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Rarity, that was a step too far.
Besides, WHY not just f*** him when he's awake!!!???
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Awake/sleep is not the problem here. She wants this date to be absolutely perfect!! And that will be her downfall,
Let there be a sequel so Rarity can have a piece of Spuke.
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Already planned to be a trilogy, this is the second one. The third one, she gets her reward... and punishment.
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Niiiice.
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Thank you. Also, always great to see it on your many bookshelves
If this is another form of REM behavior disorder. And a lot of other medical reasons why it happens sexsomnia.
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I didn't really consider an advanced form of sexsomnia. Rather, I chose to treat it like REM behavior disorder because I already established he dreams of Rarity while committing the actions, thus dreaming needed to be the most important piece. All dreams start once we enter REM sleep. And boom, I have my trigger.
And we beging this epic story straight into the action... By not being straight at all in the slightest!
I can't imagine how hurt is Rarity's pride is afther Thunderlane claimed Spike Sleep-fucking him was the best sex he ever had, now he can join Thorax in the "Gay for Spike Club", much to Rarity's ire, although on other hoof, she couldn'be anymore proud of her Spikey Wikey as he tunred her virile stud of an On/Off Ex into his bitch on hid sleep!
There are worst destinations than death... And getting Cuckq by your own On/Off Ex is one of those!
And Desperate times require desperate measures, so she teleport Spike and herself to Manehattan and asked (ordered) Coco and Sassy to look afther spike and lot let anypony but herself to get in until she prepares everything for her best date ever, least to be said anyone from Ponyville may have followed them to have another go at Spike, like Sweetie Belle, Fluttershy And/Or Starlight, let alone Gabby, Smolder and Ember who just told her the most ridiculous thing that is the Sleep Heat of dragons!
Then again she should have thought better than leaving him under the care of two mares that can be just as thirsty as her enought to fuck each-other while listening to her fucking some stallion!
So is to nocreature's surprise that they both ended used as Spike's living sex toys and as addicted to both double-dragons and seed!!!
I shouldn't be worried about them being fired, I'm pretty sure Rarity will hire them again afther an apology lesbian threesome. Then again she could just punish them into just watching as Spike finally fucks her, both sleeping and awake.
If this story ends in just a trilogy I would like to suggest as a running gag that at the end of the story right afther Rariry's romantic turn of a perfect date/raunchiest sex, everycreature Spike has just either sleepfucked or have also romantic feeling for the drake incluiding Twilight, a second Rarity (Thorax) and the rest of the mane 6, just barge into the bedroom claiming that she had enought of hoarding spike for herself and is now their turn, but the most desperate one is being crossdressing Thunderlane! (Thalking about life-changing momments! XD)
Some Creatures fight for getting themselves a harem, Spike on other hoof/hand/claw get his on his sleep!
Awesome job, really laughed my ass of from beginning to end! I will await the next sequel with trepidation!
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Hey, I've torture Thunderlane so many times, why not flip the script? Plus, he got locked in a vault and nopony knows where he is except for Rarity. So while his death isn't on screen, it's very much implied.
Unfortunately, no. This will not end in a harem. While all of them enjoyed it, bordering on addiction, I'm not bringing any previous ships back for the finale. The last part of the trilogy will be purely SpikeXRarity. Really, the only running gag I have been using is Rarity missing out on Spike. So why not let her get the prize finally... and her punishment too. Head over here, the bottom listing for new stories coming out this month and you will see the preview
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Lol, can't wait for the sequel in which Rarity will get her dragon, both sleeping and awake.
I wonder at the end of the series we're going to see some future baby Kirin after getting busy with all those mares. 😏
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Nah, no happy endings for this one. Just funny and mildly disturbing. Check the preview for part three in one of the other comments.
But I might do some dragon half breeds in a separate story. Always loved the idea of tackling fanon children like Crystal Clarity from the artist, kilala97. But barely had the time dealing my own universe and multiple timelines, let alone fully explore someone else. As for next gen kids in my own works, my main timeline is moving far too slow to take such a drastic jump in time, but I have planned up to at least Twilight's retirement and several ships settling down. No luck on thinking out kids yet.
Who said is going to be a happy ending by giving birth to Kirins. Regular ponies can't handle birth of Kirins because in my brain are two different types. You got the regular TV show Canon appearance and you got the original fan made idea dragon-pony hybrids that has more dragon appearance than pony.
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True, but sounds like a lot of extra work for a one off joke. At most I could do without sidetracking too much is have the city covered in kirin babies that each of the main six has to help take care of.
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Yeah you're probably right but you can use as a The back burner idea for a story.. Or a what if non-Cannon story that's not connected to any of your main stories.
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Yeah, I've got no problem doing that joke as a main idea for a separate one shot, that's fine. Just in this story it would be too much side tracking, since the baseline of this story is Spike sleep fucking. Kirin offspring could happen in any clop featuring Spike and some ponies, not particularly this one.
Even better than the first!
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Thank you. I'm so glad this one is just as great. Hopefully the finale of this trilogy with the top of the list.
Rarity,Rarity, Rarity...
When will you realize your quest for the perfect date, like waiting for tomorrow, is a fallacy??? There is no such thing as the perfect opportunity. You know Spike has a huge hard-on (quite literally in his case) for you and kudos to you for actually realizing that you feel the same way for him. Still it sucks that it took losing his first to your sister of all mares, the one mare of the Mane 6 that argumentally may tie you as the most beautiful of the group (and Fluttershy isnt even trying), another talented unicorn that also knows first-hand of Spike's 'potential
', and two of your best employees to finally realize Fortune Favors the Bold. To hell with perfect--that is impossible. Take your chance now Rarity, and to hell with the consequences!!!
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Yeah, I'm really playing in Rarity's vanity with this build-up. It will all be worth it in the trilogy's finale where she gets everything she wants... in the worst ways possible. Rarity should have just taken him when she had the chance. Next time, the true beast awaits her.
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And when will that story be published?
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Yeah, I'll admit the third one has been slowing me down. Been having a hard getting the scene started. The middle and ending are finished, but that spark of a beginning is tripping me up. Plus this trilogy is standing as my highest rated story period, I don't want to disappoint you with a lackluster third act.
I'm giving myself till Christmas. If it doesn't come out by then I'll announce a cancellation and an apology, or maybe a story transfer
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Also, thank you for the follow, always glad to have new readers