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Dreadwing45


I can come up with great ideas with stories an i seen all their episodes. I even can make their adventures more exciting.

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The G-Force scientists have repair the Dimension Gate and this time they plan to not rid themselves of Godzilla but rid of all Kaijus. Could riddin the Kaiju threat, once an for all.

But the weapon that was supposee to destroy them... was made to send them to a world where their fight will make the inhabitants bare witness.

The End or.... A New Beginning

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 352 )

Godzilla talking? really?

oh, and by the way, try starting a new sentence when someone else talks. like, for example, you wrote:
" Say it don't spray it. Okay Ya'll introduce myself now." the orange one said, but Godzilla was still not surprised they are not scared of him. " My name is Applebloom and these are my friends. The orange one is Scootaloo and the white one is Sweetie Belle." He then decides to befriend these creatures. " Very well Applebelle, Scootabloom, and Sweetieloo. I will trust you creatures." Applebloom was giggling, Godzilla had gotten their names mixed up, and corrected his mistakes. " No, silly its Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Try remembering it. You need help or something, cause you look like you got stung." said Applebloom.

better way to read it would be:
" Say it don't spray it. Okay Ya'll introduce myself now." the orange one said, but Godzilla was still not surprised they are not scared of him. " My name is Applebloom and these are my friends. The orange one is Scootaloo and the white one is Sweetie Belle."
He then decides to befriend these creatures. " Very well Applebelle, Scootabloom, and Sweetieloo. I will trust you creatures."
Applebloom was giggling, Godzilla had gotten their names mixed up, and corrected his mistakes. " No, silly its Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Try remembering it. You need help or something, cause you look like you got stung." said Applebloom.

Good lord, the spelling errors.

you need a editor and a proof-reader, cause i'll volunteer.

A crossover story thats not a mainstream shitty anime? God bless you!! I think this is the first time I read a FIM fanfic with Godzilla on it. And man, I love Godzilla XD

Kiryu had safeties put in to keep just THAT from happening, unless it comes back and starts to maul godzilla again, quote from the official wiki 'cyborg's own memories of when he was Godzilla were reawakened by the modern Godzilla's own roars...Kiryu received quite a few weapon upgrades in addition to new computer control software routines' so the original Godzilla isn't in total control of the robot any longer. I think you can make it canon by saying that the routine was jeapordized and breached, giving Godzilla control again

1378910 I love Godzilla too. I watched all of his movies and played his games.

1381972 yeah. proof-reading, spell-checking, things of that nature.

1382041 un... i'm not sure how it works. i think you e-mail the chapter to me before you put it on or something like that?

1382266 it's zachattack1285@yahoo.com . i also have a google account under the same name but let's keep it on the yahoo.

1383715 got it. you know, you don't have to put in the file. just copy and paste the chapter onto the email, then i copy and paste it onto microsoft word, do my magic, and do the same thing and send it back to you.

okay. so do i do this again or just leave it as it is

1384054 i'll edit it; spell check, proof-read, make sure it's good... maybe though in a few goodies of my own.

.1384054 nothing major to effect your story just a few... tweaks like music for fights and all that jazz.

You might want to think about an editor, I see multiple spelling errors through out the whole fic, Red words are the corrections. example:
G-Force was redesigning their Dimensional Gate, making it more powerful. A scientist, with glasses and black spiky hair, was looking at a picture of a woman holding a child. " That monster killed my wife and now it tried to kill my daughter. I pray to god that the Dimensional Gate will rid us from Godzilla's wrath." He put the picture away and told the others that the Dimensional Gate will be launched into space in two weeks.

P.S. Upon reading more of the fic I can say this: "you don't need to think about getting an editor, you absolutely have to." Not trying to be mean here, just giving some constructive criticism.

1385579 already on the editing job. i volunteered my services.

Well I just started an editing debate, but monsterlord18 wins.

1384284 I had that same idea. U can help out with that.

1387386 so, when do you post the revised chapters?

these are much better. anyone agree?

now, before you post chapter 3, send it to me so i can look it over and work my magic.

Bout, time people rememeber the king of the monsters! Very good introduction btw!

Finally, someone has done a Godzills/MLP story were he interacts with the ponies. Also i find it funny on how he is not as big as he used to be.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

1390838Thank you. I thought everyone would be interested to hear from their favorite monster come back and have him fight in a new world

A FiM crossover story that's not mixed with some shitty main stream anime or a main stream videogame franchise, but with the King of the Monster Godzilla?... GOD BLESS YOU!! :raritystarry:
It was really funny and entertaining to see Godzilla talking for once. And I'm looking foward to know what's gonna happen.

1411227 Yeah he has to start talking sometime. I thought it would be good to bring him back for we can make his name heard

Nice. I can't wait til when he meets RD. :pinkiehappy: There WILL be a fight.... please?

You're missing a lot of capital letters in narrative sentences (the ones where its not someone speaking) but besides that the chapter was great!

God dang it why are all other Godzilla fics more popular than mine! There are like 4 and mine has the least likes! yet when I stop writing it, people get mad... oh and I love this story, not sure on how you portray godzilla, but its still good.

1470953 Well I have thought about bring my favorite Monster back from the Land of Lost and have him walk among Equestria. Thank you for liking it.

A talent. "Um..." Destroying Cities. Fighting Monsters. Saving the Earth. Killing Humans. "Un... no, i do not."

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Just wait until Megaguirus shows up and starts terrorizing Ponyville
...or Gotengo is caught in the wormhole caused by DT and is sent there as well

I love this story, but where are the rest of the monsters.:twilightblush:

1475736 Megaguirus is in this story. So thats a surprise.

1475873 They are scattered all over Equestria. Hope that one of them dont do nothing stupid.

1475903 really? haha, I wonder if the ponies will have their ears be in extreme pain when she comes, that or unicorns have to deal with being unable to use magic and have a similar pain in the base of their horn

Mini Anguirus? Now we wait for the others!

oh god theirs more kiju :pinkiegasp:

1519672 All of Godzilla's friends and enemies are there. Yeah there are more Kijus

So...

All.. of his friends are here...

Destroyah? :fluttershysad:

...King Ghidora.....ooohhh snap

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