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This story is a sequel to p-value
This morning was supposed to be a goodbye.
an entry to the Dialogue-Only Contest!
story meant to be read independently of the prequel.
thank you to Shaslan and Crack-Fic Casey for prereading!
profanity: one (1) use of the fuckword
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It's late at night, but let's do this like a reliable bicycle would.
Oof. Time dilation. One of the most painful EqG mirror mechanical explanations in my opinion. Gives me Doctor Who weeping angel vibes of displacement and loss of time.
Good 'ol Bike. Hitting me right in the feels with desiring the simple pleasure of a loving touch.
Being so far removed from my family and friends back in Texas, I definitely feel this.
Not exactly healthy, but both endearing and real. I've been in Sunset's shoes more times than I've liked.
I didn't like when EqG gave the 7 super powers. Felt very MARVEL and unnecessary. That being said, it's well utilized here.
This made me chuckle. A solid, endearing behavior.
As lucky as One can be in Bike
Those are words to live by. Happiness isn't a goal, it is the byproduct of taking care of yourself.
Learn to love yourself and practice it every day. You will always be your best cheerleader. You just have to willing to learn how to love yourself.
A strong fic for sure. Thank you for sharing it. I would say more but it's way past my bed time and I fell asleep a couple of times writing this last minute. Good work.
P.S. Strategic F bomb is strategic.
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aww thank you so much for this Rego! i love it!
yes! i do not mean for this to give 100% healthy forever, but pretty healthy considering their ages and both of them being redeemed magical supervillains. augh i love them
ah yeah the geodes feel really integral to EqG to me as someone who watched it all in one go, but they are definitely a distinct development years into the series that does change the vibe of the world.
yay i am glad!
aww not all of my stories are like this! but yes, in this kind of story, that is indeed
and yes exactly! Sunset wants Wallflower to be that voice for herself, and is very glad to be that for her when Wallflower can't.
hehe, before these previous two fics i literally never had anyone use the fuckword but somehow it felt very difficult to get around having to use it here.
Great stuff! I decided to read the prequel after finishing this, and this story indeed works well independent of that. You did well bringing in all the information you'd need, and this is probably biased from the order I read them, I feel like this story even works better as a standalone rather than a sequel. It was interesting figuring out exactly what was going on with the hints in their conversation. Sunset and Wallflower's romance was sweet, and I hope they can figure things out.
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thank you, i'm really glad to hear it works independently of the prequel! and it is funny writing this years after Long-Distance since i feel like my writing and characterization have evolved since then, so i fear continuing onto it will be jarring
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Oh, I didn't notice Long-Distance to the side there lol.