Rainbow Dash is taking a nap, but her subconscious has bigger plans.
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- Member Since 18th May, 2012
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KartalTheWriter
Just a kid with a selfish dream, waiting on people to be what they seem.
KartalTheWriter
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Just over the word minimum. Nice.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
This explains everything!
If I had a motivational speaker for a subconsciousness, I would be pretty big headed too!
I am impressed.
You're a pretty goo writer, I say. Well, at least better than me.
But anyway, I do really like this.
Have a mustache.
Far out.
I like it. You know, if I didn't know better, I would think that RD was having a flashback. A conversation with one of her parents, or a very influential mentor is who I envisioned her speaking with in the dream.
You have piqued my interests.
thats right nightmare, make her think your on her side. this one will be even tougher to crack than luna was.
i saved this when i saw it uploaded, but then i forgot about it. sorry for taking so long before checking it out.
1403294
Really? I thought she was crazy and talking to herself.
1403294>>1472266 Both interesting interpretations...not what I had in mind though...
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Hey, it happens. Don't worry about it; everything can be fixed in time.
TheHylianBatman, freelance editor. Nice to meet you.
1472333 Kartal the Writer, jack of all trades and master of none. Nice to meet you too.
Yes, everything can definitely be improved. This however, I think is just a difference of interpretation. Everything has one.
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True... very true...
Well, I found this rather... Well... I wanna say cute, but... I dunno. Still, very good. Nothing less than what I expected from you Kartal. Keep up the great work that you do! Thinking about reading another........ Maybe.
By the way, I think I'm your 2,000th story view.
Congradulations!
Very nice! Love how her dream speaker was giving her a pep talk, but did remind of her of her faults, like how she treated her friends! Awesome short story!
I was all set to fave this, but the Mare Do Well bit kind of stopped that...mostly because I love that episode.
I'll still upvote it, though