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RunicTreetops


Hug your nearest alicorn.

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Celestia and Luna weren't always alicorn princesses. When the world needed them most, the alicorns came to be. But while the Royal Sisters have gone down in history as some of the greatest ponies Equestria has ever known, another was neglected. Forgotten. But what was Celestia to do? Alicorn or not, Luna was still just a child. Celestia was only one pony, and she was all Luna had. She had no choice but to focus on her sister during that turbulent time.

Even if it meant abandoning Opaline Arcana.

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the MLP series needs more 'Heroes creating villains' & 'The Pony race isn't always good'.

"The blame was my own. The punishment yours. The Harmony's silent today." - Celestia, during A Lullaby for a Princess.

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Yes. Heck take the most beloved princess Luna for example.

And given how Luna still became Nightmare Moon despite all Celestia's attention, I'd say she failed on both accounts.

Very nice one-shot. Made me feel pretty bad for Opaline.

A forgotten story

JD1
JD1 #6 · Jun 7th, 2023 · · ·

After what was revealed in Chapter 4, it's gonna make things very interesting. Especially the lore.

Wow, just wow. If this is true, then she is even more worse than Dumbledore. ( I don't personally hate the Harry Potter character. It's just I seen those Dumbledore-Bashing fan stories. )

Considering that Celestia not only screws the entirely of Equestria's future by not once, but TWICE ( With what happened to Luna/Nightmare Moon and Opaline )! I hope you're happy Celestia. :facehoof:

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It always demonstrated but never called out on it.

She needs to know how Celestia failed. No matter how good her intentions were, she failed. She failed to save her sister from becoming Nightmare Moon. She failed to consider Opaline's feelings all those years ago. She failed to even remember Opaline, let alone apologize to her. But most of all, she failed to embody the friendship that she so desperately tried to instill in others. Opaline may be the one causing the current fiasco, but it was Celestia who pushed her to do so. As such, she needs to tell Twilight that if Equestria should fall because of Opaline...

And add that one to villains that celestia made.

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Same for humans but we know that and try to do the right thing but sometimes it not enough.

Great job, I like how you made a believable reason for why Opaline acts the way she does. I do wonder if you will have something big like her talking over and usurping Dragon Lord Ember and becomes leader of the dragons with the intent of using them to help her conquer Equestria and then take their magic as well as all pony magic, it was stated in the show that dragon magic is on par with pony magic.

I also wrote a story about the new chapters. But because my language is not English, I translated with a translator. Can someone edit it for me?

This inadvertently spoiled the suprise of chapter 4 for me

Thanks Runic, now i don't need to watch that dumpster fire lmao.

Comment posted by davidjohn68 deleted Jul 21st, 2023
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