You are a Khajiit and the Dragonborn and slayer of Alduin, the greatest vile dragon in Tamriel's history. You were on watch for the rebel Stormcloaks under the orders from General Tullius, the leader for the Imperial Legion in Skyrim. You found the army and a surprise. Alduin has somehow reincarnated and out for revenge. During the battle you were teleported to Equestria. You were brought to (surprise) save their world from Alduin. It's hard enough that you have to face Alduin you also need to find a way back to skyrim and kill Ulfric Stormcloak.
This story will go between different characters from a third person view and the dragonborn will be told through the first person perspective.
This is my first fic so please message me any and all mistakes. I'm not a great writter with grammar.
Guys this is my first time writing a fan fic for MLP so be as brutally honest as you can. Any suggestions please comment. I have most of the story written out but this chapter will determine if i continue or not so thanks for reading!
*faves without reading*
trollolololol
>Khajiit dragonborn
>Is an empire lackey
Yeaaaah.
1411454 really its that good? I didn't think it would be that great being my first fic thanks. Ill work on the next chapter as soon as I can.
.1411149 the other chapters coincide with the Imperial Legion and the lives of others characters outside of Equestria. That's all I am revealing now. The rest will have to wait
Well I am working with multiple Rica at the moment and I have a paper due in November so I wont have enough time to make more chapters as often
I actually really like this
i hope you find time to write more 
1560246yeah you try balancing out school video games and manage your time with ADHD. If I do find time I will but this story could/ WILL be on hold since Halo 4 is coming out election day. Vote for Chief
Good story so far. Just next time, start a new line when someone new speaks during a dialogue.
1734383 got it.. how do you let people pre-read stuff? And how do I use Google docs
1735619
. My friend and I just email our chapters to each other, then when we are finished making revisions, we email the edited doc back. Most of the work is done on word docs too, it helps with capitalization and other things the flow of ideas just doesn't care about.
I honestly have no idea how to use Google docs, I think it involves making the doc and inviting someone to view it, I only used it once, ah ain't a wiz at it
1735642 so you'd be interested in prediting
1735880
Yes
Wow I read my own story and need to write more of this... I got an idea and it involves Alduin
Ok so emails?