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StreakTheFox


Also known as HUE JACKMAN!

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How far would somepony go to defend their country? How much would they be willing to sacrifice to uphold the preservation of the lives of others? One pony, Shining Armor, finds out.

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wow... that is awesome:rainbowderp:
good show mate...

1368992
Did you really read the whole fic that fast? :rainbowhuh:

1368993 not completely, just commented on the description, although i am reading it right now, and it is FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

1368997
Well tell me what y'all think when yer done :ajsmug:

1369036 i shall..... i read multiple fanfictions at a time though:applejackunsure:

1369048 i know, i know. its a curse that is impossible to lift...:applejackunsure:

1369051
...righto. :raritywink:

Am looking forward to your opinion upon completion!

1369063 i will send you a pm with DL opinion as the subject upon completion:twilightsmile:

Is your brother all right? What happened? Was he stabbed?
My condolences, man. Be careful out there.

"Shining Armor approached her wife" Wait what?

that was gripping. amazingly awesome. i fucking loved it so much it is not even funny. R.I.P shining armor. you will be dearly missed.:ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy:

1371041
fuss need not be made over small error

“INCOMING!” A unicorn guard yelled as he formed a force-field directly in front of his face.

Meet the Spy?

And he wore a suit and tie, it and the mask a gray color.”

Slenderman, again? Nay, more TF2 I say.

Not bad, but it was full of errors. Here's a few:

it only the situation wasn't so dire, and so dreadful...” =

Equals?

They both had families, kids even, all without a father now.

Should be fathers, seeing as you are talking about two dead guard's families.

they were paired up to watch each others' backs, but not even that could save them from being stabbed in the back, it seems.”

Word repetition.

Dost thou haveth enough troops to execute such a move?”

I might be wrong, but I'm pretty sure it's 'doth'.

“I don't want to go without you,” cadence whimpered,

Cadence capital missing.

Damn Spies, and to think that I changed my Black Ops emblem from Shining's cutie mark to the NLR symbol a few days ago... :ajsleepy:

Nevertheless *salute* :raritycry:

Very well done, obviously there were some grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing bad enough to take me out of the story. It felt strained and urgent, what with Luna going off at that guard, and Shining's control of the situation reflects his character very well, in my opinion. You managed to tug on heartstrings at the end there, Shining's last thoughts were absolutely perfect, and the way you handled his realization that it was over was brilliant. As for the very end, my thoughts are with your brother and all his fellow soldiers on active duty, I'm glad to hear your brother is coming home safely, and I'm sure he'd be proud of this tribute to himself and his comrades. This was a good read, thanks for it.

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Suddenly, i lost all mortal feeling....:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
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YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS!! I DON'T CARE IF ITS A ONE-SHOT, MAKE.THAT.SPY. PAY!
(I'm getting way out of line.)

God damn. :ajsleepy:

Dem Feels Bra.:raritydespair:

You do know that tragedy and sad are mutually exclusive, right? :facehoof:

I spent the better part of an hour searching for this. And Isay that it was time well spent. I wanted to read this again for a while but I never remember the name.it was just as good if not better than the first time I read it. and I can still say this like my first comment. Good show mate.

Not RED, not BLU, not Machine...what is he?

The feels, man. The feeeeeeeeels.......... :raritycry:

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