.

You're doin great.

It's funny,
I really like this story

Eh, kinda bland so far. Also, please capitalize proper names like Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia.

"I can't deal with this shit right now, im going back to sleep"

Relatable

"I'm cooked"

Also relatable

Hoping and waitin' for moar!

Gotta mimic Scinary, this is working as a comedy :twilightsheepish:

Perhaps the Double was lucky to not taste what pony tastebuds make of bacon :pinkiesick:

jattendais la suite

Comment posted by ZoeyHorse deleted Jul 22nd, 2024

Oh god, and so the lies begin to accumulate xD
Hopefully this doesn't start causing cascades of rumors...

Hey, have a like #100! :pinkiehappy:

It's a snowball that will eventually fall

"I'm cooked"

"Ngl bro, we're cooked."

A very reasonable reaction XD

"I can't deal with this shit right now, im going back to sleep"

been there done that got the shirt too

Haven't seen anyone post this, so here's the source of the image: DA link
There's also a version without the color key linked in the description.

These lies are kinda... Sensless? I mean it feels like you're just trying to stir up trouble for the protag on the future for the sake of plot

"Open the door!"

This can only go poorly for everyone involved.

Yep, this guy meses up, won't drop this though!

"Hey, kid, you alright?" I hear someone say, but I feel too weak to respond or move my body.

"I- I dunno..." I mutter out as I practically start panting.

"Don't worry, I'm calling the cops,(——" The man said as I felt myself getting more tired.

Is this what it feels like to lose conciseness?

"Yeah, I need an ambulance, I've got a kid here.. he's, I don't know what's happening to him, probably a heat stroke,(——" I hear the man say.

"Ok, yeah I can do that,(——" I hear the man say.

Why does he sound so quiet?

"Hey, I'm gonna cut your sweater off alright? Don't freak out, I won't do anything to you.(——"

"You are an inspiration to us all twilight,(——" Celestia said as she bowed, alongside twilights friends.

Celestia raised an eyebrow, looking behind her, as did Twilight’s friends.

And there, sprawled out in the ground, was another alicorn, and a large one at that.

Twilight's friends gasped, while Celestia's eyes widened.

"I- I don't know,(——" Was all Celestia could say, as she was at a loss for words at the moment.

"Is she alright?" Rarity asked as Celestia approached the new alicorn.

"I'm not sure.. I will take her to the castles medical wing, just in case,(——" Celestia started to say as she lit her horn.

"Testing, testing.(——"

"I can't deal with this shit right now, I’m going back to sleep.(——"

A moment passed before celestia soke up.

"It would seem that I need to get back to my duties" Celestia said as she stood up.

"Twilight, can you take michael back to the medical room? They should be doing a checkup on her later"

Well forget the food I guess.

"Open the door!"

5:09

Please get an editor.

"Her american sister.." I say as I bring my head back up.

Ahh, spreading misinformation. My favourite

I mean, AZ ain't that hot. Or maybe it's because I was born there. Idk. Bro doesn't have fire resistance yet.

"I'm cooked"

He was cooked alive in AZ, he is now cooked, and soon, he will be completely incinerated.

At this point, I don't know what's happening anymore, all I know is that I've lost my sight, am on the ground, and apparently suffering a heat stroke?

Accurate representation of a northerner coming down to the south for the summer.

If the heat don't get you ass the humidity will.

I'd wager 2 bits that Michael's goofy lies will be wrecked to pieces the moment Celestia can talk to them lol

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