Trixie was once one of the most famous mares throughout Equestria, however, her career was built on tales and legends with no substance. Once exposed her world fell apart and desperate she did what ever she had to in order to make a life. Now though the consequences of her most recent career have caught up with her.
Trixie once one of the most prideful ponies is now a pregnant mare without a home or job. Desperation has sunk in and in her fear she turns towards the one pony she believes that can help her. Will Twilight take her in and what about Twilight's friends. Not to mention the stallion whose foal Trixie is carrying.
What awaits Trixie and Twilight, well we'll just have to wait and see, won't we.
Chapters (1)
My first attempt at a multi-chapter story on here and I hope that it will be enjoyable. Any questions or comments are welcome.
When will you continue your dreaming my life away series?
Interesting. I wonder how Twilight's friends (three mares in particular) will take to Trixie staying with her. Will they wait and listen or will they act first and not wait for an explanation? And I really hope you continue this.
You're getting into this WAY too fast. The reveal that Trixie is pregnant should come at the END of the chapter, at the earliest, since it was the big hook that you teased in the summary; the "how it happened" part should be in the following chapter. And I try not to be a snob about chapter length, but generally, you could do with some decompressed storytelling to pace this right.
Is there any chance of another chapter soon?
Pleasant so far
an idea for a potential interesting twist
Moneybags wife comes around and asks Trixie if she and her husband can have the foal.
do with that what you may