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Chrysalis made a mistake by not following the Evil Overlord list, though with modifications for changelings? I thnk theres not an immediate subdue and resource extraction entry?
If Excalibur is a Soul Blade, does that make it super effective against energy leeches like changelings, and cant be upgraded or altered due to having all its slots maxed?
Dun dun dun! Now presenting the one and only Caro Dragonborn. Vs Chrysalis of the Sisterhood Of Shadows. The prize? Tohro and fame.
Still a great story.
Was any one else hoping that Caro would join? Or am I just being a Brotherhood and Crysalsis Fanboy?
6579154 I don't think you want an answer to that question, love.
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Wait does that mean that you also wanted Carp to join them? Or that I don't want to know if I'm just a Brotherhood and Crysalsis Fanboy? I'm confused.
6580898 Honestly, if Chrysalis approached Caro before he had his revelation, odds are he would have asked to join.
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So, yeah just being a fanboy. Dammit! Would have loved to see the inner workings of the Sisterhood.
6577938 She'll be fine. This is Equestria's past, before Celestia and Luna came to power. She'll let the checklist kick her in the flank at a certain wedding (though, to be fair, she lost thanks to ex deus machina).
6584854 I didn't get Thuum.org until later, sorry.
Hey, Marik, Just letting you know, this is Mist, I am on a backup account since I cannot access my primary at this time, as I have to at least try to maintain my presence as much as possible.
To be honest, it was kind of hard to get into this story for me personally. It wasn't until Beak Falls Barrow that I really noticed the potential this story has to offer. I really like how you make us infer things from what we're reading and then take it in the opposite direction, like when Caro stabbed Shokenda in the back and she bled gold. Moments that have really stuck with me so far is the absolutely gruesome death of Celina, the sparing of Blackwings during battle, and shae's spark of emotional energy during the Gala. Tbh, I don't really have a reason to like Rosemary just yet as a character, and I don't feel like I knew clover enough to feel exactly what shae was feeling when she was talking about how she was her idol for years and then she became a villian. I really really like the character development; I don't really see what's wrong with them at first, then the flaw is spelled out for you when the oppertune moment comes. I find myself forgetting what the members of Dragonrein look like, due to lack of refreshing, which can be a pain sometimes (I actually made it all the way to Shae's and Caro's speech for the college thinking Shae had a sort of light rainbowy mane, finally looking back to see that her mane was actually black with a streak of white.) Of course this could be just the fact that this is on a fan fiction site, and most of the characters used in the books are the same ones used in the show so I can visualize them better in stories. To sum it all up, this story is very unique compared to the other novels and gems on this site. It has a lot of things that other stories just don't have, and lets not forget this is fucking skyrim we are talking about here! Skyrim has to be my favorite free-roaming, questing game out there, and you taking that and going off on your own creative escapade is just genius. Every character if filled to the brim, nobody feels hollow or fake, even the one-time characters are their own entity. It really makes the world you made come to life. I really hope some more chapters come out before i'm fully caught up with everybody, I would hate for this story to become someting like Vampony Chronicles, where the next chapter won't be uploaded until 2019. Don't get me wrong, I know writing a book is not only hard, but also time consuming. But it's just a hastle for me to get back into the book once i've been waiting for too long. What ends up happening most of the time is I forget what the story was about or major points beforehand and I have to be reminded or read the entire book again, which would just leave me unintrested in the book. Anyways, i'm glad you made this book just for the sake of our enjoyment. I know you aren't getting money for the production of this story, all you are getting is a job well done by some anon in the comments sections, with maybe possibly some people You know in person. And I thank you for that, I thank you for supporting a fandom that I hold most dear to, and I thank you for just having the skill and determination to make this masterpiece a reality. Goodnight...
My thoughts on this fantastic story:
- The plot twists always seem to come at the perfect moments
- I like that there are humorous moments sprinkled throughout; I do like all-dark stories, but a little bit of humor here and there is a nice change of pace
- Am I alone in thinking that this story sometimes feels a bit like Mad Max without motor vehicles, or am I just seeing things that really aren't there?
6651127 You're exactly what I needed. I promise, even though I take some time to create chapters these days, I do not intend on giving up.