when Luna decieds to try to entertain herself by playing games with a guard she starts to feel something..
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Overall this story has alot of promise, I look forward to seeing it develop.
AMAZING, how could anyone type guard wrong.
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well first. making a typing error.
Second not have someone to edit.
Third being to tired to notice.
but ya
it was a pretty bad mistake.
at the last part i
so hard it wasn't even funny i must have more
Nice work, good pacing and interesting character development.
that seems a bit.....invasive
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sorry, I don't know what you mean. please explain.
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the whole going into peoples dreams thing. Just seems like a horribly disrespectful invasion of privacy to me is all. love the story though.
I really like this story so far but I was wondering if u could make them longer?
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the chapters hmmm, I don't know. I suppose I could but I like to keep it around 2,000 words and I end it when I feel like it should but I guess I could.
Thanks a bunch!
it's just cus I like to read long stories and this one would be a good read but great job dude! 
Great story, its hard to find clean stories out there involving romance.