(My first piece of fanfiction, not only for this site, but literally my first)
When Gilda comes back to Ponyville, she has changed for the better. Fluttershy learns this when Gilda knocks on her door early in the morning. The others find this hard to understand or believe. Fluttershy and Gilda must find a way to let the residents of Ponyville know that Gilda is not the evil griffon they once knew.
This story is using a combination of the FiM episodic style of story combined with my own style of writing.
Chapters (4)
Super tiny chapters... i'm being spoonfed. Try to make at least 2000 words per chapter
I approve. This one is truly awesome, and deserves my BROHOOF!
1469637 I was trying to extend the chapters but I just ended each one where it seemed like a good spot. Also putting out chapters was a way to motivate myself to take short breaks from writing instead of long ones.
You sir, have just made my day. I am favouriting this just from the description! Hope to see more stories like this!
1469643 thank you and brohoof accepted /)*(\
1470030 Thank you and I'm happy to have made your day...warning though my next story is gonna be quite a bit different than this one but after that I'll make one in the same style as this.
This is amazing!
1470454 ^^
Sorry but please don't hate me for this
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This story is amazing!
That was beautiful!
is it a gildashy fanfic
yea that was beautiful and has a lot of errors :D
Sounds intresting, a letter to Princess Celestia... and it still says the story is incomplete?
So.. maybe there's more to come? Or you just forgot to put it as complete.
It would be awesome to see a Princess Celestia reaction to all of this...
Overall a really good story, I like your idea of making the other ponies thinking Fluttershy has been kidnapped, or maybe hypnotised!
Your definately writing Pinkie Pie ideas, good ones though
I'll keep an eye out for your later stories!
1478414 haha yeah, I must have forgot to save after changing it to complete. Thanks for pointing that out so yes that was the end. The basis for the "kidnapping" was to show that someone or some pony in this case can easily assume something about someone else and even though its not true a lot of people or ponies will end up believing it and that can get out of hand, quickly...also it added a little more action. It was definitely fun to think about the random things that Pinkie would do and say throughout the story. Thanks for the support!
Liked it, grammar mistakes here and there, but overall a nice quick read.
Wow, I've been getting quite a few favorites for this story lately even though it was written a while back. I'm glad to see you're all still enjoying it and that it hasn't completely fallen into the dark depths of Fimfiction. Thanks you!
I immediately had a problem with this. She wasn't evil nor do I think anyone thoughts she was. What she was, was a bitch. Evil is different.
2700313 This is the first fimfic story I ever wrote so I'm glad this is the only thing you have a problem with. Anyways, this story was written to be rated for everyone if I would've used bitch it would've had to have been changed to teen for language. Besides this, I hope you enjoyed everything else.
Instead of evil, may I suggest either mean or arrogant? Looks like it'll be interesting!
I found this story alright. Though I could not get really into it. It was good but did not draw me in as I thought it would....
Here are some errors I found....
Chapter 1
crazy put I’ve changed
crazy but I've changed
Chapter 4
want to friends
Want to be friends
(Make sure its caped)
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It's the first fic I ever wrote. What did you expect? Haha
4836607 Understandable... I had no idea. I just thought I'd comment on it...
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Isn't it amazing how much I've improved since then?
4836632 Oh yes, very impressive indeed. It takes time and effert... I know I've improved a little since i've started writing but I've still a long way to go...