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CosmicAfro


Account is very much on a non-disclosed Hiatus :D TO THE MOON!

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This is a story about Nightmare Moon mooning ponies in Ponyville one night. Things quickly get out of hoof as the evening progresses.

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Nightmare Moon isn't actually evil, she's just an ass. Also, I reserve the right to my own first posts.

If you see an error or something that could have been worded better, don't say I missed something, please point it out. Until I figure out how to credit the amazing guy who edited this for me without it landing in the description upon opening the web page, he shall be credited here. Ambion, you're a boss.

Cheers
~Cosmic

Cleeeever. Very clever.

I am very happy with this.

Hmm.. it looks like Nightmare Moon is being..

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Cheeky.

YEAAAAHHH!!

“No! She’s crying because I was messing with her buns! NO! I mean! She had some buns in her oven and-“
Best. Line. Ever! :rainbowlaugh:
poor pinkie though :raritydespair:

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Because we've never heard of that pun before.

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Why thank you.

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For this, I am glad.

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Clever...

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I wouldn't worry too much about our friend Pinkie, there is plenty more in store. Have you noticed the Cutie Mark crusader tag?

:unsuresweetie: Uhh, Cosmic?

:trollestia:

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Ugh.. a plot joke?

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Your comment, awesome.

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Are you trying to say that this story has a...
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well-developed plot?

So...Nightmare Moon's going to moon somepony who has a sharp needle handy?

Did she lose some grey matter in her defeat or something? :facehoof:

Anyway, looking forward to where this goes. Nightmare's shenanigan isn't going to end well for anypony, herself included. And when it doesn't I shall laugh.

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M-may I borrow this picture for the header? I'm not sure how to change it... but this needs to be the one up there.

Seriously, where did you find this?

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I'd google it, and sure ill PM you the link

Oh dear...I think I know where this is going.

But has anyone bothered to tell Nightmare, (Or Ponyville for that matter) that because they rarely where cloths, they are able to see each other's backsides most of the time anyway?

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Nightmare Moon isn't actually evil, she's just an ass

Aw, another writer who has a more comedic take on the "Villains" it's nice to see some good old fashion comedy.
You've gained another follower :P

Much of the plot has yet to be eclipsed

Dat Plot? :D

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Personally, I just feel that Nightmare Moon was robbed of her victory. Celestia's strategy was purely lucky based as far as I'm concerned and maybe if Nightmare Moon had taken a more serious approach than moustache chopping and evil trees, it could have turned out differently. I just like giving her what she deserves.

Regardless, thanks for the follow and the comment!

I hope Nightmare knows what she is getting into...

Oh god, I hate using bold, but it turned out to be the best option. Please... do not hate me for it. I promise I looked into different methods, but none became known to me. If you have a suggestion, please let me know.

Mmm... cinnamon buns... wait WHAT?!

can't... stop... laughing.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

cheers:twilightsmile:

1441644 :P No complaints here. Worked fine for me.

So, Nightmare's plan is to use the giant version of herself to collectively moon the population of Ponyville? Most commendable.

This is entertaining. Please continue :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

I don't know about you guys, but when I think of Spike vomiting, I imagine a toilet bowl filled with soggy letters. I would have written that in, but it seemed too... well for a lack of a better word and the determination to find one, pointless to add.

I'm thinking of extending the story to beyond this original night. I mean... there are just so many unanswered questions. Like Fluttershy.

Cheers
~Cosmic

Well That escalated quickly.

Yeah no picture of that escalated thinga-ma-gick. Dunno how to post a pic here.:derpytongue2:

Here's a schematic for ya! My ass! :rainbowlaugh:

also have Nightmare Moon join in a threesome with Twilight and Luna. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png

One stallion from the crowd belted, “what the hell just happened!?”

You just got denied that's what. the hottest three mares in ponyville want nothing to do with stallions.

You know, I was kind of waiting for Nightmare to make a mistake and moon the wrong person...Say, the creepy shut-in stallion who lives on the outskirts of town.

The sight of Nightmare running for her life from a crazed maniac is rather humorous to me...

That was so silly it hurt and i wouldn't have it any other way. :pinkiecrazy:
Good stuff. :rainbowdetermined2:

That stallion at the end has my sympathies. I have no idea what the fuck I just read. Only that it was hilarious.

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This guy has the right idea about my fanfic.

Come on everypony! Do the Ellipses!

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1479665 *falls over, giggling* Alphabet Soup Vomit? SO WRONG.

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Not letters as in the building blocks of words, but letters as in parchment. I must admit, however, your idea is much more comical.

1479918 Not necessarily. Twilight was acting, NMM was under a modified Want It Need It spell, and Luna? I dunno. Even if they're into mares, there's always the chance they swing both ways.

1483133 true but still i find the colts reaction hilarious.:rainbowlaugh:

....Nightmare moon is best lesbian....no fucks about it:trollestia::eeyup::moustache:

Eeyup, that was unexpected, but completely satisfying. Looking forward to part 5 of this most amusing tale of tails :twilightsmile:

Good Goddess that was hilarious! I'll be watching.

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Grr. (I love you. This is awesome.)

1479665 Grar! (Please extend it! It was so awesome. I have a new-found love for NMM! :rainbowlaugh:

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