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A long time ago in a galaxy far far away. The galaxy is in ruins, the Celestial Republic barely holds control over the inner rim territories let along the outer rim territories. The galaxy just barely survived the two most recent wars, The Maredalorian Wars and the Celestial Republic Civil War. The Maredalorian wars over 10 years ago still are causing damage to the planets of the outer rim. The Maredalorians waged total war on the republic and lost there home planet Mareachor XII. As a result of losing their home the once brave and honorable warriors turned to mercenary work and Raiding. The outer rim planets secceded from the republic after the Maredalorian Wars. Tired of never really reciving and standing army or supplies from the Republic or the inner rim planets the outer rim planets were through supporting the Republic, paying their taxes, or supplying them with food or men for wars. The outer rim planets were barricaded out preventing any trade to the inner rim planets. The planets on the outer rim banded together to form and army and they waged war against the republic. After a long and costly war the Republic won. The Republic forced the outer rim planets to re-join under no conditions. After the Jedi suffered extreme loses during the two major wars they refused to work for the Republic. They even abandoned the Jedi temple on Coruscant. With no Jedi to help them and a sith presence in the outer rim will the Republic survive? Or will their be a new ruler in the Galaxy?

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Pretty good chapter, I've noticed a bunch of little grammatical errors. Either check another time or get a pre-reader to check that for you. Keepwriting I see improvement as you go.

Comment posted by Grey Dawn deleted Sep 6th, 2015
Comment posted by Grey Dawn deleted Sep 6th, 2015

Hmm, no rocket to the face for Archangel? At least she is a sniper. Now lets see if she is good with calibrating a ships weapon systems too.

Also, Vibroblades withstand Lightsabers because they are made of an ore called cortosis. Gah, my inner Nerd shows again.^^°

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