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I write horror, action, comedy, adventure and even clops. DON'T DM ME ABOUT ART COMMISSION, I'M OUT OF CASH. ALL SLOTS ARE LOCKED. I WILL BLOCK BOTS AND REPEAT OFFENDERS

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Wait... if it couldn't work with ponies. What makes Spike thinks it will work with griffins?

Unless, Rarity lied to Spike so she doesn't feel guilty in harvest Thunderlane's semen in part two

Okay, who is the petty bastard who thumbs down all my comments?! I could understand hating me or the story, but random people replying?! Really?

I do wonder, if this is just an excuse from Rarity to make a harem for Spike?

Any chance of Rarity and Gabby running into each other and getting into a fist fight over Spike

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Not originally part of the plan, but considering how conflicted the votes are getting for this one, If the people want it, I've got no problem throwing a possible third chapter in which two very pregnant bitches have a sex fight over their man.

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There is an excuse for something in here somewhere, not sure if its that, but for kinky noncheating/totally cheating sex, almost certainly.

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Definetly that, but if her excuse about having children were true, then she would have called Smolder of Ember instead, no Rarity is definetly onto something kinky that all parties will enjoy...

Exept maybe Thunderlane, but is best to not have him at all in this...

Unless it invole to a milking machine.

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Unless it invole to a milking machine.

Well, consider what the preview at the end implies...:pinkiecrazy:

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Also, meta wise I did consider Smolder or Ember for this. But to be frank, I ship Gabby and Rarity way harder with Spike. Their threesome relationship is OTP in my book. Heck, that whole episode is top-tier. I've even considered a few times doing a rewrite of the episode under the veins of a sex fight. Maybe next year, this month is already packed with good stuff for Gabby. The next two fics will be purely GabbyXSpike... with a bit of extra stuff for the Valentines post, check the schedule to see what I mean.

I really like this second part, Thunderlane is a very lucky and fiable stallion

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Yeah, at least his junk is reliable enough to satisfy two whole mares.

Shouldn't the tag be Open Relationship? Haven't read the fic yet, so YMMV.

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No, this is clearly at the angle of consenual cheating. Open relationships have no guilt involved.

I was slightly confused about how one connected to the other.

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Really, I just wanted to get both sides of the marriage in on the fun. Yes, both can be treated as standalone, but why waste time making a sequel post when I can just post it here?

her ears were flapping against the sides of her head.

Do...do griffons have ears? Ears that can flap, no less?:duck:

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Depends on how much you lean into the cat aspect of the griffin. I've seen plenty of artists give griffins the floppiest of ears. As for MLP-style griffins... No, I guess they don't. Huh, sorry. I'll just change that to floppy feather, or drop the sentence entirely. I just needed some emotional reaction.

But seriously, look at Greek Mythology's take, you telling those ears can't flop.
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Yeah, for Greek Mythology gryphons it makes sense, but after I read that sentence I literally paused and searched "MLP gabby" just to look if she had ears or not :rainbowlaugh:
Plus, I noticed that even though gryphons have bird heads, most of them have cat like ears, so it's a bit strange that MLP did not draw gryphons with ears.

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I know, really odd. Heck, even stranger when you realize that despite this fact, the MLP version of hippogriff does have ears.
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but after I read that sentence I literally paused and searched "MLP gabby" just to look if she had ears or not

LOL, I did the same damn thing after reading your comment, only to remember afterward I had her face as the cover. Curse our absent-mindedness.

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