Blaze and Halcyon are two Royal Bodyguards- the elite royal guards chosen to guard the princess's side. But will they be able to keep their love, and the princess together in one piece in the coming events? Take a look inside the lives of fire and ice, the two secondary characters in the first book of the 'Bounty Hunters' series!
A story taking place before the events of 'Bounty Hunters'. Read it here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50278/Bounty-Hunters
May contain blood and violence in action scenes
Chapters (6)
Heheh, that's pretty good.
Just a tip, but your setting seems to drag a lot to me. When I saw your first chapter being 2500+ words, I was expecting some more settings... You have three distinct action settings in chapter one. I was expecting like six or seven, since that's pretty much how I write stories.
I'm also working on a fimfic with an OC named Blaze! (partial reason why I checked this story) You can click my name to check it out.
Yes! A side story! I love these! Can't wait for the next updates! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks- I like writing my peaceful scenes in detail. It's often in the action scenes that I pick up the pace- for the sake of the readers, you read an action scene for the action not the scene. I'll check on your FiMFic later- once my Internet becomes stable. Thanks for dropping by!
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Absolutely.
I do understand that your characters were in peaceful situations. I guess I dont see em very often in my story, is all. Didn't mean to offend if I did.
Choppy Internet... Ugh, I know how u feel...
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Nah. All good. Not offended at all. In fact, I love the discussions and suggestions
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I just got another like on my story...
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Was that you?
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maybe
Cool story, I like it
Please continue the story! So Awesome!
I don't have a clue why the downvotes. That said try not to let them get to you, there are so many fics on this site it's amazing we find anything *Grins* My only critique is you tend to switch around with grammar a fair bit. Going from past to future tense I mean. If you'd like a hand I'm happy to assist.
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Thanks;)
Yeah... The tense thing always screws my brain. For some reason my brain is programmed to do that, and whenever it's correct I actually think it's wrong...
....did I accidentally write 'hand'
I don't think I did. Just often in a lot of scenes, especially fight scenes, they tend to be bipedal, otherwise I'm not sure why you ask
Oi! Where's the next chapter! You nugget