A Daring Tradition

Daring Do learns why Rockhoof is not making a move on her.

It is up to her to claim him. In front of everypony, that is.

Written for the May Pairing Contest 2023

Now with a reading by StraightToThePointStudio

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Moproblems Moharmoney

Moproblems Moharmoney #1 · May 21st, 2023 · 5 · ·

Their relationship will be shiny and chrome!

That One Strange Fellow

That One Strange Fellow #2 · May 21st, 2023 · 2 · ·

Now to imagine her dragging him off-stage while the crowd is in stunned shock.

dunno

dunno #3 · May 21st, 2023 · 8 · ·

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And Luna confronting her sister afterwards, as she was told that this was not a thing anymore :)

Rego

Rego #4 · May 21st, 2023 · 1 · ·

His company felt natural to her, like a missing piece to a riddle she had been looking for without knowing it.

That's a really good line.

Also, I was wondering how this fic was going to stick it's landing with only 1K. Turns out very well.

dunno

dunno #5 · May 21st, 2023 · 2 · ·

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Thanks for the kind words!

I have to admit that I forced it a bit to be 1k. There's definitely potential to write it out (as so often). Like Sandbar's reaction a few rows further down. But I'm glad that I apparently managed to show a somewhat believable connection between the two.

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