The Long Play
With a sound like rushing wind, a group of exhausted ponies appeared in Twilight’s study at the Regia, bruised, battered, and smelling heavily of smoke and ozone. As the three Wielders collapsed on the ground, exhausted, Twilight spun on Luna, who was taking in her surroundings.
“How could you just leave Golden Radiance like that? There was no purpose served by her death!”
Luna’s face was grave. “If we had left without a rear guard to be sacrificed, then Cadance would have been able to follow us back here. And in our state, odds are good she would have leveled the Regia entirely with us not able to do a thing to stop it.”
Twilight’s horn flared, and her armor began to remove itself, settling on a nearby rack. “That’s impossible. You can’t just ‘follow’ a teleportation spell.”
“Twilight, an Alicorn just earned her status as a goddess tonight. Believe me when I say that you have no idea what she is and is not capable of. Golden Radiance’s death allowed a chance for our trail to disperse enough that she could not follow it.”
Twilight snorted. “Yes, we noticed. We lost good ponies tonight because she somehow became super-powerful. I thought she had come into her own as a goddess! But instead I had to ward myself against high-level mental manipulation the entire time we were fighting. What happened?”
Luna’s voice was weary and low. “Cadance has performed what is commonly known as a soulbind. It is something that a very few can achieve. In fact, before tonight, only two have ever managed to initiate one, though hundreds have experienced it. I will explain later, but I must know who we are able to rely on.”
Twilight took a deep breath, composing herself. “Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Applejack can be relied on. Rainbow Dash is downstairs in the infirmary being treated for severe magical atrophy, and now that we have arrived, an operative will be up to inform us on how our plan to retrieve Rarity is commencing.”
At that moment, the door opened, revealing a Changeling holding a message sphere. Luna’s eyes widened, but as the Changeling bowed politely, she did nothing except return the gesture. Without a word, it handed the sphere to Twilight, who set it in a plinth on a nearby table and activated it. It began to glow purple as she spoke into it.
“Hailing strike team Bishop, come in Bishop. What is your status?”
The light in the sphere coalesced into the familiar visage of Rarity. She seemed surprised to see Twilight, though she quickly assumed an air of businesslike calm.
“Good evening, Twilight. Apologies if this wasn’t who you were expecting, Sweetie Belle is currently being treated for a broken leg, and Glimmer took an arrow earlier while we were escaping, which means I’m the only one who can use this thing. We’re about ten minutes into the Everfree and expect to arrive within the hour.”
Twilight didn’t skip a beat. “I’d like to know who in my party is still alive and undamaged, please.”
Rarity smiled. “Of course. Sweetie Belle is alive, as is Birchwood and Glimmer. Young Scootaloo is here as well, and the Gryphon. She’s been training her crossbow on me this whole time, and refuses to tell me her name, though I’ve heard Birchwood call her ‘Mahta’. That’s it.”
“I think you’re missing one. Is Night Light there?” Twilight inquired.
Rarity’s face fell. “Unfortunately, he is not. We were pursued, and he stayed behind to hold them off. Sweetie Belle is quite distraught.”
Twilight was stunned. “I…see.”
Rarity continued. “We’ll be there soon, Twilight. From what I can tell, you’ve been planning something big, and I must admit everypony on Celestia’s side has been curious as to what.”
With that, the sphere went dark. Twilight turned to her three friends, who were only now getting to their hooves. “Are you all alright?”
Fluttershy nodded weakly. “I just need to lie down for a while. It’s been a long day.”
Pinkie Pie looked around. “Do you have any water? I could use a drink.”
Applejack sat down heavily. “Same here. And while you’re at it, maybe you can explain why I should still be trusting you, Twilight. Seems to me I've been lured here under false pretenses.”
Twilight had completely forgotten to inform Applejack of her stake in all of this. Sighing, she stripped away the last of her armor. As the Changeling next to her opened the door, she gestured to the stairwell behind it. “Maybe we should sit down and discuss this somewhere more congenial. I’ll see if Rainbow Dash can be moved from her bed. If not, we’ll just have to bring it to us. We can start once Rarity arrives.”
As it turned out, Rainbow Dash was conscious and lucid, which was more than could be expected of her. Tarantella had intercepted Twilight as the Element of Loyalty was being moved, and informed her of their conversation. Twilight, while upset that Tarantella had attempted to speak with the dangerous Pegasus alone, was understanding of her motives.
