Sometime after Twilight becomes a princess and she and the mane 6 save Equestria. Spike has been starting to have strange visions that have been making him think about tons of strange stuff, Spike doesn't know what they mean, or if they're real or not, but it's caused him a lot of concern as time has passed by. One day, when he's in the forest to think to himself about all this, he's attacked by strange black creatures that came from the shadows, and Spike is saved by two strange weapons that appeared in his hands. And once he took them down, he saw a strange portal leading to somewhere else, and with too much in his mind of what's happening, Spike goes through it to see what may be causing this problem, and vanishes from Equestria completely.
Spike soon awakens in a world called Traverse Town, he soon meets a young boy named Sora, with a weapon like his, which is called a Keyblade. They both meet up with two other people named Donald and Goofy who came looking for them, and they're king. After learning of the monsters called the Heartless and the threat they pose, they all decide to team up and travel across from world to world, going through many different events and making new friends along the way. Spike never thought his life would change so suddenly, but now, he has to learn to master his new powers, and one day become.. a Keyblade Master.
Sweet first chapter here & I loved Spike's choices regarding his path! Using Garble for the 3 question bit was clever as well!
Looking forward to see Spike stepping though this adventure in the next chapter!
Pretty awesome.
And surprised Garble was there in Spike's Dive To The Heart dream there.
Curious to see how awesome this will get.
Seeing that Birth By Sleep is gonna be skipped, wonder how Spike is gonna encounter much of the Unversed?
Since sadly there's so few in KH3(which is quite a shame. Same with the Nobodies)
Hmm... Heard of Emziko?
awesome start mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter

Hell yeah! Power of the Guardian fits Spike. Was surprised he gave up the power of the Warrior. But it works. Also a balanced Midday departure. Not to easy but not to hard. Perfect for him
Loving how you're setting up the start to Spike's journey here, especially with Celestia/Luna starting to notice not only worlds going out by darkness but also Luna's unable to see into Spike's dreams!
Countdown's started, looking forward to the next chapter Dragonfan!
I wonder if Spike will get a custom keyblade.
This will be epic!!!
Is Spike going to get his own custom keyblade or he's going to get a keyblade from the games. If you do video game give him a pre-order Keyblade they're basic keyblade but recolor or a different type of keyblade.
Recolors pre-order:
Phantom Green (Xbox)
Dawn Till Dusk (Amazon)
Midnight Blue (PS5)
Advent Red (Nintendo switch)
Elemental Encoder (epic game launcher)
Dead of Night (steam)
Spike learned a lot from Twilight, magic isn't that strange! He also played Dungeons and Discords with Big McIntosh and Discord! He was a magician then too!


I think that the keyblade should be called Ruby's Flare
And with that Spike's finally off toward adventure, huzzah!!!
If Sora thought Donard/Goofy were strange when he first met them I can't imagine what his reaction's gonna be when he comes across a small purple talking dragon!

Awesome he can duel-wield Keyblades.
Curious on what Keyblade transformations can happen.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Glad you guys are liking this story so far! I know there could've been more to the opening, but I was wanting to get stuff moving, and it helped match into my story description too, I'll cut back to Equestria from time to time, while also putting in a new original character to help further along the story. Also to whoever is disliking my other friends comments, please stop doing that please? They're just fun comments to express they're thoughts and I don't see a reason to do that, please and thank you.
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It's just a stupid dumb troll that does that on Spike stories comments from time to time Dragonfan, pay him no mind!
Will probably dislike this comment as well calling him out!
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Sounds like a unhappy camper and that is not good. Loved the chapter and Spike getting two Keyblades.
Would you mind if I proofread your story? I like the idea, but I'm seeing a lot of errors.
going by the only other examples of dual wielding Keybarers, Roxas and Sora, this could imply something similar about Spike. not sure if you're planning it or just going by a 'rule of cool' angle. we'll have to wait and see.
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You can send me a PM to let me know the errors I've made, I'm gonna redo the description of the story so it's shorter and easier to pick up, simply saying of what dreams Spike's been having, and how it's made him think things he never would've before, then it would go to the attack in the forest, and Spike vanishing from Equestria which would set up his journey, but please, if you've noticed anything, please send it to me in a PM
Good day.
One question. Are you doing the original or remix version?
And our 2 keyweilding heroes finally meet! Really loving their banter & fighting combos against the big armored guy in Traverse Town, now I'm looking forward to the next world while developing their friendship!
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

