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You've seen Human-in-Equestria stories of many types. You've seen them remain human. Given their own pony-body; be it filly or adult. You've seen them take the role of characters in the show. You may have even seen them from birth into this new life.

But, in some stories, they aren't given their own body. The laws-of-physics demands that a new body cannot be formed out of nothing, so when transplanted into Equestria, they are placed into the body of an existing pony. But what happens to that pony? What if they stick around?


Meet Melissa. Transported into Equestria, and into the body of Apple Turnover. However, Apple Turnover is still present within his own body too. Now with two minds at the helm of this pony, the challenge begins of discovering what caused this, and trying to fix it.


Welcome to my first fic, and the first bit of creative writing I've done for a long time. Please be warned, this story will eventually be covering themes of familial-drama, crisis of gender identity, and in terms of potential kinks transformation (although it won't be sexual or graphic.) alongside other potentially triggering topics that I will warn of as the story progresses. I hope you enjoy what I have to offer!

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But what happens when none-of-the-above is the case. That a human's conscience is transplanted into Equestria, but due to laws-of-physics shenanigans, a new body cannot be formed out of nothing. They are transplanted into the life of an existing pony. But what happens to that pony? What if they stick around?

Already been done before. It's not a super-used idea. But it has been done before. Only change here is that the human is female and the pony is a stallion.

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Thanks for the comment. I imagined that this concept wouldn't be breaking new ground, though in truth I haven't stumbled across one naturally in the month or so I've been reading fanfics! But it's a concept that my mind came to naturally and wouldn't stop clinging onto, so here we are!

This is great!
I've always loved the idea of sharing a body

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Oh you sweet summer child. One month is not and adequate length of time for this, or any genre for that matter :pinkiecrazy:.

Interesting start, been a while sense I saw a Female to Male possession story, never seen a lengthy story, outside of clop, fully dedicated to that and exploring it, it's a welcome change for me; I have been wonder how a woman would feel about being a male pony character and how it would develop. Looking forward to see more of this.

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Hey relax!
I mean Cmon we all wish for Runic's DAILY UPLOAD SCHEDULES! but we can't be that way
But even so i get where they come from

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Truthfully, the whole displaced-to-Equestria trope has become so overdone that I don't think there ARE any new and original takes left one can do with it anymore--everything one can do already have been done at least once.

So in my opinion, better to go for one of the rarer takes to the idea like this fic has done rather than pursue one everybody else has definitely already done a hundred times over. :twilightsmile:

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Sorry for not quite picking up on the sentiment, but I believe there's a bit of misunderstanding here? I was saying I'd only started reading fanfics within the last month, not that my release schedule will be monthly, Celestia no! But it won't be daily either, I wanna spread out the chapters I have written up a bit.

If your referring to me being a fresh-face in fanfics who probably doesn't know the regular tropes, your correct and I'm learning as I go, but isn't a totally fresh experience sometimes what is needed for a unique telling, too? :derpytongue2:

I love it my friend keep up the good work

It had seemed, from what the figure inferred from the two ponies' interactions on their walk back, that the smaller female had been experiencing a great moment of fragility... perfect. The figure did not need to look far after all. It watched on, considering the pony, and had a fantastic idea for bitter irony creating a second swirling cloud of green veins to open a new view to elsewhere. They were going to be successful if it meant trying over and over again.

Hmmm
I sense this presense is WAAAAY bigger than anything the legion did
...i sense its older and Worse than discord

A disembodied mind, is this a gnosticism allegory?

And to AvoidingFever17, thank you for replying in the last couple of chapters. Admittedly, they've not been comments I could really add anything onto, but as a whole, thank you for showing your interest by commenting!

SQUEE!!!!!
THANKS! never been PERSONALLY SHOUTED OUT BEFORE BUT THANKS!

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Oh it's no problem! I should be thanking you for showing your interest as you do! :)

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Thank you! You timed it perfectly as well as the newest Chapter just dropped! :raritywink:

Someone is playing with power, I think only Discord can feel such magic, who knows.

I've finally caught up. I'm enjoying the story so far.

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Thank you for your interest! And glad you are enjoying it :twilightsmile:

This fanfiction is one of the few I consider very underrated. It is of great quality, never forget that.

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Well thank you kindly for the praise!

Interesting concept, going to check this out later. If I may say, there are some groups for stories involving body sharing that could help people interested find this.

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Thank you for your interest! And certainly if you could point me in direction of some of these groups it'd be much obliged! :D

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I can reply with the links if you want, I've got them bookmarked on my browser.

Well as long as you made the character I don't see any reason against using one for a sona

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