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RyuuKiba


Mexican Brony who studies animation. Is all for grimdark, adventure, and shipping stories. Avid gamer and cinephile... idk what else to put here lol

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It is the year 201 of the Fourth Era and the once glorious Equestrian Empire is but a shadow of its former self. Despair and sadness abound, while there is little joy to be had. It is in these troubled times that an Argonian Pony by the name of Khazur is accused of a crime he did not comit and sentenced to death.
As he struggles to save his life, little does he know that his escape will take him to the war-torn land of Skyrim. Here he will tumble into the flow of destiny, beginning adventures that would put the fate of reality itself in his hooves.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 72 )

This is awesome! Have a cookie! Oh wait... I will send it to you via dragon shout. FUS RO DAH! *cookie flies off from the force of the shout* There you go. :ajsmug:

I love the concept art and information! Are you going to shove in a couple of side quests into this? :rainbowhuh:

92723 "Her parents Lord Pine Winterfruit and Lady Snowberry of Winterfruit provided the needed acknowledgement of this fact.” :rainbowderp: Wait... My family name is pine! :applejackconfused:

i bloody knew someone would do this...

Oh look! A pony/Skyrim crossover! Who would have thought?! ;)

I love this, TES+Ponies is always a win but your level of detail is superb! :pinkiehappy:

You sir have opened the floodgates! Of Skyrim crossover fics. I salute you

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Yeah, it'sa race from the Elder Scrolls games, turned pony... give the fic a read yo know more :3

>>fearanger Hehe, good thing "Pine" is Lord Winterfruit's first name and not last name :3

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I'm new to replying here but what's with these numbers ._.

Yeah, there will be a few side quests hehe

I see the Sheogorath/Discord connection wasn't unique on my end, glad to see someone else saw the resmblence

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Yeah ^^ I did all theart, from the simple title image, to the "loading screen " chapter headers, to the concept art.
The only one I didn't do was the map, which I took from an official Elder Scrolls map and just photoshopped the ponified names in.

93591 ... I am having a stupid idea. *Mind go's into frenzy finding something and comes up with the companions* :rainbowderp: do that and I will murder you. NO NIGHT CREATURES!!!

100638 I assure you, vampires and werewolves will be around only to have variety in the stuff killed by the main character and/r his companions. XD

99602 Sheeeet :pinkiehappy: very good artist! love the fan art, do you have a DeviantArt page?

101552 Wow heh thank you ^^ and in fact I do have one heh here: http://ryuukiba.deviantart.com/ :twilightblush:

101085 So... the Argonian's compainions and enemies will be the only ones that are vampires of werewolves? THANK GOD!!!

104908 And it's actually stretching it to consider it probable that they'd be his companions... or actually important villains... In fact, I have no intention of giving any kind of leading or important supporting role to werewolves or vampires.

So... ratings at 3.4... but is Skyrim with ponies... and argonian pony to boot! Err, if you'll excuse my language.
Argonian is best pony.
*checks the fic again*
only 10k words? Ah, a short one then. Read it is! xD
Though be prepared for (hopefully) constructive critisism, assuming I manage to put it into words, and if it's needed.
(geh, sorry for the pessimistic pre-read review, but... ratings... Here's to hoping they end up on 5stars! =D xD )

Okay. I am at a complete loss here; why the fuck does this have 3.4 stars? it should be, at the VERY least, 4,5!
Now, have ALL my stars!

Again, I have to be shocked at how undeservingly low the ratings for this is. This is much MUCH better than I anticipated!
I will definetly be following this! Here's to hoping it turns into the new Fo:E xD

Also, argonian pony is by far the best pony.

110690 Thank you so much for your support and comments ^^ And yeah it's short for now... heh it's going to get much longer.
I hope it does come close to Fo:E... it was my primary source of inspiration.