“Honestly, I had no idea that Rainbow Dash blamed us for the death of Stormchaser. This puts things into perspective. And you’re sure she said that she would have no part in the conflict?”
Tarantella shook her head, watching as the bed was wheeled into the meeting room where they would be speaking. “She wants nothing to do with us. I don’t know how to turn her, and I certainly can’t force her to declare allegiance to us. She’s set in her ways.” She looked at Twilight worriedly. “You haven’t slept much, have you?”
Twilight looked her lover in the eyes, reminded of the question she had been so tempted to ask this morning. “Of course not. When have I ever gotten enough sleep?”
The Condottiero laughed. “True enough. Promise me that you will rest when you are done here. You do no good to your followers when you are exhausted.”
Twilight nuzzled her briefly. “Of course. But for now, I must go to work.”
The doors opposite them opened up, and Rarity walked through calmly, followed behind by Sweetie Belle, who looked more tired and drained then Twilight had ever seen her look before. The alabaster unicorn turned to her sister, murmuring something. Sweetie Belle nodded, sitting down heavily and favoring her foreleg. A medic rushed forward from near Rainbow Dash’s bedside and began to examine her, his horn lighting up as he checked her for injury.
Rarity approached the ruler of the Regia before sinking into a courtly bow. “Twilight. It’s been a long time.”
Twilight tilted her head curiously. “I can’t help but notice that you haven’t tried to assault me. I assume that means you have broken your ties to Celestia.”
“I’m sure I have no idea what you mean, Twilight.”
The purple unicorn’s horn sparked with light, sending a lance of energy at Rarity. The stunned unicorn could only watch as violet sparks erupted from her coat, catching the blow before she could even react. Twilight nodded in satisfaction. “You have. This makes things much simpler.” She turned to Tarantella. “Do you wish to stay or leave, Tara?”
Tarantella smiled. “I think I will stay. I want to hear this.”
Twilight nodded before turning to address the rest of the room. “Now, I think that we are all here. Guards have been set at the doors, there are drinks available. Your wounds have been seen to, and you are all gathered under one roof for the first time in years. Are there any who do not wish to be here?”
Applejack sat at the table, her face resolute and expectant. She still had a score to settle with Twilight, and she wanted to know exactly why her onetime friend had thought it appropriate to steal her child. Fluttershy was next at the table, meek and demure, but steadfast in her commitment to peace. Rainbow Dash looked on from her spot, her bed an oddity in the room, but the Pegasus within somehow still as threatening and regal as ever. Rarity took a seat next to Pinkie Pie, her face calm and composed. She had made her choice back in Canterlot. She was Twilight’s pony now.
Sweetie Belle almost opened her mouth to say something. She didn’t want to be here, she didn’t want to do anything except curl up in a ball somewhere and cry. But there was time for that later. Now she was needed at the table. She got to her hooves and hobbled forward, stopping at a hoof on her shoulder.
It was the medic. He leaned in closely. “Ma’am, I think we need to talk after you are done here. It’s not urgent, but it is important. Please, come see me after you’ve finished with Lady Sparkle.”
She nodded, shaking him off and taking her place at the table. One more thing to add onto the list, then.
The last pony to take her seat at the table was Princess Luna, holding two boxes of metal in her telekinetic grip. One contained Twilight’s Element, and the other Rainbow Dash’s. She set them down on the table, looking at Twilight expectantly. The unicorn stepped forward along with Tarantella, taking her seat at the circular slab of wood. The Condottiero sat at her right hoof.
Twilight smiled and began. “Firstly, I would like to thank you all for being here. You’ve placed a lot of trust in me, and I cannot express how much that trust means to me. I owe a lot of you answers, and it’s time that I peeled back the curtains and showed you all the truth. We have a lot of information to cover, and very little time in which to do so. So, the first order of business is to establish where we are now as opposed to when Luna was imprisoned, four years ago.”
Luna looked at a chart in front of her. “Am I correct in saying that you have the Everfree Forest under your control?”
Twilight nodded. “Completely, with the help of Radiant Zenith. Also, we have used the Changelings to great effect. Celestia’s intelligence networks are completely compromised, and we were able to eliminate many important nobles tonight as well as some of the top generals. Basically, we have decapitated Celestia’s army.”
