When Fluttershy finds Angel sporting a vest and pocket watch, she races after him into the Everfree Forest. And follows him down a hole at the base of a tree. Now finding herself in a world much different then home, will Fluttershy find her way back? Or is she doomed to wander around a world created from the confines of the Imagination...
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awesome!!!!!!!!!
i think that it would of sound better with pinkie as alice and fluttershy as the mad hatter ( or hatta in some verisons) becuase the mad hatter is based off the fact that hatters would be poisened by mercury cuasing extreme shyness and the wanting to not be noticed. but your way is fine to...
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Extreme Shyness? Odd, never knew that....
Derp on my part, I guess
Now invigorated by there was more creatures here, Fluttershy pushed herself though the tiny door, and what laid before her was a beautiful sight.
what?
That was really good! You're obviously not following the story in the exact same way, but I think that's okay. I kind of want to see Fluttershy's new adventure in wonderland. One point though, "Through the Looking Glass" starts in a garden. It bothered me that you ended there. I don't know why.