How far would somepony go to defend their country? How much would they be willing to sacrifice to uphold the preservation of the lives of others? One pony, Shining Armor, finds out.
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StreakTheFox
Also known as HUE JACKMAN! And more recently, Blaasz. My twitter: https://twitter.com/Blaaszz
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wow... that is awesome
good show mate...
1368992
Did you really read the whole fic that fast?
1368993 not completely, just commented on the description, although i am reading it right now, and it is FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1368997
Well tell me what y'all think when yer done
1369036 i shall..... i read multiple fanfictions at a time though
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1369048 i know, i know. its a curse that is impossible to lift...
1369051
...righto.
Am looking forward to your opinion upon completion!
1369063 i will send you a pm with DL opinion as the subject upon completion
Is your brother all right? What happened? Was he stabbed?
My condolences, man. Be careful out there.
"Shining Armor approached her wife" Wait what?
that was gripping. amazingly awesome. i fucking loved it so much it is not even funny. R.I.P shining armor. you will be dearly missed.
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fuss need not be made over small error
Meet the Spy?
Slenderman, again? Nay, more TF2 I say.
Not bad, but it was full of errors. Here's a few:
Equals?
Should be fathers, seeing as you are talking about two dead guard's families.
Word repetition.
I might be wrong, but I'm pretty sure it's 'doth'.
Cadence capital missing.
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Thanks!
Damn Spies, and to think that I changed my Black Ops emblem from Shining's cutie mark to the NLR symbol a few days ago...
Nevertheless *salute*
Very well done, obviously there were some grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing bad enough to take me out of the story. It felt strained and urgent, what with Luna going off at that guard, and Shining's control of the situation reflects his character very well, in my opinion. You managed to tug on heartstrings at the end there, Shining's last thoughts were absolutely perfect, and the way you handled his realization that it was over was brilliant. As for the very end, my thoughts are with your brother and all his fellow soldiers on active duty, I'm glad to hear your brother is coming home safely, and I'm sure he'd be proud of this tribute to himself and his comrades. This was a good read, thanks for it.
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Suddenly, i lost all mortal feeling....
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YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS!! I DON'T CARE IF ITS A ONE-SHOT, MAKE.THAT.SPY. PAY!
(I'm getting way out of line.)
God damn.
Dem Feels Bra.
FUCK SPIES!
You do know that tragedy and sad are mutually exclusive, right?
I spent the better part of an hour searching for this. And Isay that it was time well spent. I wanted to read this again for a while but I never remember the name.it was just as good if not better than the first time I read it. and I can still say this like my first comment. Good show mate.
Not RED, not BLU, not Machine...what is he?
The feels, man. The feeeeeeeeels..........