“And you are sure you can trust the Changelings?”
Twilight nodded. “A patrol stumbled across the Hive about a year after you were captured. Though relations were tenuous at first, we quickly realized that the Changelings really only ever wanted food. And we were happy enough to give them that in return for their help. Chrysalis has been cooperative, and the Changelings as a whole are actually far more intelligent and empathetic than we gave them credit for. It’s almost like they’re ponies, just…not.”
Luna thought about that, gesturing for Twilight to continue.
“Tonight, agents of the Ever Free, working in conjunction with the Order of the Crescent Moon and the Changelings, have overthrown the garrisons in Trottingham, Hoofington, and Los Pegasus. Those cities are now under our control, and we are working on reinforcing them using the Ever Free militia, while the Lunar Guard and Lunar Reserve are holding the perimeter of the Forest. We think that if we can present a large enough show of strength, then Celestia will have no choice but to allow us independence.”
Rainbow Dash spoke up, wheezing slightly. “Not a chance. She wants you bad, Twi. She won’t stop until she has you.”
Luna nodded in agreement. “Celestia cares little for armies or nations. She considers it her sacred duty to bring you back to Canterlot.”
Twilight’s face set. “Well, she can’t have me. We’re dug in deep and ready for whatever she can throw at us. She’s got a wrecked army and no way to contact her commanding officers, those that are left.”
“But she does have Cadance.” Luna cautioned. “And Shining Armor still leads the Guard. He would have been up on the mountain tonight.”
Twilight turned to Luna. “I think you should tell me exactly what I am going up against when I’m fighting Cadance. What is a soulbind? How can she have gotten more powerful because of it? And is there any way for me to match her?”
Luna sighed. “Tell me, what do you know of magic in nature, Twilight Sparkle? How are unicorns able to use it actively where others cannot?”
Twilight thought back to her days at Celestia’s Academy. “Magic exists all throughout Equestria. It flows in natural patterns called ley lines, and permeates everything we do here. This is why Earth ponies can encourage plant growth and Pegasi can manipulate weather. Unicorns as a general rule can’t manipulate big things like that reliably, but we can use smaller amounts over a wider range of applications. Each unicorn, and any sentient creature who uses magic, draws from a reservoir of energy deep inside of them. The power of the user stems from two things.”
Twilight seized a cup and a pitcher of water, using them as a demonstration. “The first is reservoir size. This determines how much magic a user can access at any time. This is where the raw talent aspect comes into play. I have a large reservoir, so I can use large amounts of energy.”
She poured a glass as the others watched with interest. “The second is how efficiently you can regulate the flow of energy. That’s a result of discipline and teaching, which is what makes the difference between a student and a master Mage. Even if they have the same well of power, the master will be more powerful because he can better release and control his power.”
She took a small sip to illustrate the release of power. “I always looked at it like flowing water. Horns are the ‘pumps’, and the will of the caster moves water through the pump. It’s a focus point. Theoretically it would be possible to channel energy through another part of the body, say a hoof, but that would be extremely difficult for unicorns because we only ever concentrate it through the horns. That would be like trying to pump water with a hammer. It just doesn’t work.”
Luna nodded. “Now, what about sharing magic?”
Twilight’s face flushed. “Unicorns can share magic on rare occasions. They did it back before Celestia and Luna arrived in order to move the sun. It involves giving up ownership of your magic, and trusting one user to manipulate it in a beneficial manner. Generally, it’s only undertaken by those who trust one another implicitly.”
She lined up more glasses, pouring water into them until they were partly full and the pitcher was empty. As she spoke, she began to pour the glasses back in. “By pooling magic, you allow for one unicorn to do things she would not normally be able to do. Moving the sun and moon comes to mind.”
She poured water from the pitcher back into one glass before draining it dry in a quick gulp. “That about sums it up.”
Luna smiled. “That’s correct. Very well done, Twilight. Now, I must ask you one more question. Can a unicorn ever hold more than their reservoir can hold?”
Twilight shook her head. “There’s a limit. It would be very dangerous, possibly deadly, for a unicorn to have that much magic.”
Luna took the now empty glass and the pitcher. “I can tell you that not only is it possible for that to happen, but that it used to happen frequently, and that ponies survived it. It was what happened when my sister and I approached our subjects too closely, worked with them on projects or took them as lovers.”
