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Ever since he was exposed to Gamma Radiation, Bruce Banner has been seen as nothing but a mere monster. Constantly hunted and hated; his very existents is considered a threat to all of Humanity. But what if he wasn't around Humans? What if one day he found himself in another world entirely? Can Dr. Bruce Banner finally have what he has been searching for all these years; Peace and happiness? Or will his arrival cause chaos and bring nothing but destruction in his wake?

First Published
30th Sep 2012
Last Modified
27th Apr 2013
#1 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

This story has a lot of potential.  The spacing is a bit odd, might want to tweak it a bit.

#2 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

This has potential. Though I do wonder if this is going to end like Planet Hulk.

#3 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

Wow, it's ...it's...GREAT

You're lucky I like the hulk

#4 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

I like the concept, but the grammar and phrasing  could be better. I would be willing to proofread for you, if you would like.

#5 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·


Hi sorry lol, this is my first story so I am new to this. I would greatly appreciate any help you can offer ^_^

#6 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1361472 No need to apologize, grammar can be a pretty tough thing to understand, what with all the rules. How about you write out all your chapters in Google docs first, then send me the link? I can proofread, fix any errors, and give ideas for the story and send the edited copy back to you.

#7 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

Lets see. I have read MLP with Avengers and Iron Man. Now we need one where Wolverine is sent to Equestria. That will be as interesting as this.

#8 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·


Don't forget spider-mane.  :rainbowkiss:

#9 · 234w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·


Thanks haha, First time on this site and so far I have met a person willing to help me. I really appreciate this. How ill I keep in contact with you? Through FB, Here?

Send me a Private Message with a link to the new chapter, there should be a a little picture of an envelope beside my name in the comments. That is a Private Message button. Send me the link, and I'll edit it. Alternatively, if you go to my user page you will find another Private Message button there.

As for meeting someone willing to help so early on, that's what the brony community is all about. Love and tolerance.

>>1361496 And that story which I had Fav updated today didn't it, how did I forget that? Oh, and there is one which Dash is basically Superman type, it's heavily base off of that comic, but it different enough to be new. All that ones I mention is in my favorites somewhere if you want to read them.

I don't know much about the Hulk/Banner but from what I've seen he doesn't seem to be one who talks to himself like that and it struck my as a little awkward. I can't give you advice on exactly how to get around that because it all depends on your writing style. But this is a fairly small complaint so don't strain yourself if you don't want to.

Other then that, a few grammar errors (nothing significant) and a good story setup.

Hmmm, this actually look like an interesting Hulk in Equestria fic. Tracking for now. But yeah, you do need to work on the grammar and that can only be achieved by writing more chapters (and having a proofreader to help as well).

So...MOAR :flutterrage:


Thank you for your criticism. I really appreciate it. I need hardcore critics to tell me what I am doing wrong, so I can figure out how to make it better. Thank you sir ^_^


Thank you very much for the offer, I gladly accept any help you can provide for me. This is my first story so I kinda suck lol. I would appreciate your help sir ^_^

Planet Hulk...... oh my sweet Celestia's ample plot, what id this was the planet that Richards and the other members of the Iiluminati were aiming for in the first place, even not it would be a good marvel X0ver/ what if stories


This story has a lot of promise, but more than a few things are wrong with it. One thing would be the sudden change from first to third person while still focusing on Bruce. While not exactly wrong in any way, it isn't something that's popular and can easily confuse readers. There are random capitolizations here and there that just don't belong, which I've honestly had some issues with in the past, as well as a few grammar errors, namely some punctuation marks that just don't fit, and a lack of warning between character changes(again, nothing exactly wrong with that, but it can confuse or irritate some people). I know you already seem to have an editor, but I figure some constructive critisism never hurt anypony, and that I should throw in my two bits. I'll track this, and see where it goes. Good luck my friend, I have high hopes for this, and for you. Shit, you're doing better than I did when I first started out.

May the road rise to meet you, and the wind be at your back.


