"There can only be one"
It seemed like a normal day in coal town. The sun was shining, the wind was blowing, and you could hear the explosions across the town. Life as the new red spy was pretty cool, honestly.
After chasing and catching Silver quill for an hour, I was welcomed to the team with open arms...er hoofs? That seriously confused me sometimes. I made friends with Eliyora and AnY pretty quickly, Silver and I buried the hatchet after the chase, and even with keyframe after basically slamming her into a building. Toon still seemed salty for me getting the drop on him. But all I said was that he needed to get good. He may or may not have foamed in the mouth.
After a few days, my skills as red spy started to improve by using the shadows to my advantage...helps that I'm a massive tmnt fan. And the gear I have like dead ringer is SUPER fun to use! I also had a my kunai from my entry test as my main weapon. But I upgraded it to be more powerful then normal, and with my new custom revolver at my side, I was ready for anything...except office work.
Apparently, doc wanted me to help around the office as he was interviewing applications for the blue team. And even wanted my help in recruiting them. Which was nice actually. Doc was with this tan stallion with a brown mane with a red streak in it if he had, and I quote, up to date life insurance policy. I honestly didn't think equestria would have such things here.
However, before he respond, a pink Pegasus with a blond mane and puppy Paw prints as her cutie mark came in and launched the stallion out of the building. The mare responsible? Was named sweetie bloom. A Pegasus with a heart for animals, Disney, ...and shipping. She can also be hyperactive and very perky. So...like a fusion of Pinkie pie and fluttershy in a sense. She then said in a fast pace "OH! You guys are doing a thing? I wanna do a thing! Can I be part of the thing!"
...yep. definitely has the Pinkie pie mixed in there. Doc calm explained to Sweetie bloom "Umm. miss bloom, I was already in the middle of Interviewing a Applicant here."
I could tell Sweetie bloom was interested as she said "oooh. Appliances for what?" Doc replied " We're looking for appliances to fill our spots for the blue team for tf2." Sweetie Bloom then said "oh I think I've heard of that. Explains the hedgehog over there."
Then ponits to me as I walked over from the file cabinet. "Thank you! You know, aside from doc and ink rose, your the only one who ACTUALLY got it right. *ahem* Spear the hedgehog, at your service." "Sweetie bloom, pleasure to meet you." She replied sweetly, then said "hey, think I can join?"
Well...that was fast. And I know fast. Doc then asked "well, do you know the various forms of combat we go though here?" Sweetie bloom then said with a confused look "umm, one moment." She left outside where me and doc heard gun fire and explosions from outside as sweetie returned saying "I am now proficient in training combat...sort of." ...yep. DEFINITELY has Pinkie pie mixed in there.
Doc then said "Ok...any idea how to use a shot gun?" Sweetie bloom then said "umm point and shoot?" I then asked "what about a cloking field?" She replied "why? Is the field cold?" As if on cue, and explosion sounded with multiple mounds from Our friends outside as Sweetie bloom said "Sorry about that." ...this when on for a bit. "Ok...what about building a Teleporter? "I can not do it captain!"
Me and doc were getting frustrated that Sweetie bloom basically knew nothing of the game and I was starting to think she was a lost Cas as doc calmly said "look, miss bloom, I appreciate your willingness to contribute. But at the very least we require someone who at least has knowledge of the equipment we use around here." I then chamed in "Come on Sweetie, is there ANYTHING you have experience in that can help here? Maybe like throwing skills or something. "
Sweetie bloom was thinking about what she could do when out of nowhere, fire brand walks in and says "Hey there. was dissecting a hippogrff without a license, takes awhile to do, when all of a sudden, a mare came blasting though a wall like a bullet bill and I cut off his arm. So, what did I miss?"
Sweetie bloom then said with a gloom expression "oh, my bad. Just trying to figure out which weapon I should use." She then had a sinister look on her face as she said "oh, that reminds me. I been practicing with THIS bad boy." She the pulled out...a long sword?! Where was she hiding that? "You remember this, right firebrand?" It didn't take a genius like Twilight that these two have a history and Sweetie bloom was about to explode like one of Mandy's rockets.
And it didn't help that firebrand replied "yes, and you tried to throw it at me like prince Phillip and smashed some furniture. Whether that's Cas you have the depth perception if a cyclops or a throwing leg of a filly, I'm not sure." It was at this minute that we knew...he 
up. "Not a fan of my throw leg huh? Maybe I'll do better In Close conners. Practice makes perfect. I'll show you what I filly can do!"
Sweetie bloom them processed to slash and beat up firebrand to a pulp as me and doc Twitched at the stabs she was doing. But then I had a idea that would be perfect for Sweetie. Doc saw my look and said "you deal with miss bloom and I'll check on firebrand." I them said "deal." As doc when to check on firebrand, sweetie bloom came over and said "Sigh. I guess I'm not experienced enough. Sorry for wasting your time, have fun on your project. "
I then stopped her and said "Actually, hold on Sweetie. There may be a class that's perfect for you! Your good with melee, have a Scottish accent, and has a explosive personality. And good depth perception isn't a necessity for this class."
Sweetie bloom then said "go on..." I then told her "Sweetie! Welcome to the team as blue demoman...or demomare? Whichever one you like!" She swelled with glee and rushed off to the lockers to get her gear and run off to the battlefield. Things were about to get explosive. And I have a feeling it'll get even more exciting in the coming weeks!
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Sounds about right. Any idea how to do that?
Good job on the second part my friend
11919234
Emoji. A little flair from the show to here.
Thanks! I plan to put all the cus words with the
I don't blame you but it's a good idea
Looks good.
But uh, word of advice, when you write the character's interaction, make sure you separate them when starting a new paragraph.
2 Questions:
First: Were the ocs that appear made by you or are they from other people?
Second: Where they are allows them to do what they can do in the game, but if they die they can revive, is it like it's virtual reality without being virtual reality?🤔,I don't understand it very well😅(I don't know if I said it right
).
Other than that, the story is good
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First off, only Spear the hedgehog is my oc. The others are from different creaters. I added it in the title page.
Second, they have (or as the current chapter of this story, HAD.) A respwan generator that revives then after being killed. It's explained in part three of the seven nation army saga.