Twilight tilted her head. “What do you mean?”
Luna sighed. “There is a school of thought that suggests that magic is in fact the essential makeup of the soul, that it is something about the souls of unicorns that allows them to store and use magic instead of manipulating it as the Pegasi and Earth ponies do. And when you share magic, you are allowing your soul to come directly into contact with the souls of others. This is why it is such an intimate experience for unicorns. To share magic, one must share a small amount of your soul.”
Fluttershy smiled. “That doesn’t sound too bad.”
Luna’s lecture continued. “The sharing of magic involves sharing every spark of magic available, and parceling it out evenly. This is no problem if the unicorns in question are evenly matched in terms of power. Most unicorns are close enough in magical ability that a sharing of magic is not an issue. Any excess energy is vented quickly enough. However, what do you think would happen if one side of that equation was much more powerful than the other? What if it were, say, a goddess?”
Luna picked up the pitcher, pouring water in to the cup until it began to run over. Her point illustrated, she cleaned up the water and turned back to the ponies who were staring at her in wonder. “But that much magic isn’t vented. It’s impossible to release that much, like a pump that is under extreme pressure. So it sits, and it waits. As the unicorn regains more and more of its own magic, the shared magic is placed under greater and greater pressure. Soon, it has no place to go. The unicorn in question is torn between the goddess and its own magic. It is bound to her.”
Twilight’s voice was small. “A soulbind.”
Luna nodded. “At this point, there is so much extra magic that it may as well have become a third unicorn. Before we could find a way to contain it, a soulbind would inevitably result in the explosive venting of magic from the unicorn’s body. And it wasn’t just the excess, either. All magic would be released, as the unicorn attempted to rid itself of all foreign magic. The cure would kill them, forcing the soul out of them.”
The purple unicorn’s mind was moving fast, trying to apply the information as quickly as possible. “But why did she become more powerful as a result?”
“Because she received a large portion of her magic back. And not just her magic, a small amount of Celestia’s magic.” Luna said. “She was supposed to undergo her soulbind much earlier. More than a decade ago, in fact.”
Twilight’s eyes flashed in understanding. “The Royal Wedding. She gave away her power to Shining Armor at the Wedding, when they kicked out the Changeling Queen.”
Luna nodded proudly. “Exactly. Finally, she was able to regain her power, and more. She has received her full measure of magical potential, and she reflects that in her physical form. Celestia and I underwent the same changes during our first soulbinds. Now she is on the same level as she and I when it comes to power.”
Twilight’s analytical mind was working extremely quickly. “But what about Shining Armor?”
“He is in stasis on top of the mountain Canterlot is built on. I could sense the residual energy when I was fighting Celestia. His soul has fled his body, but he has been covered in ice to prevent damage. Cadance will release him soon, and his soul shall return to his body from the vessel it was placed in. Soon, all that will remain is a crystal sphere, containing one perfectly blank soul.”
There was only one question remaining to Twilight. “And why does Celestia want that soul?”
Luna’s expression was grim. “The Elements are a force of Life and Order. To reforge them, Celestia must present an offering. To bring back your Element of Magic, she must give a life. And now she has one, ready for the giving.”
The box containing the Element of Magic appeared at her side, and she split it open, revealing the fractured gem inside. “In three days’ time, she will have all the energy from the Element of Magic gathered in one spot. She will make her offering. She will reforge her Element. And you will fall, Twilight Sparkle.”
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Welp. That explains a lot.
So, at this point, Shining's gone anyway - a blank soul, Luna said. His personality and mind are effectively gone, aren't they?
wow, so thats what a soulbind is. neat! to bad it's gonna be used to defeat twilight.
Well, that's upsetting
The suspense is killing me I must have more...
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Shining's soul is fine. The soulbind created an extra soul, that was never born in the first place. Celestia will sacrifice that.
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Nope. His soul is still trapped in the sphere, but when it is returned to his body, there will be another soul in the sphere. Think of it like a mixture of him and Cadance.
So as I understand it, Shining Armor's soul is splitting into two distinct entities, like an amoeba? I believe this calls for a song.
To the tune of Rossini's William Tell Overture.
Fuuuuu
Fu fufu fu fu fu fu fu fu
fufufufu fufufufufufufufufuf
fufufufufufufufufu
fuuuuuu
fufufuck.
...it appears that Celestia holds several aces....
