On Cloud Nine
“Alright, sure.” Discord took a bite of his doughnut. Pinkie munched hers down and took his hoof.
“Come on!” she raced across town and reached the park at lightning speed. Discord was exhilarated. Pinkie giggled. “Did I go too fast? Sorry.”
Discord gave her a smirk, “Too fast? I could outrun you any day of the week.” Pinkie nudged his shoulder.
“It’s on, Dissy.” She got in a starting stance. “We’ll race around town and back again. Oh, and no wings!”
“Ok, then.” He got in a starting stance, “Ready…set…”
“GO!!!” Pinkie zoomed off in front of him and he zipped after her as fast as Rainbow Dash would have.
They were soon neck and neck, traveling at an enormous speed. First, Pinkie inched ahead, “Ah, but your advance is to no avail!” Discord easily caught up with her.
Pinkie turned to him, “Oh, you haven’t seen what I can do yet…” she zoomed ahead and then called back to him, “I’M GONNA WIN, DISSY!” Discord picked up the pace, he’d never felt so free! It’d been eons since he’d had a good run, no, this wasn’t a good run, it was a great run. Somehow running with Pinkie Pie made it feel a lot more fun.
“Gotcha, now!” Discord said as he raced in front of Pinkie. Pinkie smirked and moved ahead of him, then she saw the place where they first started. Discord noticed too and inched ahead a little more.
Pinkie let out a little yelp as she tripped over a rock. She tumbled ahead and soon Discord got caught up in her tumbling. They tumbled the rest of the way to the finish line and then collapsed on the grass, laughing. “I won!” Pinkie said between deep breaths.
“No, I…won!” Discord poked her shoulder and grinned mischievously.
“No…way! I…did!” she poked him back.
Discord smiled and looked up at the sky, “Tie... It was a tie.”
Pinkie grinned and looked up, too. “Hey, wanna try and spot little shapes in the clouds? I love that game!”
“Sure.” Discord answered. “I see…an Ursa Major!”
“I spy a cupcake!” Pinkie pointed. Discord squinted.
“How is that a cupcake?”
“Look. There’s the wrapping paper, and there’s the icing on top!” she explained, drawing a sort of invisible frame around the ‘cupcake’. Discord smiled.
“Yeah, I see it now. Hey, look! A gingerbread house!”
Pinkie giggled, “I love gingerbread houses! Oh, look, a licorice twist!” she gazed up at the awkwardly shaped cloud. Discord smiled.
“It sure does…wanna see something neat?” he smirked at her coolly. She nodded. Discord transformed into a draconiques again, “Ready?”
Pinkie had nervous look on her face. “What if somepony sees you?” she scanned the area.
“Aw, they won’t. And now, Pinkie…” he snapped his fingers and they were suddenly up in the sky. Walking on air. Pinkie gasped as she realized suddenly could fly! She had no wings, but she felt overjoyed about being up in the sky. Who needs a balloon when you have Discord? Pinkie grinned at him.
“This is so cool! Thank you so much!” she flew around him in circles. He chuckled.
“I knew you’d love it. But this isn’t all, my pink pal!” he took her hoof. “Watch this.” Suddenly they were flying together at top speed above Equestria. Pinkie oh’d and ah’d and suddenly she felt so excited she couldn’t help herself.
“I LOVE THIS! I LOVE YOU!” Pinkie suddenly felt really awkward. Discord stopped flying and turned to her with a huge blush. Pinkie blushed, too but didn’t say a word.
A small smile spread across Discord’s face and he chuckled softly. Pinkie was surprised.
“Sorry…I just…um…” Pinkie grinned nervously as she felt her blush deepen.
Discord smiled at her, “Don’t be…and I sort of…” he scratched his mane and said in a very small voice. “I love you, too.”
Pinkie felt a joy rise up within her and she hugged Discord tight, squealing. “You do!?”
Discord blushed and smiled at the same time, “...Yes…” Pinkie looked up at him with shining eyes and hugged him tighter.
“Eh…Pinkie” Discord said in an irritated voice “Little less tight, if you don’t mind…”
“Oops, sorry.” She said, letting go of him. He smiled at her.
“Did you wanna continue our fly?” he asked, blushing a tiny bit.
Pinkie nodded, “Sure! Let’s do it!” she grabbed his paw and he began to zoom foreword with her flying next to him. They flew over every single town but were especially careful around Canterlot. Pegasus patrolled the skies around that are but the two were able to slink by without causing any commotion. When they reached the grasslands outside of Ponyville, it was sunset and Pinkie smiled as she touched the ground. For the first time in hours began to experience gravity. She grinned up at Discord.
“Shall we go home?” he asked her. Pinkie nodded and started walking.
“I had a great time, Dissy.” She looked up at him with radiant eyes. He transformed into a pony as they got closer to Ponyville.
“I did, too.” He spread his wings, and gazed at Pinkie. The pink mare smiled and walked closer to him and he lowered his wing on her. Pinkie giggled and licked his cheek. He blushed and looked at her.
“Um…sorry, I was just um…” she was interrupted as Discord kissed her cheek. She widened her eyes at him and grinned. “Dissy…?”
“Yeah?”
“I love you…I really do.” Pinkie stared at the ground and tried to hide her blush.
Discord nuzzled her, “I love you too, Pinkie Pie.”
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A/N: Ok...this seriously made me DA'WWW of excessive amounts...but I feel it was necisary. Hope you all liked this one! :D
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Continue on with this and you will give me diabetes.
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SO CUTE!!!! EEEEE!!!!! THEY SAID IT!!!! YAY!!!!!
YAY!
Now for the others to find out who he is, so massive shitstorm appears!
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:In history, maybe!)
Dang, I thought my story would CURE diabetes...
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If your happy and you know it play the waiting game!
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Oh, yes...*puts on shades* It'll go down... (
MORE! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png
How do you pull chapters so quickly?
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You shall have more soon, my anticipating friend.
And honestly...I was a bit surprised at how I did that myself
This all seems so rushed. But oh well, it's cute.
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I'd be a beta reader myself..but my ideas tend to go on the crazy side of things, If you have ayfriends who are bronies then you can ask them for ideas on how to improve the story. i'll probably comment again once i read the most recent chapters.
ok um....you Pinkie's personality down pat. it's just that some of Discords lines don't seem to fit his character (again kinda OOC-out of character) and to me the friendship/romance seems to be moving a bit fast, in the space of a few days Discord is already reformed AND falling in love....just a bit unbelieveable. Maybe I'm just reading too much into the fic I apologise if i seem harsh, the idea is really great, but the story could be So much better, I'd suggest reading this. this story shows a lovely use of characterisation and a similar (kinda similar) plotline, you could take some cues from that, also stories such as 'My favourite element' and its sequals would a good place to start as well for inspiration.
I this is all i can offer without being to harsh, once again, sorry if i sound like a flamer I'm just a bit of a stick-in-the-mud when it comes to characterisation....
This is dispie fic is too adorable!!!
IM FANGIRLING. SCREW CELESTIA AND DISCORD, ITS PINKIE AND DISCORD ALL THE WAY!
The moment they said "The Words"...
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THAT'S RIGHT
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D'awwww
adorible
So it looks like they decided to go for a walk at the park or better yet a race which both of them were having fun they even took a break to look at the clouds and once again Discord uses powers to float up into the clouds and Pinkie Pie really enjoys it she even admitted how much she loves him and so he did as well how much he loves her as well and that's pretty cute