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This story is a sequel to A Perfect Pitch


Pipp and Hitch have been dating for two years now. Their relationship has made it through thick and thin—Opaline, Misty when she was evil, Allura, and the day to day life, but when a fight threatens their relationship, Hitch, as well as the rest of thier friends, begin to question if they really know Pipp at all....or at least this one.

Sequels:

Magic In Us:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/560696/the-magic-in-us

Secrets of the North:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/561815/secrets-of-the-north

A Trial of Secrets:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/565208/a-trial-of-secrets

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 17 )

Uff, hombre pero que intenso, Se viene la vuelta de tuerca para la historia, lo espero con ansias 👍🏼

I see the changelings have regressed as a species. And by that I mean they’re back to being complete idiots who can’t charade to save their lives.

Or can they……………

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You'd be surprised at how easy it would be to act like somepony who's always been a jerk...even if it means creating a whole new persona

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Yeah, well they bet on the wrong horse with Pipp.

Pun entirely intended

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Agreed...they're about to learn that impatience only works against you. Mlp style.

Señora crisalis ¿usted no aprende verdad?

Well, someone’s plan backfired.

Not entirely sure who’s though

Well, who knew Earth Ponies could be such ###############?

OK, that was a little harsh given the circumstances, but seeing as Misty was almost silenced and Zipp went through mental suffering, I hold my right to shame Sunny and Hitch (maybe also Izzy) until I hear some apologies.

Edit: So after some thinking, I decided to start the shaming now. It has been 6 months and the ponies that “didn’t love” Pipp are the ones working tirelessly to save her. Boy do I need some good humbling next time and soon, because my hate is probably unhealthy RN

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Yeah, it's easy to take our anger and fear out on those closest to us because, maybe deep down, we know that if their truly our friends, they'll forgive us. Maybe not always if we keep crossing lines, but for the most part, they will.

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Well, until proven otherwise consider that line crossed.

Like I say: Never Forget, Never Forgive.

Okay, that’s not actually a motto I live by, but you get my point that as a supporter for the future queen my loyalties prevent me from feeling any sympathy for Sunny and Hitch for the time being

Zipp y misty son verdaderas hermanas 🤧, espero que pipp este bien

Okay, at first I was going to say ending it now would no doubt rush things, but there’s a sequel coming so that’ll take care of wrapping everything up nicely.

Anyway, seeing as Sunny and Hitch realized they bucked up royally (pun unintended) and will be dealing with the consequences throughout most of the trip, I can let go of my grudge.

Now comes the journey to rescue Pipp from these mind bending freaks, and I doubt it’ll be easy on anypony.

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And that's exactly the reason I ended it there. I was worried putting it all into one story would rush things and my biggest pet peeve in the whole world is when a writer rushes an ending, whether it's a book or a movie because it just ruins the whole thing :twilightangry2:. At least by continuing the story in a sequel, I can take the space I need to not rush it and make it as good quality as the rest of the story.

Comment posted by Elias Villalba deleted Jul 1st, 2024

Pues hoy en día con mencionar las palabras "muerte" o "sangre" ya es suficiente como para estar en esta clasificación, yo lo dejaría en T

Since changelings have appeared, will any other characters from G4 appear? (e.g. Flurry Heart)

I really like the story so far.

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