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"I just have a good imagination."

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Nice chapter lad!

This is great! Can’t wait for more! I’m definitely following and favoriting

Bloody hell, this history looks nice, even unique in some way, hope this history go well for you! Have a nice day. :moustache:

:facehoof: wonderful start.

Good so far.:eeyup:

Heck, you could even just have this single chapter and it would still be a satisfying ending to this fic. That's how good what you already have is.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Thanks. It is surprising, that noone thought of this before me.

This is a great first chapter.
If the other chapters will be anything like this, then I have a new story to follow.
Good luck with the writing!
:twilightsmile:

The only downside of this story for me personally is Anthro. But for the first time in my life, I am ready to accept this and continue reading. Thanks for the work.

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If you mean the idea about there being other Spirits, or Discord having family? It was done before by Alex Warlorn And his Amazing Pony POV Series

Oh I am DESPERATE for another chapter! This seems delightful! Joyous even!

Wonder why you are using a fanart of DSMP era Tubbo as the cover art?

Really fun second chapter!
However, I would suggest getting a proofreader, because there are a few mistakes left behind.
Nothing enough to make the story worse, just wanted to let you know.

the new spirit named Joy and the change in character of the chaotic spirit.

TFTC.

it reached top-2 on popularity in 24 hours?!

People love a discord story.

"Why are you became a royal guards?" - Asked Ring, sparing a momentary glance at his partner.

Error |> "Why did you become a royal guard"

This story is a joy to read so far.

Comment posted by SouthernStyle deleted Jul 3rd, 2024

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Yeah, I know I should. Thanks for the encouraging words.

Both guards turned their head, and indeed - Celestia was sleeping with open eyes, standing on her feet. Both guards groaned silently, exchanging some unamused looks.

Probably the reason Celestia can get through the day lmao.

Fukyoumean it reached top-2 on popularity in 24 hours?!

At the time of reading chapter 2 for me, it was at #1

I’m very much enjoying this story and am happy it got a new chapter so quick. Also like others have said it’s probably a good idea to get a proofreader and try to fix the errors so the story is more readable. Nothing too major to make it unfun but enough to notice

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Already asked. Next chapter will be more pleasant to read. Already working on it, but it will take more than a day to finish.

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Tubbo's PC technically wasn't anthro, just a full human-like creature with tiny antlers and floppy ears, kind of like anime nekos. Joy is clearly modelled after Tubbo?

Very nice start, chosing to place this pre-reformation Discord was a nice touch.

Heh, this was enjoyable, good work. :twilightsmile:

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I'm generally not a fan of turning ponies into something more human. This way, a huge number of different gags, features and similar little things inherent exclusively in ponies are lost.

Great chapter!
But I have to say, don't take the actual top as a absolutely goal, is great but is not what you want to keep like a... Idk, but take it as "well, people like this, I gonna make more chapters at my rhythm" and no like "holy moly people like this, I need to keep going without thinking about the future of the history and make an absolute generic sht that gonna be ended in cancel or abandoned!"

Take your time, plan your history, do it at your rhythm, don't accept people try to rush you, and enjoy the beautiful feeling of make other lough and enjoy your history!

Have a nice day.

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No, I was just surprised at the moment I saw it and decided to express my surprise. Planning is due and patience is required.

You comment on my story. Now I comment on yours. Frog or somethin', I dunno.

This story blew up so hard, that it scares me. Fukyoumean it reached top-2 on popularity in 24 hours?! I'm not complaining, just didn't expect that good of a review on this story. I'll try to keep up the good work. Thank you and enjoy.

Hey you doing better than me. My Stay Tuned story only made it to third place when it was featured

No Bullshit. I'm usually into stories that have action, battles, and blood....but this.... this is pure platinum grade reading material. I look forward to reading more of this

The idea is cool but by god! The grammar, spelling, and incorrect words, gave me a headache.

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to be far i kind of expected this story to blow up considering this story is the BOMB.


i will see my self out.

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I've seen it. Not a fan of displaced stories, since they often made with the idea of reader knowing every single fandom. But it was different and pleasant to read.

And if you enjoy that kind of reading material - my suggestion for you will be ThePhoton and his work called "Paradise". Reading it myself.

Trollstia being Trollestia, nothing new here

Good start fav track amd bookshelf

The ending was very funny. Keep up the good work.

"Uncle was right. You sure do look tense most of the time." - Rang a young voice through the trone room, in a brief moment of silence.

You forgot the h in throne

With their talk ended, just like his drink, Joy gave a tired exhale, seemingly looking at Celestia with a tired expression, then lowered his head a little. - "Seems like we're getting nowhere with this." - He mumbled, jumping down from his cloud and stretching a little. - "If you wanna be the peeping creep - fine, be that way, sunshine. It's not like I desperately needed to talk to you. I'll just do things the old fashioned wa- HAS SHE FELL ASLEEP?!" - Joy exclaimed, looking at Celestia, who's true to his words was silently snoring with open eyes.

I think you mean fallen.

Love this story and his two guard friends

fun and whimsical. a nice beginning to a story. I do hope that the author doesn't burn themselves out over this story. i'd like to enjoy it whenever its updated

I'd like to ask you when you plan to update the story

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