The Last Guardian, also known as the Guardian of Light, was part of the Guardians that protected Equestria from various events of turmoil. They were eternal, but they had to die someday. When Dewford Dawn dies, his name goes down as legend, but his legacy was forgotten. Now when the Elements of Harmony gather, he starts to wake from his slumber.
not bad its good
You've forgot OC tag.
Also you need to separate your dialogue and paragraphs to make it look nice. In other words, format it.
reformat. The story line is good, and so is most everything else, try separating the paragraph each time somepony speaks. You'll get a little less 'wall of texty' thing goin on
And that cliff hanger...
you must enjoy torture
Alrighty then, sorry for a forgotten tag and I'll try to reformat it.
last comment 49 weeks ago...is this story still alive?...if not please make it alive again
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I hope so too. High School takes a lot out of my time and I'm a Junior too, so SATS and of the such. BUT. EXPECT A RETURN SOON.