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I was asked a similar question about this in my blog for this story, and the answer is that there really isn't much of a difference to them, the original and remix versions mainly just consist of a few new cutscenes and enemy reskins as well as revamped bosses which don't really add much story wise, it's like when people asked me about my Spyro story, they're the same game, just extra content and enhanced visuals, there really wouldn't be much of a difference for them.
Ok, a few things I want to say here.
1. I have been reading your stories for a bit now and I have to say that you already have great stories on your page, very impressive (If not a little jealous), but some things are kind of striking out to me, no blame pressed on you it's just rookie mistakes (This coming from someone who is a rookie also but to each their own) like when you are writing the conversations, try not to put them all to combine them like:
I've been told in the first chapter of my own story that large paragraphs like these end up being too much on a run on words so the conversation feels a bit cluttered, instead try like this:
Spaces are a really wonderful thing that can make these kind of conversations easier to ingest.
2. Some of the paragraphs are kind of redundant. They aren't any in this chapter but in the pervious chapter is kind of uncanny with how much Spike questions "is it all real...or not." it the actual story and in conversation itself just leans at the redundant side and that can take you out immersion even if that quote is the main crux of Kingdom Hearts, still there is a reason that quote is only introduced once and at the beginning, so the story itself can exemplify that without pointing to it every few minutes, that's why the introduction of the source is so powerful.
There a still things that still bug that little tick in the back of my head but that can stay there for now.
3. None of these things you have to do or even take too seriously, hell you don't even have to read my stuff. This is just some bit of optional advice coming from a guy who probably cares about stories to much. Man you could just be writing this because it's fun bit of pass time while this is part of me and I do everything I can to make it improve from some great pieces of stories on this site that I can only hope to live up to so please don't take this as "You're stories BADDD!!!" things but I want to help anyway I can, we're all on this site together.
3.5. I am really interested in this story with Spike, There used to be another story like this from a friend of mine but I think he wanted to do more so he just decided to delete it, anyway I'm still a little giddy to watch this playout, it is great so far like your Ninja Turtles and Ninjago stories. I love the premise of Spike's love interest and him being a father, so I hope either of those happen in here. So once again, always looking out for Spike writers everywhere, hope you have a great day.
This was awesome!! This will be a amazing adventure~
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Thanks for the advise! Part of the reason I do this is because of how long each chapter will be, and for this story, my chapters will be very long, probably around 10k words or so for some worlds, but I really appreciate the advise, I'll be sure to take it in for future story's at some point!
I feel like you could also mention what type of Heartless they encounter too(like naming them).
Such as the Soldier Heartless or how Spike handles certain annoying Heartless/Nobodies.
The Queen Of Hearts is sure just obnoxious and abusive. I am surprised the Heartless never attacked her.
I remember there's a a nice detail in KH1 where you can actually attack her during the fight and she comically falls upside down.
And that glowing light Spike did, wonder if that's a reference to the Luminence Drive idea KH2's Nobody May Cry mod had? Where the more the player fights and does it better, the more powerful they become(like Devil May Cry's Style Meter system.)
Oh god, I forgot that this loudmouth ruler's world was first, glad that Spike was able to give her some comeuppance at the end though!

Seeing Spike & the gang grow stronger is a treat, especially that X move by Spike, priceless!!!
Gotta call out these Highlights! :
Yeah I pretty much gave up on their spagetti-complex plot after the first 100 games! (kidding only on the 100 games part, just feels that way!
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Can't wait for the next world adventure next time around, till then Dragonfan!
Spike better not do that to King Triton or get blasted by the ruler of the sea
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It's not just a spaghetti plot; it's a tangled raw spaghetti plot.
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It honestly got even worse when they introduced time travel in Dream Drop Distance, unless a story properly explains how time travel can work, when it's included in any kind of story, it just creates SO many plot holes that can't be properly answered.
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And the dream world thing was confusing too.
Especially with The World That Never Was
This was epic!! loved this chapter.
This quote sound familiar to you guys?
"Why don't you ask the Queen of Hearts that guys? Oh yeah, a cake bomb blew up in her face"
Next is Deep Jungle. Wish Tarzan's world appeared in Chain of Memories, Coded or 358/2.
Nice to see the gang getting stronger & obtaining the Thunder spell to boot, not to mention the epic fight against Cerberus!
Going tree-surfing next time around, till then Dragonfan! 😎🏄♂️
I'm impressed with the challenges they persevered together. One particular thing to clarify however, is the fire heartless are called red nocturnes, and the ice ones are blue rhapsodies. The only operas are the yellow ones. This is complete clarification mind you.
Curious on how things will go when they end up fighting Sephiroth in the games there.
About the two superboss Heartless in Alladin's world and Neverland, I can see after the final Keyhole is made, the heroes return to the worlds after seeing a bunch of powerful Heartless is launching a attack on the worlds given how in the games, more powerful Heartless will start to spawn in the other worlds when the last Keyhold is activated(as in after Riku-Ansem gets beaten).
And Spike&co encounters Unknown Figure(Xenmas) when they return to Hollow Bastion for something(I think)
This was awesome! Always loved the Olympus Coliseum.
great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Not my favorite level
Its Sabor.
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I liked that level because you get to team up with Tarzan
And we're back into the KH action with this world, I loved doing the tree-surfing level here, it was fun!
Kudos to Spike talking some sense to Donald during the conflict between him & Sora, friendship dragon's on the job!
Looking forward to the next chapter Dragonfan!
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If only the tree surfing part of the world was more of a minigame we could come back to that could be larger, because as is, this section is only 30 seconds or so if you don't get hit, shame they never brought this world back, because I feel like tree sliding would've been a great minigame in KH2 or 3.
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Indeed, they sure missed out not bringing this world back one more time! Especially since Herc's world was in all 3 main KH games!