Hopefully, Twilight is resourceful enough to avoid this.
Awaiting further releases.
2289033 2289037 Ah. I misunderstood.
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I think it's more that Cadence is using it, and the excess energy Luna talked about is the blank "soul." At least, that's how I interpreted it. The whole idea is still confusing to me.
Awesome chapter! When is Sweetie Belle gonna find out she's pregnant?
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In order to reforge the Elements, Celestia needs to sacrifice a life. But doesn't it seem like kind of a jip to use an artificial soul? (That's essentially what it seems like the soulbind creates).
Not that I'm criticizing, but cheaters never prosper as it were.
Back on the clock again...damn
2288944 - I think the physics of this are more, 1+1=3. Cadence dumped her power into Shining. This forced his soul, and all that power out. Cadence was then able to re-absorb her power, effectively doubling her own (I think? It seems to be a quantitative amount a generative limit and a processing maximum all at once). Shining went back to his body now that the extra power is gone, and somehow the fusion produces a blank 'soul' all on it's own.
The metaphysics of this are very strange.
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Yep. Cadence has erased the stallion she once loved to archieve goddessness. Any doubt still lingering about how of a bitch she actually is?
Well, Shining's gone.
I'm a bit surprised that Cadence agreed to let Celestia use him as a sacrafice.
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Look at it as 1.5 + 1.5 = 3. They are overfilled glasses who now have emptied themselves into a new glass. Now there are three.
So it was quite literally a soulbind. I had a hunch, but wasn't quite sure. Anyway, to me, it seems as if through a complicated process, Shining and Cadance just poured mana into a container until it became large enough to replenish itself. Essentially, Cadance has been infused with two mana cores instead of one. *insert witty CPU related joke here.*
2288944 Hmm... I wonder what will happen if they tell Cadence of Celestia's plan to sacrifice Shining armors soul to reforge the element of magic under her control.
Magic needs a new bearer ...
Twilight would have to give up breaking magic to get back Magic (and i do not see that happening... at least not yet) but who else could take up the mantle?
Sweetie? na ... her talent is not magic...
a talented changeling? maby but no bonds of friendship for harmony to use ..
Trixie? (assuming she is still alive) ewwww!
heck .. i dont have a clue...
2289213 Even though I misunderstood (it's a new soul, not Shiny at all), it's been made pretty clear that Cadance supports Celestia through and through.
Discord keeps looking a better and better way to force your side doesn't he? Only one thread left bound to his rotting cage now after all. He may be a ticking bomb, waiting to go off, but even see would choose freedom over celestia's eternal law.
The nature of getting close to the chained spirits isn't going to happen between the power difference between the two sides. And if she even with the core elements on her side to make a strike there, celestia merely has to draw on her stored power there, and its over, the spirits can be rechained with luna and the new alicorn for twilights capture. Its a simple matter of power. And right now, he is the only player still left unclaimed on the active or reserve field that can attack with power to worry. The real question, more so, is wether or not dash dies to break him from those chains? Its painfully apparent that folks are going down and out of the count, the only issue is how much of the world is going to be left unscarred in the aftermath. Ultimately, in the end, even in death, twilight still wins, such as that option exists.
Should or when Shining Armor die. It still won't matter with the nature of power differences. Good, or bad, twilight has very few options left, and it comes back to what you point out, power. All the skill and ability doesn't matter when your foes are as skilled as you and have more power. It becomes an endurance match that you lose every time. The only good option you have is to make the cost of winning so high, there is no recovery, no chance but mutual annihilation. The M.A.D. Doctrine worked for a reason. No one would risk it. Immortality is a curse when you cannot fix a dead world.
Cadence herself would be a quick fix time stop for the rioting and the nature of fires about the world to stop, thalls, or slaves, there is little difference on that aspect. Her nature is that which will make sure of that more quickly than an inquisitors knife for any personnel that twilight has in the field inciting the riots. Your little propaganda machine that you can send out and achieve victory.
In the end of things, it comes back to destroying the base of celestia's power, the frozen wards and enraged spirits. Anything else save her capture ultimately ends the same, the world loses. Its just a question of the cost for twilight.
dwam
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I like the concept here, but the description here doesn't work... Unicorns and alicorns can pool their magic by putting all their magic into one "container" or soul if I'm reading that right. But when one is vastly more powerful than the other, the overflow causes problems unless extra precautions are taken.
