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Holocron
Gaze within the Holocron, and see what stories it has to tell. For every fable is but a thread in the weave of tales.
Holocron
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After reading the first chapter.
I have a good, but a little dreadful theory that there is a good reason WHY Luna didn't reveal the Thestrals to Celestia, or Equestria as a whole before her banishment to the moon. Or even years after her freedom.
I don't really like where this is going. So I'd better skip this story.
Dear Holocron, please make notes about the content in the description of the story.
Oooh, this looks like a promising start.
I wondered if applejack or fluttershy would join in.
Is it me or that pic of Twilight look hot and cute in that outfit?
I like the idea of the outfit on the cover, but I'd rather it was actual art and not AI
Having said that, the fic itself is really good.
Yeah, I'm gonna stop reading now.
Some people might find interest in the story but I don't feel comfortable with whatever you would describe this but I'm going to refer to it as mind control.
Next time, can you please give a more detailed description on what the story is about? I also recommend updating the description. But based on the 2 paragraphs, I can probably guess what's gonna happen, especially to Twilight and all of Equestria.
Edit: I don't know why so many people are downvoting this comment. I gave my honest opinion on the story, plus the story was originally misleading, I'm not a fan of mind control and that sort of thing, do you want people to unwillingly stumble upon this story and regret reading it? I simply do not like the story, not everyone has to enjoy the same things you do.
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Not just you 😁.
I'm loving the premise and looking forward for more~!
Once Twilight falls to his mind control. Is his next target going to be her friends? Is he going to do the same thing for the rest of the princesses? Perhaps Luna will try and fail to save Twilight? I am already loving this story! Keep up the good work!
Yeah, no. Not my thing. Moving on.
Link to full pic please
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SFW LINK
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Thanks. Is there an NSFW link?
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Nope
hope to see more soon
Um, yeah, I can immediately see where this is going, even without that scene with Night Glider servicing the thestral leader. As I see, this will be just another version of the Fall of Equestria, but with thestrals rather than Caribou. I'm going to take a hard pass at this, not because of the writing, but the premise, thank you very much.
I would really like this if it was humans not thestrials mind controlling twilight
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Same.
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Too bad then. You write that story and let Holocron write this one.
Great work on this so far. Would like to see a bit more characterisation of some of the other non-Heph Thestrals, just to get a bit more of an understanding about the extent of the mind control, what they think about moving to Canterlot, stuff like that to flesh them out a bit as a society. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the chapter