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You've seen Human-in-Equestria stories where they remain human. You've seen them when they've woken up with their own body; be it a filly or an adult. You've seen them take on the role of characters in the show. You may have even seen when they are newborn into their new life.

But what happens when none-of-the-above is the case. That a human's conscience is transplanted into Equestria, but due to laws-of-physics shenanigans, a new body cannot be formed out of nothing. They are transplanted into the life of an existing pony. But what happens to that pony? What if they stick around?


That is what had happened to Melissa. Transported into Equestria, and into the body of Apple Turnover. However, Apple Turnover is also still present in his own body. Now with two minds at the helm of this pony, the challenge begins of discovering what caused this, and trying to fix it.


Welcome to my first fic, and the first bit of creative writing I've done for a long time. Please be warned, this story will eventually be covering themes of familial-drama, crisis of gender identity, and other potentially triggering topics that I will warn of as the story progresses. I hope you enjoy what I have to offer!

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But what happens when none-of-the-above is the case. That a human's conscience is transplanted into Equestria, but due to laws-of-physics shenanigans, a new body cannot be formed out of nothing. They are transplanted into the life of an existing pony. But what happens to that pony? What if they stick around?

Already been done before. It's not a super-used idea. But it has been done before. Only change here is that the human is female and the pony is a stallion.

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Thanks for the comment. I imagined that this concept wouldn't be breaking new ground, though in truth I haven't stumbled across one naturally in the month or so I've been reading fanfics! But it's a concept that my mind came to naturally and wouldn't stop clinging onto, so here we are!

This is great!
I've always loved the idea of sharing a body

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Oh you sweet summer child. One month is not and adequate length of time for this, or any genre for that matter :pinkiecrazy:.

Interesting start, been a while sense I saw a Female to Male possession story, never seen a lengthy story, outside of clop, fully dedicated to that and exploring it, it's a welcome change for me; I have been wonder how a woman would feel about being a male pony character and how it would develop. Looking forward to see more of this.

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Hey relax!
I mean Cmon we all wish for Runic's DAILY UPLOAD SCHEDULES! but we can't be that way
But even so i get where they come from

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Truthfully, the whole displaced-to-Equestria trope has become so overdone that I don't think there ARE any new and original takes left one can do with it anymore--everything one can do already have been done at least once.

So in my opinion, better to go for one of the rarer takes to the idea like this fic has done rather than pursue one everybody else has definitely already done a hundred times over. :twilightsmile:

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Sorry for not quite picking up on the sentiment, but I believe there's a bit of misunderstanding here? I was saying I'd only started reading fanfics within the last month, not that my release schedule will be monthly, Celestia no! But it won't be daily either, I wanna spread out the chapters I have written up a bit.

If your referring to me being a fresh-face in fanfics who probably doesn't know the regular tropes, your correct and I'm learning as I go, but isn't a totally fresh experience sometimes what is needed for a unique telling, too? :derpytongue2:

I love it my friend keep up the good work

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