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One day, Twilight sees a really cool awesome lunchbox from her favorite movie series, Celestial Wars. Of course, she has no choice but to buy it. There is something weird about the lunchbox though. Twilight seems to be addicted to it. Will Twilight be able to cope with the horrors this lunchbox will put her through?
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I'll be pissed if this gets featured.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
Edit: But, it gave me a giggle so, I'll up vote it....
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LOL
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LOLWTFILIKEDIS
Like the story but....
Nope, this time it was the picture.
The picture is like half the popularity.
Lolz. I loved this!
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Aaand done.
(Delayed reaction to what I just read)
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nope not mad enough...
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1463688 Thanks.
Is that supposed to be like c-3po or something? Except really gay? wtf.
1490812 Dude... C3PO is gay. You know it's R2
1490848 Fuck that's what I meant. How did I screw that up... lol. I've seen the first three star wars movies like 20 times lol.
It was simple, but it was funny.
Two things to look at is that a)there's a lot of "was", "were", "is", etc. type dry, descriptive language that made the writing seem not as character-ish and action-ish as it could have been and b)in terms of paragraph formatting, separate out one character's words/thoughts/etc from another's.
There are probably some other things that can be looked at, but those come most to mind.
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Because some people are REALLY overprotective of certain items of relative value... Like my Game Boy SP! I rarely trust anyone other than myself with it!
2059523 Exactly! You understand!
2059557 Not only do I understand the joke of the story, I'll show you why:
Late 1990's: Some of my family members don't aprove of me using my GAMEBOY(Big white one) too often. They throw it away.
Early 2002: I get a GAMEBOY ADVANCE for X-mas... only to have it stolen a month later by some random classmate.
2003: I get another model. One morning however, my aunt gets angry at me for going back for it when we were running late for school and she broke it. I was ACTUALLY getting a game I borrowed so that I could return it as promised.
2006-present day: GAMEBOY SP in my possesion. I'm very picky as to who can hold it. Anytime someone had made a joke about breaking it I flatly but seriously responded: "I'll break your stuff."
2060785 Some guy stole my DS out of my backpack in 7th grade. Along with my Pokemon Pearl. Needless to say, I was very upset and would have killed the person who took it if I knew who it was
2062800 Agreed.
The games I lost were Wario Blast and Castlevania: Circle of the Moon..........Actually, I also lost FFVI Advance but that was an accident and it was SO hard to find that one in the first place! I just don't know were it went!