Professor Plum
Story Approver

Just checking the comments before a proper read, and I notice >>1361601>>1361622

Maybe have an internal monologue? That way whoever isn't in control can debate/advise the active personality? I must admit to a large amount of ignorance on the part of The Hulk.

Will try to review this in the morning, when I'm not dead on my feet.

~ScreenedPlum, TWE's Drunk Scotsman

Is this Post Avengers? Or is this just a Hulk Crossover?


If you want to try your luck with sure. I do have trouble writing as well (believe it or not) but I do have an eye in catching some errors (just not in my own :ajsleepy:) .  Just PM your story and I'll give it a look over. I'm not a expert in comics though mind you, just have a small interest in them.


You are freaking awesome thanks ^_^ I will try and improve :3


This is just a Hulk crossover. I would like the timeline to be kinda like After the events of World War Hulk. This is not a Planet Hulk fic lol


I hope you are really harsh with me, I would like to improve my story so I can better appeal to you, and the other readers. Thank you for taking the time to review my story so far sir.

inb4 hulk smash

hmmm...i like....alot.....can't wait to see where this goes....if you need any help coming up with ideas i'm game....its what i do best:pinkiehappy:

sooo....who's gonna make him mad first.....rainbow.....celestia....discord.....angel bunny...eeh we'll find out eventually ....

oh and btw


It's actually funny that you mention Angel Bunny. He's going to be an important character later ^_^

>>1361941 heh well then.....lucky guess i presume....seeing that fluttershy would be the most likely to calm him....but wow that was lucky

Aha! There's still time for me to say, "Inb4 featured" and jinx it >:D


No, I'm just kidding. Great story :twilightsmile:

...known as one of the most violent and powerful source...

Sources. Needs to be plural for it to make sense.

I like keep going

Shoot son, I was looking for a story like this months ago! FINALLY, THANK YOU! :pinkiehappy:

I lol'd at the ending.

Now for the intro of one of my favorite games of all time.

God help whoever hurts the CMC while Hulk is nearby. He will end them in messy, messy ways.

MORE HULK! :flutterrage:

Now this looks awesome! >:D

You ever read Hulk The End? I did. I half hope half fear that this will end something like it.

>>1362429:rainbowlaugh:nothing like killing npcs, that game is one of the sole reasons I haven't gotten rid of my ps2 yet, well, that and soul caliber:twilightsmile:

This story has some great potential, keep up the good work and try to make the chapters longer:twilightsheepish: I will be watching:pinkiehappy:


Thank you for the compliment. I am looking towards all harsh criticism. I really want to improve and make this story better for you the readers. This is my first story and I hope I can entertain you all. I am currently working on the next portion of the Story longer, more descriptive, and hopefully better ^_^

>>1363081don't worry:pinkiehappy:I have faith that you will be able to accomplish your desires:twilightsmile:

How come whenever I see the Hulk, I just think of this?


You Sir, you just made my night. Badass photo is awesome :pinkiehappy:

>>1363071 Well 360 can play original games. So I DUN NEED TO KEEP NOTHIN'! BWAHAHA

>>1363173I haven't gotten a 360 yet, I've been playing on pc an wii for like forever (not that pc gaming is bad, I just really miss Black Ops and MW3):twilightsmile:

#45 · 234w, 1d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

No joke, was just watching an Avengers clip earlier today featuring the beat-down the hulk gave to Loki and thought to myself "what if?"

Good times are here again. I hope you have some kind of conflict in your plot that the hulk can end violently.

i'm not good at pointing out mistakes due to brain auto-correct......but please do keep it up:pinkiehappy:

Cannot wait for the next part, you have a load of ways to start from

Hmm i can't tell from this if this is gonna be good or bad. I will give it a chance.

D'aww. Don't take this the wrong way but I want to give you a hug. Very rarely do authors make me feel this good for liking something.

As far as i see it there's no grammar-errors. I love this story and i hope that you'll keep up the good work.



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