Guard: Let me guess, someone stole your sweetroll?
Apricot: No, my friend killed him.
Guard: :rainbowderp:

EPIC! this story is awsome :D (wolf-trooper) btw ^^ :rainbowlaugh:

Nice chapter, and (for me) great action part.
The consep art rly helps with the mental image, at least I can practically see the events unfold right in front of me while I read

I agree, excellent story. I love the Pony/Elder Scroll lore almost seamlessly. The way how you integrate the races and mix them with ponies is very impressive. I cannot wait to see what comes next! Also, poor Pridetrotter D: That is such a horrible thing that happened to him. not only are you a gifted writer, but a gifted artist as well. Can't wait for the next loading screen! We're gonna level up soon I can feel it!

Woah. I am impressed at how much character you managed to stuff into the three prisoners in the short time we have known them.
Also, I love your worldbuilding; you are quite evidently following in Kkats footsteps when you combine it all like this. Whether or not the quality is the same remains to be seen. If you manage to pull that off too though... xD

Now then, I still don't know exactly what path Khazur is picking though; the Thief, the Mage, or the Warrior? Will that be clear at all?
Y'know, I might just ask that to the Ask Khazur blog...

And, lastly; I think I have mentioned this before, but I love how you do concept art of it all; it helps visualize everything. =D

:rainbowkiss:

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Ok, I loled XD
I don't think Khazur will be having an easy time eating the bread after this experience XD

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Thank you ^^ and hey there :3 glad to see you around here too

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thank you ^^ Action equences are fun to write, though they can get out of hand easily ^^

And yup, since many things in the story have a very peculiar descriptions, I add the concept art for those who'd like a visual representation

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Thank you ^^ I'm glad you enjoy both my storytelling and my drawing hehe. It's all part of what i wanted to be an inmersive experience ^^

Yeah, Pridetrotter is acharacter I grew very fond of while I wrote him, he appeared very little time and I needed him to come and go in this chapter while making an impression, so yeah heh.

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Hehe thanks ^^ and yeah, I needed readers to know and like Pridetrotter and Bonetail real fast because of how the chapter was going to unfold. I got Apricot's character in at the same pace so that the following events had readers unsure if he'd make it.
Hehe, I don't know how close or far I'll get from Kkat's example... rigth now I just want the story to unfold and be told. Where the story stands compared to my sources of inspiration will be something for much later.

Go ahead and ask khazur on the tumblr, I'm sure he'll be happy to anwer!

^^Like I mentioned before, the whole idea of the Concept art is precisely to provide a more inmersive experience for thse who'd like a visual representation of those concepts that might get confusing mid-crossover.

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Now that I read the chapter again (I like to analyze things.. Meaby thats why I like chess?) I see more clearly the environment and their expressions ( while I read a good fic a movie of the fic plays I'm my head while I read) and the whole almost no chance to escape, meaby a lil cliche but darn it it dosnt feel like one to me
Keep up the good job

Don't know if I've said so before, but you have my props:rainbowdetermined2:

120724 (while I read a good fic a movie of the fic plays I'm my head while I read) Same here! :raritywink:

MOARRRR!!!!!!!!!

i have always loved elder scrolls games and only recently got into MLP,
track+5 stars, "you've earned it" -Arena announcer from Elder Scrolls 4 Oblivion

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Hey least they didn't gave you a cat:eeyup:

> I noticed that the only time that poor pegasus spoke was right before he died.
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Now this shows some promise! Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is an amazing story!
I really hope it isn't dead though, it has some serious promise:applecry:

"In fact I was walking along the beach one day and spotted a unicorn, and proceeded to stabbing it in the neck with a crochet needle"

Greetings, I'm Twilight Sp-AAAAH!!!

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Not dead! Just had a very long Hiatus because of final semester in college and thesis and stuff. The next part should come by sooner than later

Finaly read it (^^u) Liked it a lot! Finally he tastes some blood (muahaha):pinkiecrazy:

We probably should have found a better armor before rushing out
Not that I was fat or anything but… whatever. spun
Yeah, good deeds alone don’t feel stomachs

1. Some/ or you didn't want anything there/ I was completely wrong.
2. Forgot your I after the full stop.
3. Feed.

And now they truly begin! The adventures I mean:unsuresweetie: Now we just need a smithy! And a more proficient mage:trixieshiftright: Or did she count as one already?

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