So Cadence pushed her magic into Shining, and the overflow was more than she put in in the first place? That's like pouring a gallon of water into a thimble and getting two gallons of overflow.
The blank soul I'm kind of iffy on as well - I didn't see any real justification to make a new soul in the description . The only way I can make it work in my head is that the vessel that held his during this process made a kind of impression of a soul when it was holding him. Like making a fake key by impressing a real one in clay.
2289375 I honestly believe he's not a clean slate I think Cadence honestly believes he can still be brought back and if that's the case then cadence will try and save his soul from Celestia any way possible.however if what you said is true then after cadence gets a taste of true power then will she truly wish to give it up to Celestia?
great chapter! still a little confused over how exactly soul bind works, but ill get it with time.
so, three days story wise, within that time the climax will be reached, hopefully there will be quite a few chapters during that period, i don't want it to end!
i wonder how twilight is gonna counter cadence, anyways, it's gonna be epic!
Finally caught up! This has been one heck of a ride, Airstream.
My only comment: keep up the excellent work!
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kind of like the child they'll never have, sort of thing?
I've said it once, I'll say it a million times more, this is an absolutely stunning piece!
I've finally caught up and you have me hanging on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
Huh...
I like it. Though it is starting to seem like a Pyrrhic victory might be the best way to go for Twilight.
Wow , Celestia has been busy alright.
But now that her plan is revealed will it succeed?
2289037 So sacrificing their soul child...thing then?
Well the obvious solution is to steal that soul from Celestia and either merge with it or somehow turn it into a proper pony and give it the element of magic. I could be wrong but I felt like between this and it's prequels that the elements of harmony were some kind of binding of greater forces. So, if she could simply break all the bindings at wherever that place Twilight and Celestia bumped into each other along Ley Lines was, that would even the odds a little.
Idle Speculation:
It would be interesting if Twilight could figure out how to reforge the element herself (maybe she could sacrifice herself to make it work). I mean it's what she was trying to avoid in the first place. Then maybe Luna could use it?
Why's everypony being so nihilistic? The Element of Magic is an element just like the others, right? So wouldn't the logical thing be for Twilight to foil Celestia by becoming a Wielder too? Why couldn't that happen?
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You've actually anticipated the next half of the lecture, next chapter. That's not something that happens often with my work, apparently.
Have an internet.
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Yay! I had to create an account just to make that comment, is how much I love this story ^^
oh i swear to GOD, celestia better not win this
2296889 ... She needs to die.. I dont care if it was for the good of all. She needs to die
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The question is: why Twilight isn´t a Weilder yet, after long time figure out how to break the other Elements?
If the requeriment is usualy the feeling of an strong negative emotion (anger, grief), we already now that Twi suffers an emotional rollercoaster as consequence of her breaking magic, plus ther duties as leader of the Rebellion which has unfortunatelly caused thousands of victims for the greater cause.
2297683
I share your sentiment, but sadly Celestia as the avatar of Order is a necessary part of Equestria, as much as Luna and Discord. This said, imprison her after the proverbial bitchslap is a more suitable option.
2297683
she needs to die here....
and in the show
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that would be.... intreasting XD can you imagine it if they just killed her off :D it would be magnificant
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I've just finished Lines and Webs. I really enjoyed it for the most part, my main complaint is that you have stomped any role the rest of the Mane 6 might have aspired to play, effectively sentencing them to mindless obedience with their (growing) EoH conditioning. I really hope this will change in the sequel, because being Celestia's pawns is an incredible waste of potential for them (bordering on an insult), but seeing you didn't even put up the M6 character tag for the story, I'm starting to worry.
Anyway, I've only recently come to know about this fic (finished the prequel in the past two days), would you mind telling me whether you're close to finishing? I prefer reading complete stories and if you plan on wrapping it up soon, I would rather wait for a bit and read it when it's done. I'd read the comments but I'm afraid of spoilers. Thanks.
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I'd say we're about two thirds of the way done here.
As for the Mane 6, I've fleshed them out a bit more in this, given them a bit more life and purpose.
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Thanks for the quick reply. Might as well start reading, you seem to be cutting through it pretty fast.
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Enjoy!
based on the medics reaction celestias spell took hold in sweety
3095117 Or you know, that one night stand.