• Member Since 25th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Sep 18th, 2012

Shoryu


I'm one of those bronies from outside the US. Fancy that.

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I'll be honest, I was kind of skeptical to upload this, but I thought I'd may as well, instead of leaving a completed chapter to a story completely untouched.

I tried to set it in a kind of 'diary' style, whereby there not really any ponies talking, as such, more just Trixie expressing her feelings, and only Trixie.

*Rated Teen for language*

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 3 )

Intresting...I hope you'll get to the reason of her father's hatred of magic, too easy to miss.
Good story so far!

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That'll probably be the first things I'll bring up in the second chapter. I didn't really want to make a story and upload it in one day, unlike my other story. :derpytongue2:

Some grammatical (bet I spelt that wrong) errors here and there, otherwise it's really good.
Keep it up.

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