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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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While still adjusting to his new life in Equestria, Comet is coming to grips with a strange feeling for one of his friends: Misty. More specifically, he's found himself in love with her, the first time he's ever felt such a thing.

Of course, being a complete stranger to romance and being somewhat socially awkward, Comet struggles with how best to tell Misty. Plus, he isn't sure if she loves him back or if the attraction is one sided.

So Comet does the only thing he can think to do: Turn to his friends for help. But can they really help Comet work up the nerve to confess?

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and i think you did well! Misty deserves more love

A Comet story is win on it's own, but this being such a sweet story make it all the more lovely.

Great shipping story that centers on Comet and Misty, we really need more Comet centered stories.

Dan
Dan #4 · July 4th · · ·

Comet can always use more love.

It sucks being set up to be a reoccurring character, then completely forgotten.

And he never got to divulge what conditioner he uses...

11942852 11943058 I agree. Really goes to show why cancelling Make Your Mark in favor of Tell Your Tale because the latter was more "profitable" was a bad idea.

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I totally agree with you my friend, I do kinda wish that chapter 5 of Make Your Mark was done differently. Say giving the other characters more character development such as Comet, Sunny, Zipp actually using her detective skills, Allura getting more screening time etc.

11943199 "Secrets of Starlight" wasn't until the end of Chapter 6, and was apparently originally meant to be a stand alone special for a Chapter 7, which presuambly would've meant a Chapter 8 focusing more on the new additions and the new status quo.

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Whoops, my bad there I meant to say chapter 6 not 5. lol

Too bad we'll never get a chapter 7. :(

"You sure?" Misty questioned the glasses wearing stallion. "You know you can tell me if something's wrong, right? I've learned that it's not always good to keep things bottled up inside. Is there something you wanna tell me?"

Very true because what we learned from Starlight never keep things bottled up quite a literally

Misty, for her part, just sighed and looked down at the ground. "Sunny and Izzy make it look so easy," She said to herself in a disappointed tone of voice. "Where did I go wrong?" She continued to think about that as she trotted away, hoping that Comet was alright.

Don't feel bad Misty it's not you he's just having problem expressing his feelings

Izzy waved a hoof and said in reply. "At least you'll know for sure one way or the other. That's a lot better than having that uncertainty hanging around if you ask me."

I guess that's a good point it's better than not knowing at all

Misty slowly blinked back. "Yeah. There's just so much to love about you. If you think about it, we have a lot in common: We both spent a lot of years being controlled by someone else, someone who was evil. And we're both kind of new to friendship because of that. Plus, we still have our... anxieties."

Actually now that I think about it they do both have in common with each other I never thought of that

Okay this was pretty cute and very unexpected shipping but I like it so apparently Comet been having this feeling towards Misty but he just didn't know how to say it without being so awkward even ask his friends some advice which they did give out pretty good one once he did that he finally met up with Misty once again and admitted he love her which apparently Misty knew about it she just had to wait until he say it and I got to say they do both have in common with each other when it comes to their situation but hey they will face it together this was very nice shipping story keep out the good work

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