After delivering the "Chronicles of Starswirl" to Twilight, Princess Luna begins a letter to Princess Celestia discussing why the latter has been silent and sullen as of late. There is, apparently, much to discuss between the two.
Included is discussion on the forging of the Elements of Harmony. Artwork courtesy originally of Luna-Sedata of deviantart.com, but the account has since been deactivated.
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Interesting, good use of words, purpose is clear. Overall this is a pretty neat story; you have my thumbs up
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Thanks.
That was an enjoyable read, even if it took me hours to read it (my screen shows no comments or thumbs
). Overall I liked it, but it couldn't keep me awake as read it, but that's due to the nature of the story and there is no way to fix that without diminishing the overall impact it had.
Anyways, as I said, it was good and I can't wait for more from you.
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Thanks man.
As much as it maybe odd to say, this pacing and flow was designed that way for the most part. I wanted to experiment with a confessional piece, but also something slower. I wasn't entirely happy with it, but I couldn't get more without blowing it up. At least I found a cure of insomnia. 
Sup guys.
I've recently gone through a difficult period in my personal life and focused a bit more on poetry as a means to come to terms with decisions I've made. This is one of those end results.
It's funny how we speak such in absolutes, do the right things for the betterment of our lives, and act with honor in accordance with our station as human beings, but we still doubt those choices we made. For what its worth, if you've been in that position, there is nothing wrong with questioning yourself. How are we to measure those choices unless we question? Provided that action is just and pure, it is okay to forgive yourself for doing the right thing.
As always, stay safe.
ONWARD!