Very nice and smoke's a good cop! (Does this still fit or should i say watchpoky/guard instead?)

And about comet, you mind if I expess my thought? Pardon.

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Sure, just bare in mind the rest of the story has yet to come out and so far, he's not had much screen time. Later chapters will fix that.

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I thought if he should not meet a foal as a new friend while in the hospital. Or that he bonds with one of the doctors/nurses

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You'll see a little more come this weekend, don't worry.

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Sure Thing! Eager about it. Though i admit, had to think of OCs...as silly as this sounds

“Is that the moon!? Am I dreaming?” He shot back at her.
“I don’t know, if ya are then somethin’s gone real wrong with Luna.”

Judging by the current state of the world that is actually most likely the case. Same for Celestia.

After the Great Storm, many began having nightmares and uncontrolled dreams, leading to the belief the princess of the night did not survive the Storm.
Yet very rarely, those with lucid dreams can hear distant screams...

Scary...

Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.

Small note:

All I know for certain is it’s time for you yet, and it won’t be for a while.”

I think you forgot a "not" there.