My life is an uninteresting one, on the outside. I appear to be a normal pony, but I am much more than that. Every time when I go to sleep in Equestria I awake as another pony, more specifically a night guard. I tell nopony, but when I move to Ponyville, what will happen to my other form. Will I be able to admit the secret to others, or will it kill me first.
Looks interesting, I'll read it soon.
Good shit. Spelling mistakes here and there but other than that you're good. Note this is for both day one and night one.
Okay, both love it and hate it, but still, pretty darn good. Could use elaboration, but I'm guilty of that as well.
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Fixed!
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Rolls? I'm hungry now...
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Silly colt, not that kind of roll.
1413932 U mean role?
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Yea ill fix that tomorrow.
GAAAAAAASP!!!
Not cool man
That wasn't nice.
NEVER RCV FLUTTERSHY! If that's okay with you...
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Fluttershy will get her revenge, you know... If that's ok with you.
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He didn't apply a Royal Voice spell, DovaShy just used her Thu'um without knowing.
NO!!! DON'T HURT THEM!!!
SADNESS
Good use of Latin. Although, I am sort of doubting if the Latin is actually being used in the right conjugation. Otherwise, nice job.