Twilight Sparkle was seven years old when she was saved by an angel, 10 years old when she first attempted to go grave robbing, and 13 years old when she successfully summoned her first demon.
Shining Armor was 13 years old when his sister was nearly killed, 16 years old when he caught his little sister's attempt at grave robbing, and 19 years old when his sister summoned a demon from the pits of hell.
Cadance was 13 years old when she met Shining Armor in detention, 16 years old when she tried to confess to Shining Armor, and 19 years old when her boyfriend's sister summons a demon.
Sunset Shimmer doesn't remember how old she is. She knows that she is the last demon, summoned by Twilight Sparkle to make a pact that will tear reality itself asunder.
They must somehow survive a world gone mad and each other.
I'm intrigued.
Also, Twiggles, unless the tropes of your world are different than usual, the easier magic is to learn, the more dangerous it is to actually use.
There is a slight flub where when Twilight is in the burning car she is 7 years old and then a few paragraphs later she is 10. Other than that I too am intrigued and want to see how you write Demon Shimmer when she appears.
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Thank you for pointing that out. I have fixed that mistake. Was throwing around numbers and had been changing them a few times must have missed that one.
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That is a fun trope to use regarding magic. Unfortunately Twilight is not that well-read at this point. Well, she is just on more "practical applications of magic."
Ah! This is a great start I’m excited to see how this story goes!
This is weird, very wonderfully weird in a very awesome way. I am very looking forward to where this goes as this version of Twilight is very awesome. Have a 👍
I truly am loving this, sad that Twilight has to face the fact that magic often comes with a price and this debt is probably going to be rough to swallow. Thankfully Cadence seems to be one of the three introduced of four main characters so she will likely be okay in some form or another.
I have a feeling that this is going to make Twilight really consider using magic again. Hopefully.
Interesting story. Added to read list.
This story is fascinating. I love the setup, I love the humor, I love "Mr. Bond" as a chemistry teacher's name, and I love how it teeters between serious and absurd. I've never seen a story like this, where Scitwi pursues magic with (almost) all the limitations of the human world, but now that I have, I really want to see it explored. I really hope you continue this, but if not, I loved it nonetheless.